Ironwing

Hello Trilobite! Pet question: Oh, ok. If you are not sure, i´ll add the pet now. Would be letdown if i cannot add a pet after the application is accepted. Speed question: Well, i´ve read speeds of Mach 4 and higher in some rps. But i am not sure about this velocity at all. Name question: What? My name is a problem? Aww.... I thought alot about the name. Can´t be helped, i will change that. But is it ok to have a nick name? Then i would delete the family name and change the "middle name" into a "nick name". Thanks for your hard work Trilobite. I´ll edit the app after i got your answer on this post. Edit: Added a pet, changed the names.

Hi everyone! I have some questions i´d like to ask. If i get a pet during a roleplay, can i add this to my bio if the application is already accepted? Or should i add something like that now? Also i want to know what speeds the pegasus ponies can fly? I didn´t find anything about it within the pegasus description.

I got your message Trilobite and tweaked the application. Your suggested fixes helped a lot! Thank you!

Hi SilverWisp! The answer to that question is simple: talent. Iron Wing has problems with concentrating on the possible magic abilities to manipulate the clouds. If you think about it, other ponys within MLP have problems too. Flutter Shy can fly, but not very good. As you can see in the episode "Hurricane Fluttershy" she is only able to get 2,3 wing power. Thats more within her physique though, but the average pegasus pony should be able to get to 7-8 wing power. Or compare Twilight Sparkles magical power with The Great and Powerful Trixie within the the episode "Boast Busters". Trixie just hasn´t the knowledge and talent of Twilight. So i thought about Iron Wing. Of course she can fly, sleep or stand on clouds, perhaps moving them a bit. But she lacks the talent of creating tornados, manipulating clouds to burst out thunders or rain and stuff like that.

Ok, i have finished the tweaking. I´ve marked this final. It´s ready for evaluation. Thanks for the help Trilobite!

Hello there! If you want to help me with the grammar and spelling stuff i would be happy! Thank you very much for the offer! Yes, i am still working on Iron Wing but there is not much to do. Just patching some descriptions and stuff like that. I also wanted to create a family picture if thats ok within an application. I think i´ll finish Iron within this day. Edit: Hey, i tweaked some details and created a new topic "Personality/Impression:" Now i have marked the app as FINAL.

Hi there! I am not an RP-Helper and i am not that experienced with critique. I´ve read your app and since you asked for a reply, i shall be the first one. I am not a native English speaker, hope that is ok for you. First of all, i like your character. But i think some details are missing or should get a better description. describe your motivation with more detail. Why exactly does Lonely Shadow want to hear the tunes of Mr. Colt-trane? What is his dream? Is there something else he wants to achieve? If he wants to hear the music of Mr. Colt-trane again, why won´t he go back to Fillydalphia? What is your characters relationship to Mr. Colt-trane? Was he like a friend? Or a father? How many years did your character spend on his side? If his motivation is to hear tunes from him why did he leave him? What does your character like or dislike? Is there something your character is very good at, or does he have any flaws? I read your story now, but i have not found anything that would describe your characters personality. Whats your character like? Is he friendly, hasty, social, couraged? How does your character react to something new or unexpected? If another pony would meet your character for the first time, what would be the first impression? If you don´t have a character picture, just go here and have fun: Pony Creator I hope that i could help you with some ideas. I don´t know how long it will take that a real rp-helper shows up because i´m waiting for one like you. ^^ Iron Wing

Hi there Cat! So you have learned German? Lets hear something! My fave genre of music? Hard to tell, really. Hmm... i like epic music, metal, some electronic and techno... good mix i think.

Thank you, hope to see a lot more interesting rp´s than on other sides. No, i don´t have a single friend that likes MLP. Um, i guess it was something like "awesome community"... ^^ Na, i googled "my little pony forum roleplay".

Well thank you! I try to train my english as good as possible.

Well, hello there. I am Iron Wing! I am just a little MLP fan that decided to do a bit roleplaying. Because i come from germany i don´t speak englisch that good, but i hope you will overlook that. I joined this side to have nice roleplaying experience, finding some friends and have a good time. I already wrote the application and hope everything is ok with that. Hope to see ya all around! Iron Wing