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The scarred part was referring to her dad's death. Unless that needs more clarification then okay, I will go do fix that.

APP STATUS: Done!

90. Your character does not have a dark past! Then, they don't go kill other ponies!

I've seen a lot of those OC's roll in on a G+ community. I really face palm both the critiques and submitters. Also,

91. Your pony doesn't have bat-wings, sharp teeth, snake eyes, or ram horns/horns in general! YOUR PONY IS A PONY FOR THE LOVE OF CELESTIA.

Oh gosh that thing!

My computer smelled sweet at first... but it was just the computer itself! Then I saw that before April Fools came so I'm just like.... well it wasn't a prank yet.......

Herro!

In my opinion I would leave out the Apple Family. It just makes it sounds like she is related to the Apples.

But then again, there was this user who has an OC from the Oranges. So I dunno. ((Well that was helpful.))

I don't think you have to be so detailed about her parents and how they met. This app is about your character!

But there's my thoughts on it. You are on the right path though! Good luck!

Three Cloud was just out of school. What a great day! He happily trotted down the alleyways of Canterlot with his little saddle bag. He was going to his most favorite place of all time, the library.

All the books he wanted to read, but sadly in a short amount of time. His parents were aware of him going to the library.... every day. They looked down upon on the idea of going to the library everyday. But hey, at least they knew where he was.

At the Canterlot Library, there were a lot of books there. Ranging from information books to the fiction books and to the easy books. Clouds spat on the ground, those were for little foals! Clouds loved the adventure fiction and the information books. They were his favorite! Maybe he can find some there!

After walking up the steps, Clouds opened the big doors to the vast lobby of books. This was his second time here and he totally forgot where the books he wanted where. He went down an alley way of books. He checked the covers of the books.

Reference... He thought. Three Cloud still didn't know where was the fiction section! He's going to be lost.... Oh no.... But wait, he's not a foal! Foals don't get lost! He kept his head high and went forward. More and more he got lost. He was nervous.

This Easter, my roommate's aunt unexpectedly gave me the shimmering "hair-standed" Twilight. No wings!

Sing for us Rainbow!

Ready for check!

((For Harrington))

"N-no!" Spin Art shouted. "Get away from meeeEEEEeeeee!" She was scrambling away and towards the black pavement. She cannot die like this at all! Spin tried to paw at the ground like her pony self, but these aren't hooves! What in the world?! Fly! ... Fly? Oh, Spin totally forgot at the moment that she had wings. She tried to fly, but it didn't seem like her wings were there. She patted her back for a second. NO. WINGS.

"Nooooooooooooooooooooo!"

It's not an April Fools joke in a way, (youtube kinda did it before) but rick rolling?

"N-no!" Jigsaw whimpered. "That c-can't be!" She tried to hold herself up. Jigsaw couldn't believe that she took the colt with the hat. His parents were so kind and nice and they trusted Jigsaw. This cannot process through her mind. Everything went so quickly. ((Or maybe because she wasn't speaking for how many posts? )) Once they realize that mare was going to get him, this could ruin her job forever.

[colour=#696969]"I have an idea. [/colour][colour=#696969]Listen, let's call her on her bluff. I have high doubts she would hurt the foal in any way. The most she would do is to maybe put obstacles in the way. If we show up and get close enough, we can just take the foal back. Everything will be good." [/colour]Time Spinner's words meant so much to her. Thank goodness that mare wasn't going to do anything! Jigsaw sighed impatiently. Alright, what now? Right, we're heading towards the hills, but how about the other foals?

"Everypony." She said. "I'm going to take these foals to the place where I am staying so my parents can watch them. Where is our meeting point?"

"Pretty much. It's an okay song....." Spin Art answered Doodle's question. "When's the tour starting? I'm kinda excited!"

I felt like the whole thing was slow or maybe the way they talked to each other wasn't like how they talked to each other in the actual show, what Phil said.

Troll cloud was not expected, therefore it was amazing. But what was the point of it? Hm, it's a troll cloud I mean c'mon!

Do you like pie?

Best pony must like pie?

Does that mean Soarin is best pony? Erm....

This is a bit off-topic, but I have to say that this website is the first to not actually deny an application. Usually on other roleplay forums or topics, moderators or original posters deny an application, and you would have to copy that whole application again and redo it.

It's just my opinion, but I don't think the RPH here would actually deny an application. The poster would probably lose confidence and be discouraged and instead prevent him from re-making the application.

I thought most forums used the ban hammer.

Really? Other RP sites I have been to only tell me to reedit my app. Oh well.

Ban hammer? I have heard of that. Never seen one before nor the banishment stamp. Ah I guess it's best not to see.

I have to say Lovinity 2.0, this is a great system on things. I would like to do this same system when I'm hosting my RP's.

Wait, so you mean for the RP itself? This is for the campers and possibly the staff to know who's who. If you are talking about the meeting, it's not that.

But if you mean you have an idea for your post, then post ahead!

But anyway, you are next in line.

17! ONE MOAR MINUTE!!!

http://flutteryay.com

My mum and I are going to get some pizza for just the fun not knowing something's happening.

I hope I'm going to watch it on time!!

"Huh? Oh, nothing." Jigsaw glanced at Time. "I thought she would be something horrendous that can take us, but I guess not! Ahahaha..." She chuckled nervously. But what could she be doing in the Everfree?

Okies!

Huh, I must not be following the thread or something.

[colour=#ff0000]"Oh yes! Sorry I forgot you, Maple, but thank goodness you just told me!"[/colour]

A few more trots until the fire bowl. The camp director took the team of staff to the back of the stage. The group walked and talked until they stopped and turned to the director who gave the directions. Floods of campers filled the seats ready for the introduction.

[colour=#ff0000]"So I'll give the introduction of camp and each one of you guys afterwards introduce yourselves, where you are from, and what job you have as a staff member sounds fair?"[/colour]

"Yes!" Jigsaw nodded with approval. Along with that Spin Art nodded wildly. Jigsaw glanced over her shoulder and gave her an odd look. Spin then slowly nodded.

"So... where are you from?" Spin began very slowly, since her introduction didn't give a lasting effect on Jigsaw. Hopefully, this tone of voice won't growl up a fight. Jigsaw looked back to her.

"Really I used to live in Ponyville, but until then I study at Stalliongrad University. But suddenly my family moved to Canterlot since my mum found a great job and so my little brother can study hard!" This made Jigsaw's eyes enlighten with happiness and joy. In her mind she can imagine the little mustard yellow colt making toys along with her dad. His happy face, then made her sad, but she hid it quickly before Spin Art saw. She was already missing her brother. Why didn't he come to camp this year? "Yeah, confusing. But where are you from?"

"Cloudsdale. In short, I lived there my whole life!" Spin Art lightly chuckled, holding back her wildness.

"Do you have any siblings?" Jigsaw wondered. Maybe, just maybe, babysit her sibling! But that family member could be just like her.... Nevermind....

"No... I live with my mum."

"Dad?"

"Uhhh...." Spin curled her ears. "He disappeared when I was little-"

"Sorry to hear that." Jigsaw added.

"Oh it's fine!" Spin gave her a little smile. "He's probably in the Wonderbolts or something. Someday, I'll be just like him so I can find him or be really famous so he can see me!"

"Waaaiiittt....." Jigsaw slowly started. "You're dad is a Wonderbolt? Which one?" Jigsaw wasn't a fan of the Wonderbolts, but surely they were fantastic flyers!

"Speed Cloud."

"Huh, never heard of him before." Jigsaw sighed. "Well I guess that's fine, but your a Wonderbolt offspring! You fly fast?"

[colour=#ff0000]"We're ready to begin!" [/colour]The camp director hushed everypony and went onto the stage.[colour=#ff0000]"Welcome campers to Camp Little Lake!" [/colour]He neighed into the mic. (Is there mics in WoE?) [colour=#ff0000]"Thank you for choosing this camp for this summer! Who's ready for this week?" [/colour]He yelled to give the command to them for enthusiasm. He waited until the roar died down. [colour=#ff0000]"I bet you guys are going to have a great summer. Simple rules or what I like to call them: the code... Have fun, never cross the fillies side and the colts side of cabins, and never go by the lake alone! We can all do that right? Now behind this stage are very cool ponies and griffons who make this camp amazing! You guys can come out! And what these guys are going to do, they are going to introduce themselves!"[/colour]

All of the staff streamed out behind the curtains. Spin Art surged into stage fright. Jigsaw didn't want to go first, but she had to do so anyways.

"Hi everypony!" She gave her best smile. "I'm Jigsaw, I'm from.... ah...." She couldn't decide from the three places she mentioned to Spin so she went with, "Stalliongrad! And I am a fillies counselor!" She kicked Spin and gave her a mocking look. "Your turn!" She hissed behind laughter.

"Uhm." Spin stuttered. "Heya! I'm Spin Art and I'm from Cloudsdale! Hehehe.... And I am your art instructor!"

Today I went into Hot Topic and there was MLP merch right in the entrance, I began screaming "PONY MERCH!"

There was this cute Derpy sling tote bag-a-ma-bob that I really liked. I kinda want to revamp my school lanyard with the pony one. There was the comic book with Trixie and the Ursa Major, (the latest one?) and I want to read it! I mean I haven't even touched the series yet! My mum is against me buying a lot of pony merch honestly....

Then across the store was Build-A-Bear. After reading EqD's post of RD and Pinkie being the plushies, I really wanted to see them! They weren't selling them but they were sitting behind the checkout counter. I began pointing at it behind the staff and I was so sure that they were thinking I was crazy.....

(tl;dr) I really want some money....

At first, I thought you were friends with Phil the Time Wizard on FB. O.o

Unless.....

"Welp!" Spin Art grinned. "I'm sure it's not going to be all that bad! It's just a rumor!" Spin turned to the new pony who entered the group. She smiled at her and told her. "Hi! What's your name? What'cha doing on this fine day?"

Roleplay Type: WoE

Name: Mended Heart (Sparkles)

Sex: Female

Age: Young mare (may act like a filly at times)

Species: Unicorn

Eye colour: Neon green, it doesn't glow but it is a bright lime green.

Coat: A rather odd kind of gray. It's like a murky dark colour after many uses of paint water. But in short, it looks like a really dark gray. Sometimes she wears a white cat beret with ears.

Mane/Tail: Carnation pink. Her mane has a punk-ish style to it. Her bangs covers her forehead and sweeps diagonally to the right when looking at her face. Her tail is similar. Tail is straight and in many layers.

Physique: Average sized pony by weight. But she is taller than the average pony.

Residence: Canterlot

Occupation: Romance novelist

Cutie Mark: Mended Heart was a late bloomer unlike her class. She got her cutie mark in her mid filly years. That made everypony have the urge to laugh at her and tease her about it.

There's this one stallion Sparkles really liked, but was much older. He was her good friend also. But the problem was he liked some other mare of his age. Mended Heart was heartbroken. But one day as they were hanging out, he asked what should he do to ask her? Mended suggested getting her favorite flowers and just be kind to her. So he did. That worked so the two were in a relationship. As long as Mended Hearts' friend was happy, she is happy no matter if he was with somepony else.

One day the two broke up. He went up to Mended Heart and told her everything. Clearly in the relationship there was a misunderstanding. Mended Heart said just to tell her what was going on. Suddenly the mare appeared to both of them, and Sparkle's friend told her everything. Everything got together and the misunderstanding were understood. This made Sparkles really happy, then she felt something different. The two couples saw her cutie mark: two broken pieces of a heart mended together.

History: After a tragic death to her dad, Mended Heart lived with her mum and her two older siblings, brother and sister, in Canterlot. To this day she deeply misses her dad. It was very hard for her family since they didn't have enough money but they managed through. Mended Heart was able to go to school, but at that time everyone made fun of her because she was poor and began calling her names. So she had a few friends. She even had a crush on him, (as in the cutie mark story). As school went on she was able to learn and go through school drama. She was able to write and make stories for her classmates. Then some of her friends were skateboarding one day and she wanted to try! She eventually got better at skateboarding. Mended Heart also tried to enter many contests in school, but mostly won in third place. She tried her best during her filly years. She didn't get the best grades, but tolerable enough.

When Mended Heart was able to take care of herself and was responsible, she lived in her own house. To this day she lives by herself in Canterlot writing love stories to those who want to waste their time. She started out with a small story that became grand in her mind. She sent it to many publishers but they denied it until one company loved it. More than several ponies loved it, even the Canterlot newspapers did an article on it and once everpony had laid eyes on it, they wanted to read it. Mostly everypony loved it. The book was called Pony Falls. Hopefully, she finds an important somepony and live with him forever and maybe a better life than before.

Character Summary: Mended Heart received the nickname "Sparkles" from her mum. When she was born, she was born under the twinkling stars and moon. The light reflected off of the gooey mess that gave her the look of sparkly. She hasn't known that by now, but her mum keeps that a secret. She honestly gets really annoyed when her siblings make fun of her nickname, because they know the reason behind it so there's a reason to laugh about it.

Mended Heart has many talents ranging from a person who knows who's the right somepony and how to deal with them to photography and to writing. Photography is just her hobby that passes the time. Being the love doctor helps her friends or others, she does this for free and does it for those who ask. But she's good at it. Her writing skills, well she needs the skill the most to live off her mortgage, survival, and for her mum.

Her goal in life is that there's somepony out there that wasn't hit by some carriage. She is on a journey to find him! She dreams that she lives in a mansion with him and have children with him. Pretty much have a good life. The reason she wants a guy in her life is because she is searching for a man in her life since her dad died. She also wants to find the greatest friends who will understand her and love her no matter who she is. Even if she claims lies about herself, they will be there.

Mended Heart loves a lot of things quite frankly. It ranges to ice cream (or anything sweet) to cats and to skateboarding. Skateboarding? Yes. Can't a mare like thrills? Oh and when it comes to stallions, she absolutely loves them! (If they are attractive of course). She loves the cool, rainy days after the hot sun. She also likes to bake and loves rock music. She also tends to dislike things also. She hates being tickled, ponies knowing her past, large crowds of ponies, and... Mondays.

Mended Heart is a pony who tends to be shy and socially awkward when it comes to ponies she doesn't know yet. But attractive stallions? She's flirting with them no matter who they are unless they're married. But once you get to know her she is a rambunctious mare to the point where she acts "cute" or like as a filly. She might act like an airhead sometimes. Some say she acts like a tomboy, some say she acts like a posh unicorn. She is both depending on the situation. When she is mad, she becomes a bit rampant. When she is sad, she hides in her room and becomes negative.

One thing that it notable is that she is very negative on things. Always finding the bad and stays with it.

What makes her so special as a friend? She is kind since being kind is the right thing to do. Her loyalty to her friends are unbreakable especially those who are really close, she knows that they too are special to her and they're hers! Somewhat selfish but she might share. If she shares you her past, she really trusts you. Honest? Depending on the situation. She's a bad liar, if she is lying she will laugh nervously.

She fears that the world is about to end after a horrible situation, nobody cares about her, and her dearest to her getting hurt.

Additional: Mended Heart has a pet cat. Her name is Shimmer and has a gray coat. She's there to help her with her issues and gets annoyed by Mended Heart a lot of the times.

It is a random gag that she "teleports" from random objects. i.e She randomly pops out of boxes. "Hey I found you! Oh-mi-gosh guess what!?"

Talks in a high pitched voice. Very odd to think about because she looks like she can have a deeper voice than her usual.