Gearlock

Ok that works!!!

So when does this start, and should I app up another OC?

Gearlock looked at Pocket as she said that truth or dare was worst must of the time. [colour=#daa520]"I don't know if hardcore truth or dare would be fun, but that may be because I have never played before." [/colour]He was about to give Pocket his named but waited till Flashbomb came over. [colour=#daa520]"My name is Crimson Tag, but my friends call me Gearlock. Your names Flashbomb right, and you are?" [/colour]He asked Flash to make sure he had his name right, and Pocket his her name. [colour=#daa520]"I really like this town so far, it has a green apple slushy." [/colour]Gear said with slightly more firmly then before. [colour=#daa520]'This isn't to hard. Making friends is easy.' [/colour]He thought to himself.

[colour=#daa520]"Oh great, I forgot how to small talk!' [/colour]Gear thought to himself before speaking. [colour=#daa520]"Blizzy, thats a nice name... So how are you injoying the trip so far?" [/colour]He asked nicely, if not a little akward. Gear quick took a sip of his slushy, while at the same time trying not to look shy, akward, and even more weird. [colour=#daa520]"I think its been slightly weird and a bit boring. I only say weird because of the bits and peices of the game of truth and dare that I happen to witness. Is truth or dare always 'like' that." [/colour]

(I was talking to Blizzy, FluttershyGrimshy OC. sorry for thr confusion. But you could still come to me and Blizzy.)

As Gearlock stood outside of the bus, drinking his slushy of course, he noticed that the filly that was 'jaming' to some music on the bus walked out of the store alone. Gear thought for a moment before he started walking over to the light blue filly. As he got closer he saw that her headphones were in and he could just hardly hear the music that played. [colour=#daa520]'Maybe this isn't a good idea... good.' [/colour]He thought, his main reason for going on this trip was to do things that he would never have time for during his training; plus he wanted to learn how to make friends. He taped the filly on the shoulder, and wait for her to beable to hear before he spoke. [colour=#daa520]"Hello, my name is Crimson Tag, but my friends call me Gearlock. What's your name?" [/colour]

Gearlock got off the bus and head in to the story. He know what he was buying and had no time to wait for everypony else to get in his way. He stoped in front of the slushy machine, and couldn't help but smile. He quick used his rust coloured magic to pick up a glass and put the lid on it. He then filled his cup with a green apple flavour, he took a sip and payed for it. Seeing the the other poines were not so ready to leave he chose to wait outside the bus.

[colour=#daa520]'Man this has been a boring trip so far. Not that I tryed to make it better or anything. I just wished I wasn't such a grim looked guy.' [/colour]He thought to himself. he know that his 'grim' look was his own doing, and he used it so that he didn't have to call himself shy.

Gear turn around just in time to see the two filly's kiss. His eyes widened in shock under his goggles. [colour=#daa520]'What the hay are they doing back there?' [/colour]He thought to himself sd he watch two more walk farther back in to the bus. He turned to face the seat in front of him. His mind trying to deside what on Equestria is going on back there. Seeing that there still had a bit of time before they would arvie at the '[ut stop' the teacher mentioned, he walked back to one of the only empty seats left on the bus.

Gear look towards the back of the bus where a few ponies were being loud. He wondered to himself about what was going on back there. He was goito talk to the two musicly inclined ponies but he didn't know a thing about music or headphones. He thought about moving back, but chose to watch from a far.

Unless you can correct me, I personally dislike the idea of cutie mark powers.

If youre referring to the very first episode of MLP, those weren't cutie mark powers; they were Elements of Harmony, which for now for this RP the elements are too over powering... Way too over powering.

Same with Discord episode, that was the Elements again, not cutie marks.

The idea of a maze to find and free the Filly sounds okay but not original; it sounds much alike Discord episode going through maze to get (supposedly get) the Elements.

I thank you for input though.

Now that you say it, it does look that way. But I think by cutie mark powers I think it meant more along the lines of the special tilent rather than super magic. Get what I am saying? I didn't know how to word it.

Let's see if this works better, again my OC, Darkness Eclipsed (http://www.canterlot...eclipsed-final/) and as for an idea I suggest, similar to first episode of MLP: FiM, that we use our Cutie mark "powers" to save the filly. as for the section involving my CT mark, i suggest a maze.

I like the Idea of a maze. And as for posting, I like the order thing, maybe changing it slightly as we learn how it works. I also wanted to say that focusing on the cutie marks sounds awesome, but who every becomes the 'maze master' should learn as much as they can about everybodys cutie marks so that the maze can have puzzles for everyone.

Yay!!!!

Name Crimson Tag aka Gearlock

I like the current idea.

Gear turned to look back out his window. He now had two options in his quest to learn about what its like to be one of the other races of pony. He could wait till they got to the gas station, or he could move towards the back of the bus and sit in one of the open seats. Desiding to just go ahead and move, he slowly and moved towards the back of the bus, trying not to get caught by the teacher or the driver. He took a seat by 2 others, one of them just ask the other about music.

Here is what you are missing love, I am was rping this to be in the series. So you hosting other things doesn't mean anything to those of us who were waiting for this to start, then got left behind/no one bothered to try to include, and last learn that its being caned. It leaves a sour taste in my mouth, and unfullfillment in my mind.

If you move have fun, good bye nice to have known you. But I think that we can get it to work here in FFA. Like QueenChrysalis747 said if we make rules that keep it stricked, and more canon like; plus have 2-3 people came up with the main idea per sode, it can work here. And you don't have to change your character to get in to WOE.

Thanks but no thanks. I was giddy about this one.

Well then count me out

Gear tuned to look back out the window. [colour=#DAA520]'That went no were fast.' [/colour]He thought to himself as the normal hum of the ponies behind him pick up. He thought about talking to the bus driver seeing that he sat behind him(her, does our bus driver have a gender?), but chose not to. He didn't want to be the reason the bus crashed. As he saw Cloudsdale in the distance he thought about what if felt like to fly, or not to have magic -even though his is very weak out side of metal work-.

Gear turned to look at the ponies on the bus again, he, for the first time he can remember, want to start a conversation with one of them; and he hope it would be a pegasus or a earth pony so he could ask them about their lack of magic or flying. Though his goggled covered eyes he scaned the young ones on the bus.

I wouldn't try for WOE. I did and now I willn't try again. Its more a stressfull then it should be. I tryed to get Hallo Ween, my other OC in to WOE and had to change a lot; but that's not a problem. The problem was that they wanted me to change my OC's name because of how it was 'not pony'. I fought them for a good chunck of time before I was threatined for beign mean. True story.

And I also say that you restart this here in Free for All. Its just seems like a better place for this type of thing. And MAKE SURE that the next time you start this you make a 'posting order' becuase like 4 or the rpers got left behind on like page 4.

Gear turned to look back at the back of the bus. He heard on of the ponies call out another. He wondered if a fight would break out, and if he would have to uses his magic to interven.

Gear didn't bother talking to the rest of the ponies on the bus. He just listened to the talking that took place behind him as the bus started. He kept his eyes out his window. He wasn't surpised that no one sat next to him, he didn't feel like talking but wouldn't reject it.

I feel like all the ideas and time I wasted for this was well worth getting left behind, thanks.

Crimson Tag was one of the last ponies to get on the bus. Seeing a good number of seats taken he chose to sit in the first seat he saw open, which was the one behind the bus driver. As he sat his eyes went to the window, his vision slightly darker due to the goggles on his face. [colour=#daa520]'This should be fun.' [/colour]He thought to himself as he listen to the slight chatter of the fillys behind him. He really was looking forward to this trip. He life was very boring, training and school, thats all he did.

NameCrimson Tag aka Gearlock

GenderBoy

RaceUnicorn

Looks Just a younger form of my profile pic. He has a grey coat with red markings in it. Black mane that ends in bright orange. His tail has a black coloured center outlined in orange. He always has on his goggles, and his white coat. Cutie Mark is a fan over a gear.

History Due to the nature of this Rp this is a 'reaged' history- Gearlock never had many friends or intrestes outside of metal, the object not the music. He don't see the point in having friends when he has everthing that he needs at home, or at the workshop of his master Sivergear. He just started wearing goggles due to the fact that he has came to age for his familys' curse to take affect.

Personaliy He is a very well mannered pony. He doesn't like to talk to others, but he will talk to you nicely if you talk to him or he needs to talk to you. He hates people that are rude. He carries himself with pride.

Anyother info needed you ask me, and I will tell.

I wouldn't mind being in this either... What if I was a teacher? Would that work? I had the idea of the typical mean teacher.

That wokrs perfectly. My next mission was searching for a teacher.

And Neo, your app is fine.

Deadpool...... That's was funny, but I don't think deadpool would work very well in this rp use some one else if you would. And neo your in. Just post a short app about the human version of your oc.