AirForceBrony

Go ahead and add branch of service in the affiliation part. And then fix the problems I listed up top!

Ok, there is one thing that needs to he added, and that's my fault. I need to know his Branch of service. His personality seems to be an add on to his history, so of you could please tailor that, that'd be great. One thing I noticed with your character's past, what dead end job? Because there aren't any real dead end jobs in the military. Also, I don't get the Nutella quote. Equestria doesn't have Nutella, so if you could clarify, please do. Hope I wasn't too strict! We'll look over it again once you've fixed these. :3

Steel decided to get part of their play set up so that they didnt have to work real hard on it later. "Well, lets get part of it outta the way and when scribble comes back, we'd just have to rehearse it. So, what play do you think we should do?" He asked Fluttershy.

Yay!!! Happy birthday!!! ^^ *squee*

PLEASE NOTE THE RULES BEFORE POSTING A CHARACTER!!!!! 1- There will be ZERO TOLERANCE for mature content. This includes, but not limited to, sexual themes, drug reference, alcohol use, excessive blood/gore and excessive language. 2- Please play fair! This is a PvP RP, and you WILL be battling other players. Please don't godmod or anything of the sort. This is a game for everyone to enjoy! 3- Play nice! This is everyone's game, degrading, harassing, or insulting another player WILL NOT be tolerated!!! 4- please limit yourself to THREE characters! More importantly.... HAVE FUN!!!!!!! It's been years since the elements of harmony have been used... About how long now? Ten? Twenty? I don't even remember... I was too young... However, thanks to the length of peace since their last use, we were finally able to make excellent advances in technology... We have discovered a new world... It seems to have life on it of some kind... But we are unsure. About two months ago, fire team Alpha was sent to this new world to have a look around... Some time later, their profiles read MIA... Or missing in action... Most fear they may have perished on this planet, however, The princesses beg to differ... And they sent their most elite team out to track down and recover them. My name is Sergeant Brave Heart, First Sergeant of the Misfit 1-3 Delta Force Squadron for the Royal Equestrian Army. While my team and I were briefed, we were instructed that some of these soldiers that were reported missing, in fact decided to inhabit this strange world and rebel against Equestria... If only the Elements of Harmony worked here... I didn't want to resort to possibly having to kill those I once called friend... However, they are the least of our problems... The creatures which originally inhabited this planet... Which we names Akrid, have been noted to be hostile, and will kill anything on sight. It seems we have our work cut out for us... We move out at 0000 hours... I'll miss my family... My friends... I'm sure my comrades will to... We're expecting this to escalate into a full scale war... "MISFIT 1-3, THIS IS MISFIT ACTUAL, HOW COPY?" "Misfit actual, this Misfit 1-3, we hear you loud and clearly, over." "MISFIT ACTUAL TO MISFIT 1-3, AFFIRMATIVE, WHAT IS YOUR CURRENT POSITION?" "Misfit 1-3 to Misfit actual. We're closing in on our LZ about ten klicks south of our position, and we'll be meeting up with friendly forces in about two Mikes." " MISFIT ACTUAL TO MISFIT 1-3. AFFIRMATIVE, EXPECT HOSTILE ACTIVITY, YOU ARE CURRENTLY IN FPCON CHARLIE ACTUAL, AND SUBJECT TO CHANGE, OVER." "Rodger that.... Keep your eyes peeled!" ------------------------------------------------ (Brief explaination of factions) ELF believes that Equestria had abandoned them on this desolate world, and have made their own organized form of government. Their leader has to be elected and is currently in debate. EAF The combined sister forces of Equestria, the Royal Equestrian Army, (REA) Royal Equestrian Air Force (REAF, made up of mostly unicorns for maintainers, and pegasi as pilots) the Equestrian Marine Corps, (EMC) And the Royal Equestrian Naval Fleet (RENF) Stationed on The desolate planet to rescue those who still have hope, and bring them home. Mostly a humanitarian mission. Rank Enlisted- the main backbone of the EAF, without them, there would be no one to maintain the air craft for the pegasi, to he the main fighting force, or to execute the mission. Officer- the main strategic part of the EAF. The officers consist of commanders which may take control of a unit, group, wing, squadron and so on. In some cases, may help with combat operations and other mission tasks, though only under certain circumstances. Races Unicorn- can use their magic to support the mission, unicorns in the REAF may use their magic to lift and move heavy tools and equipment required to maintain the aircraft. (HINT- very intellectual and make great officers and maintainers) Pegasus- skilled pilots and are the only ones capable of flight. They can fly with their wings for fast paced aerial combat, recon, or carry light objects for short distances, they may use aircraft for heavy or long distance cargo missions, bombing, transport, and so on. (HINT- not only are they skillful pilots, they are also very stealthy and are perfect for rescue operations) Earth Pony- mostly comprises the infantry, security forces, and ground vehicle operators of the EAF. (HINT- very skilled with combat and capable of going toe to toe with enemy forces, ideal race for fighting Akrid) ------------------------------------------------ (NOTE-- FIRST APPLICATIONS WILL BE ASSIGNED TO MISFIT 1-3 TO GET THINGS GOING!!!!!) Name: Age: (between 18-38, must be within rank specifications, and important to tell if one is superior to those of same rank. (DOB of character may be required.) Gender: (male/female) Species: (Pegasus, Earth Pony, Unicorn) Affiliation: (EAF [Equestrian Armed Forces] or ELF [Equestrian Liberation Front] please include Branch of Service!) Rank: (E1 to E9 for Enlisted service members. O1 to O10 for Officers) time in service (how long your character has been in the EAF) time in rank (how long your character has been the current rank) Squadron: (keep an eye when your character sheet when quoted to see what squadron your character will be assigned to. Who knows, you might end up working with a friend!) Mane/tail style mane/tail colour pelt colour eye colour Biography Personality

(Sorry about the absence... My Internet died...) Steel smiled and waited for scribble to return. (My bad. ^_^|| )

"Alright class, now what I'd like for you all to do is divide into groups and decide which part of which play you all will recite together!" Ms. Cheerilee said, trying to make the subject a little more interesting than it was... "Hey, Fluttershy, Scribble, you two wanna start a group with me?" Steel asked with a warm chuckle.

(Wait, I thought I changed that. Class hasn't let out just yet scribble! XD )

"You'll pay for that, dearly..." Blue blood stormed out to tell the principal everything.

"I told you, I am not running with these ruffians, and I am NOT receiving a failing grade. Do you know who you're TALKING TO?" Blue blood scolded.

Blue blood stayed where he was and walked off of the track.

Blue blood turned his nose up. "I am NOT running with these RUFFIANS!!!" he snorted.

(Oh, sorry. Editing! ^_^|| )

(Oh, my bad. lol, forgot you do it that way. XD) Later into the lecture, cheerilee looked back and sighed. "Snails, wake up." "Aah! Wha?" He asked as he looked around, "I wanna see you after class." "Awww... Darn..." He growled to himself, snails snickering at him "You too snails." "Darn it..." Snails growled, then cheerilee proceeded with class. Meanwhile, during streches in gymclass, Blue blood glared over at Winter, still mad about earlier. (Did she apologize for bumping into him?)

(Yes, however they're studying everything Shakespeare.) He smiled as he returned to fiddling with his hands. Listening to Ms. Cheerilee's lecture.

"Very good Fluttershy!" Cheerilee squeaks in joy. As she goes back to teaching, steel shyly looks over to Fluttershy. "Good job." He said with a warm smile and blush.

"Well, if something's bothering you, please let me know." Ms. cheerilee said, "anyway, can you give me a brief description of Romeo and Juliet?" She asked.

"Hm? Oh, thank you for asking! Later on, we'll do a review that the whole class will participate in!" She said, then she began teaching the class. About midway in, she stopped, "is there something wrong Fluttershy? You haven't said anything at all." She asked.

(As many as we can! unless they're already taken of course. Mostly because it's low traffic right now, and we do that to help keep the flow going.)

(Haha got it.) "That was wonderful!" Cheerilee said happily, "today we'll start off with a lesson on William Shakespeare, does anyone know who he is?" Steel raised his hand, "yes Steel Soul?" "He was a famous writer in old English times. He is well known for his plays Macbeth, Romeo and Juliet and so on." He said. "Great job steel!" She said in amazement, it was shocking to see someone from a foreign country know exactly who Shakespeare was.

((Lol that totally isn't a drug reference. XD)

(Yes it does! ^^ doin' great!) Steel looked back down, blushing as he fiddled with his hands a little and then the bell rang. "Alright class, welcome, we have a new student today, so Random Scribble, if you will stand up and introduce yourself please?" She smiled.

"Yes, she is~" steel chuckled, then he looked over go see who was sitting next to him, "oh, hey Fluttershy. I got a good deal of those fliers handed out already." He chuckles warmly, "I fact, I just gave one to scribble here!"

((Probably bench press. Because of his cutie mark. X3)) "Hello class." Miss cheerilee walked into the class, setting her bag down on the table, looking at the clock, "you still have about two minutes, so please, do what you need, it's your time." She said with a smile.

(Dont know his name sadly. but he would be an EPIC choice! XD YEEEAAHHH!!!! :3)