jac600

bronzeshine thinks to himself. this is not worth my time, not wile bounty hunters are looking for me. " sorry come back when you have something I can use. " bronzeshine starts flying away when he sees police/guards come in investigating the chase. bronzeshine dives off his perch and lands behind the minotaur hiding from the fuzz. " if you can get me out of here I will do whatever you want. " sincerely he says " I swear. "

bronze shine ( at the time ) was a very selfish pony. " could you get me out of town? " said bronzeshine as he saw his train leave.

hmm a business proposition. thought bronzeshine, he wanted to escape but might as well pull off one more job first. " what's in it for me? "

bronzeshine vaguely heard the minotaur ask for his help, so he stood on a gargoyle and said. " what do you need!? "

" go away! " said bronzeshine as he picked up speed. He wasn't the fastest flyer. Only able to go twice as fast as the average pony could run. But years of being a theif have taught him tricks. He reaches into his saddle bag and drops a bottle of oil in the minitours path. Hoping to slip him up.

" oh come on! " bronze shine started flying strait up. there were way more Pegasus bounty hunters than earth ponies, but it would offer temporary respite from the Minotaur. He begins a slow accent as he was weighed down with two satchel bags of stolen goods.

"hmmmm. " said bronzeshine as he leaned off the roof to get a look at the pony outside the door. " Holy! " bronzeshine clams a hoof over his mouth. thinking fast bronzeshine sticks his head inside the window he slipped out of. " HELP! FIRE! " then quickly but quietly he peeks over the roof one more time to see how the minotaur reacts.

bronzeshines stays in the bathroom for a while, then even longer, and then longer than that. odds are he is not coming out. unknown to the minotaur, bronze was up on the roof.

( what does he look like? is he cleary a bounty hunter, or is he dressed subtle? )

bronzeshine wipes some sweat from his brow. " come on bronzeshine your safe. " he checks his satchel bags and is relieved to see all of his stolen loot. then he walks into the bathroom.

( this takes place a few years in the past. your character does not need to be a bounty hunter, they could help him escape, be after his loot, or have alternative reasons for catching him. ) bronzeshine stood just outside the railroad tracks. nervously tapping his hooves. he was a wanted pony, the reward for his capture was 10,000 bits. he had been all over equestria, taking things that didn't belong to him. all he wanted to do was to get out of the desert town and travel to another place, and live off of his earnings. little did he know that sompony wanted to bring him in...

" yeah good luck with that. " wispering can be heard from behind the door.

" good luck! This door is made out of iron bark. I got it locked up titer than a dragons den. "

the doorman slams the door and the sound of locks locking can be heard. " one at a time or no business! no exceptions! "

when ruby approaches he sees a unfamiliar pony talking to a doorman. ( that pony was swift but he had no way of knowing. )

" alright welcome to our smuggling station. what do you need? " the voice came from a male pony.

" what's the password? "

she fly's very high and far to a mountain cottage on the edge of town.

bronzeshine bucked and kicked in the burlap sack to no avail. he just couldn't get any leverage. the Pegasus pony was clearly the leader of the pack as she was a far better flyer than the zombie pony. once she shakes swift, she drops another note on his head. " the payment has gone up, it will now cost 25,000 bits for you to see your friend again. you have 12 hours or he gets it! "

the criminals in the room provide little resistance as they were far from an organized squadron. bronzeshine however almost has a hart attack as the room was dimly lit when swift entered. he jumps back on the chair and it brakes. the handles still tied to him he try's to run, but he was actually pretty messed up from the fight. he makes it a full 5 feet before a female Pegasus shoves him into a burlap sack and runs. as soon as she is out of the building she fly's off with him.

bronzeshine was tied to a chair. he fakes weakness. " I have a concussion. if you give me that white potion in my bag it will heal me. " he does a good job of it to. crossing his eyes and saying his lines very slurred.

( could you say that again? ) bronzeshine talks to john. " I wouldn't have you do anything you couldn't handle. but I need someone to run errands. you saw how bad I was at hauling iron!"

( I'd prefer it if you chased after the pony's without seeing bronzeshine nocked out. ohh and take your time! ) a few hours later a letter arrives at the hotel room. it says bring 10,000 bits to the drunken stalion tavern. or you will never see your mage again!

bronzeshines head perks up. "I'm always looking for help at my smithy. first months free room and board."

" hey I happen to like hay. oh well get used to eating vegetables cause everyone here is a herbivore. so were will you be staying now that your here?"