Kendrick Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 I'm not sure if this will work since I don't know exactly how FIMFiction works, But here is the link to the first thing I have written for the Ponyverse.http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39704/1/The-Twilight-Years/This is a basic stub of the story in my head. It's mainly to get the notion out and on "paper."If I feel moved I may expand it and write the whole story. Feedback welcome.~if you don't mind that is...~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick Posted July 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 Added a bit more to it. Trying to decide if I should continue to add letters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kirby163 Posted July 25, 2012 Report Share Posted July 25, 2012 I hope you do continue this story, I am enjoying it so far! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick Posted July 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Thanks Kirby!Well I made my first submission to EQD.Wish me luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Han Valen Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 I've just finished reading it, and it's an intriguing concept. It's easy to read, and for the most part understandable once the reader gets used the body/character switching between the three main cast members of this fic.With that being said, it still is confusing sometimes, even if one knows who is who. But with three characters all in different places, it's difficult to write that in a way that's mostly comprehensive, so I won't harp on it too much.Like I said, it takes a sort of 'learning curve' to read this story. Once that's overcome, it becomes an enjoyable read that's easy to get hooked onto. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick Posted August 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2012 Just added a new chapter. 9 so far. I have the "base" chapters for everyone but Fluttershy done. I hope I'm doing the Mane 6 characters justice. I expected Rarity to be the hardest but she didn't seem to be (if I got her right). Applejack still holds the lead by a wide margin of having been the hardest to write for. Fluttershy may be a challenge too. She is so often subject to stereotyping.We'll see. I hope the ponies tell me where this is heading soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FermataTheBasse Posted August 18, 2012 Report Share Posted August 18, 2012 Added to read list. Should I post y opinions on FiMFiction or here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick Posted August 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2012 Added to read list. Should I post y opinions on FiMFiction or here?Whichever works better for you. I appreciate the read! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FermataTheBasse Posted August 19, 2012 Report Share Posted August 19, 2012 Got through 3 chapters so far. The idea's pretty neat, and the writing's good as far as I can see. ETA on the next update? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick Posted August 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2012 Posted it last night. Probably do another one in a day or two.I don't think I'm happy with Rarity. I couldn't keep her from seeming... off.Trying to get a baseline for her, even going so far as to get on YouTube and watch clips. Her reactions are just so all over the map that I can't pin down what she would do. There seems to be a huge variation between Rarity in S1 and in S2 a lot of the time too. *sigh* I may make a thread on her to see if it's just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FermataTheBasse Posted August 21, 2012 Report Share Posted August 21, 2012 And I was just in that thread.As I said, characterization is semi amorphous for me. It has to be, or I'd get angry with fanfic very easily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendrick Posted August 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2012 Well, I found a way to wrap it up. I don't really feel like I did the mane 6 true justice, but I gave it what I had and that story is done. 14 chapters, 20K words.Now to figure out what to do next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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