MidnightBlackhorn Posted September 25, 2012 Report Share Posted September 25, 2012 (edited) Roleplay Type:FIM/Show roleplayName:Midnight BlackhornSex: MaleAge: StallionSpecies: UnicornCoat colour: Black/PurpleMane/Tail/Markings colour&Style: Mane/Tail are black with redEye colour: 0000CC (Blue)Cutie Mark: PencilPhysique:Medium height, slightly muscular buildOrigin: StalliongradOccupation: Writer/TravelerMotivation: Midnight has always loved writing and reading. From a young age he would write his own one or two paged short stories. He got his cutie mark when he turned in his first short story in school. He wishes to be a famous writer.Likes: Reading, Writing, music, being with friends, and cooking (even though he is bad at it)Dislikes: Small spaces, caves, being in a crowded room, math, bananas, DoctorsCutie Mark Story: When assigned a creative writing piece in school, Midnight was a little skeptical about it. At the time, he wasn't big into writing, so he took it with a grain of salt. His teacher said it was due in 1 week. Midnight waited until the last minute, and failed the assignment. His teacher told him he had 1 week to make up the assignment, or the zero would stay. Midnight tried again, this time starting the day he got it. As he was writing, he had a sudden moment of inspiration, and started writing almost nonstop for the whole week. He turned it in to his teacher on the new due date, and at first, his teacher thought someone else had written it. After a few minutes of arguing, Midnight proved he wrote it, and received full credit, plus some extra. He then saw his teacher smile widely. "What?" he asked. His teacher told him to go look in the bathroom mirror, and sure enough, there it was. His brand new pencil cutie mark. As a reward for getting his cutie mark, his parents adopted a puppy, later to become Swiftrunner, Midnight's loyal pet and companion.Character Summary: Midnight Blackhorn is a traveling writer from Stalliongrad with his dog Swiftrunner. They travel from town to town, searching for inspiration for his stories. He has been writing ever since he was a foal. His teacher in school always made his students write reports, essays, basically anything. One day however, Midnight's teacher assigned a creative writing piece . Midnight had a lot of fun writing that story; by the time he was finished, it was 15 pages long, his longest piece ever. It was about a knight who went on adventures all through equestria, like he dreamed to do. He got his cutie mark when he turned the story in, finally realizing that was his passion, his talent, and a really good way to kill some time. He is not famous by any means, but he wishes to be one day. A litlle known fact about him is that he is afraid of doctors, due to a mishap with an immunization needle when he was a foal. Midnight's parents always hoped he'd be good at magic, or athletic, however magic and sports have never been something he was good at, but his parents have supported him every step of the way. Midnight was an only child, but his 2 best friends, a DJ and an aspiring actor are as close to him as any brother and sister could be, along with his canine companion Swiftrunner. He tries to be modest, but in truth he is quite arrogant, especially around his friends. Currently he wants to write a story about the legendary "Elements of Harmony". After all, saving Equestria 3 times would give a pony some good story-fodder, would it not? He hopes to stop by in Ponyville sometime and meet them (that and he also heard that Sugercube Corner's muffins are fantastic). Pets: SwiftrunnerRP Type: [colour=#282828]ManeRP[/colour]Name: [colour=#282828]Swiftrunner[/colour]Sex: [colour=#282828]Male[/colour]Age: [colour=#282828]Adolescent[/colour]Species: [colour=#282828]Dog[/colour]Eye colour:[colour=#282828] Icy Blue [/colour][colour=#AFEEEE]Like This[/colour] Coat colour: [colour=#282828]Chocolate brown with grey patches around the forehead and rib areas.[/colour]Tail: [colour=#282828]Long and black[/colour]Physique:[colour=#282828] Muscular[/colour]Occupation: [colour=#282828]Pet[/colour]History: [colour=#282828]Midnight's pet and companion, Swiftrunner has been with Midnight since he was born.[/colour]Character Summary: [colour=#282828]Swiftrunner enjoys playing outside, just like any other dog. He is very protective of his property and home, especially with strangers. He enjoys traveling with Midnight, and one of his favorite things to do is run. From this, he got his name. He dislikes vegetables, but does eat fruit.[/colour][colour=#282828][/colour] Edited December 8, 2012 by MidnightBlackhorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlisonRose Posted September 26, 2012 Report Share Posted September 26, 2012 Hey there Midnight, just wanted to let you know that you have the same app also posted here:http://www.canterlot.com/topic/11864-midnight-blackhorn/Which instance of the app are you going to keep?And from now on please just edit the original post instead of making a new topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted September 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2012 Sorry. This one btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlisonRose Posted September 27, 2012 Report Share Posted September 27, 2012 In this app I notice that you have a few pony names in the Character Summary area.It would be really cool if you could remove the names and just state "His DJ friend" or something of the sort.In other news you use a lot of side descriptions (Like this) and I was wondering if you could incorporate them somehow into the app itself and not just have them being side notes?Also any more info on the pony would be amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted September 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2012 Fixed the name thing. Could you possibly clarify as to what you meant by the side note thing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlisonRose Posted September 27, 2012 Report Share Posted September 27, 2012 " or athletic (he is terrible at both) " The part there that is in the (brackets) is a side note, I was hoping that you could work and move them into the actual description. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted September 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2012 " or athletic (he is terrible at both) " The part there that is in the (brackets) is a side note, I was hoping that you could work and move them into the actual description.Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosewind Posted October 3, 2012 Report Share Posted October 3, 2012 How are things coming along with this application? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted October 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2012 *shrug* I think it's finished Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted October 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2012 So is this being reviewed? what's goin on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlisonRose Posted October 9, 2012 Report Share Posted October 9, 2012 I'm sorry I've been very busy lately, but from what I see you have done some work on the app and while I would like to tell you that all the grass is greener on the other side this app still needs a lot of attention.Keep at it and try and give us more information about your pony's history and more of a back story about how they got their cutie mark and why it is so significant to them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosewind Posted October 14, 2012 Report Share Posted October 14, 2012 Any progress? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted October 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 Any progress?I do not know what to change guess I'm stuck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted October 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2012 Any advice, Alison? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlisonRose Posted October 17, 2012 Report Share Posted October 17, 2012 How about expanding more on your characters writing ability? Such as maybe any books he had written or some stories that he wrote. Also a more descriptive Cutie Mark Story would be amazing if you could muster it up.Other then a few nit picky things the app over-all is looking good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted October 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2012 (edited) Thanks Alison! On my mobile ATM but next time im on a computer, ill take care of it. EDIT: Stated what the story was about. Also added that he wants to meet the Elements of harmony (and get a muffin) EDIT: Added a reason as to why he is afraid of doctorsEDIT: Added a full fledged story for his mark Edited October 19, 2012 by MidnightBlackhorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted October 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2012 Okay, I did a few updates on this. How's it lookin? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlisonRose Posted October 20, 2012 Report Share Posted October 20, 2012 Looks good to me =DNow a SRP has to look at it, but don't worry with all the pushing that I did I am sure this app will get through! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted October 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2012 Thanks Alison Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted October 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 So what is the status on this? Not trying to be pushy just exited :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlisonRose Posted October 22, 2012 Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 You'll have to wait until a SRPH looks at the app, I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted October 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 Oooooh okay XD thanks Ali Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted October 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2012 So, when is somepony going to get back to me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RarityDash Posted October 26, 2012 Report Share Posted October 26, 2012 Heh... everything here checks out with me... so: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidnightBlackhorn Posted October 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2012 YAY!!Thank You 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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