CobaltFl4sh Posted May 19, 2013 Report Share Posted May 19, 2013 *Constructive criticism, please!*Roleplay Type: Crossover, Free For AllName: Cobalt FlashSex: MaleAge: ColtSpecies: UnicornEye colour: GreenCoat: BlueMane/Tail: Messy mane, orange with yellow at the tips, reaching mid-neck in length. Tail is also left at minimal condition, also yellow tipped.Physique: Thin, very mare-like body.Residence: Mid-condition cottage in Ponyville, near Everfree Forest.Occupation: Lunar guard (In training)Cutie Mark: Six-tipped yellow star outlined in orange. Gained after stopping a criminal who was robbing a local corner store.History: Cobalt was born an adventurous soul in the cold, uneventful city of Vanhoover. Cobalt was also gifted with the ability to perform the advanced magical art of instant teleportation without trouble, which allowed Cobalt to jump from point A to point B in a... "flash", as long as point B was within about a ten meter radius. One day, as a young foal, Cobalt went into the street unattended, of course, in search of adventure... but he got more than he bargained for. As Cobalt scanned the streets, he spotted a local corner store being robbed by a masked earth pony colt. In a nutshell, Cobalt, using his instant teleportation to his advantage, stopped the criminal, earning him his cutie mark. Years later, Cobalt graduated from magic school and moved to Ponyville where he would apply to become a lunar guard. And that's where he is today...Character Summary: Cobalt is an adventurous soul, always aiming to be the best of the best. But still, he always finds the time, despite his hard-headedness, to be kind to everypony around him and put himself before others. His favorite hobby is just exploring the places around him, you can rarely see Cobalt in one place for too long. (And when he is confined in one place for too long, he's clinically depressed.) Cobalts dream is to become the very best of the lunar guards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Posted May 19, 2013 Report Share Posted May 19, 2013 Hi CobaltFl4sh!Because this is a Crossover app, the threshold's not as high as with a Mane RP character. All of the required fields are filled and although this app is brief in some places, I think it'll pass.Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobaltFl4sh Posted May 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2013 Awesome, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosewind Posted May 20, 2013 Report Share Posted May 20, 2013 Have fun! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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