Parody i made a song parody

[stormchaser1991]

• i made a song parody i was wondering if you could look at it is a parody of thr the devil went down to Georgia
  
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• Discord went down to Ponyville. He was lookin' for a soul to corrupt.
  
• He was in a bind 'cause he was way behind. He was willing to make a deal
  
• When he came across this young mare sawin' on a cello and playin' it hot.
  
• And Discord jumped upon a window and said "filly, let me tell you what."
  
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• "I bet you didn't know it, but I'm a cello player, too.
  
• And if you'd care to take a dare I'll make a bet with you.
  
• Now you play a pretty good cello, filly, but give Discord his due.
  
• I'll bet a cello of gold against your soul 'cause I think I'm better than you."
  
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• The filly said, "My name's Octavia, and it might be a sin,
  
• But I'll take your bet; and you're gonna regret 'cause I'm the best there's ever been."
  
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• Octavia, rosin up your bow and play your cello hard.
  
• 'Cause Hell's broke loose in Ponyville and Discord deals the cards.
  
• And if you win you get this shiny cello made of gold,
  
• But if you lose discord gets your soul.
  
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• Discord opened up his case and he said, "I'll start this show."
  
• And fire flew from his fingertips as he rosined up his bow.
  
• And he pulled the bow across the strings and it made an evil hiss.
  
• And a band of changelings joined in and it sounded something like this.
  
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• When the Discord finished, octavia said, "Well, you're pretty good ol' girl,
  
• But sit down in that chair right there and let me show you how it's done."
  
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• "Fire on the Mountain." Run, ponies, run!
  
• Discord in the house of the rising sun;
  
• Chicken's in the bread pan picking out dough.
  
• apples, does your dog bite? No, foal, no.
  
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• Discord bowed his head because he knew that he'd been beat.
  
• And he laid that golden cello on the ground at Octavia's hoofs.
  
• Octavia said, "Discord, just come on back if you ever wanna try again,
  

'Cause I've told you once--you lord of a chaos--I'm the best there's ever been."

And she played:

"Fire on the Mountain." Run, ponies, run!

Discord in the house of the rising sun;

Chicken's in the bread pan picking out dough.

Apples, does your dog bite? No, filly, no.

there are the lyrics if you think something needs change it fine if you change it

one thing i think is to change chicken's to scootaloo what do you think

about the chicken part whould it sound better or worse if it was

scootaloo outside checking out rainbow

[stormchaser1991]

plz tell me what you ponies think of the song