Azure Posted June 12, 2013 Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 Roleplay Type: FFA Name: Azure Lightning Sex: Male Age: Stallion Species: Pegasus Eye colour: [colour=#afeeee]Pale blue[/colour] Coat: [colour=#0000cd]Medium blue[/colour] Mane/Tail: Medium haircut sort of long [colour=#d3d3d3]light grey like this [/colour][colour=#000000]and[/colour] [colour=#808080]g[/colour][colour=#808080]rey [/colour][colour=#000000]as the secondary colour his tail is a bit long and almost looks likes Trixie's tail.[/colour] Physique: He is a medium size stallion who is sort of buff and strong Residence: He is currently on a quest to find who he really is so no place yet. Occupation: Working at a Apple Farm Cutie Mark: Azure got his Cutie Mark when he was almost done with school he was afraid of flying around because he never knew how to at the time. One sunny day he was walking around Trottingham with two of his friends when one of his friends had an idea to go explore out of Trottingham. As they were exploring they got to a steep drop that you cannot see the bottom Azure was a little afraid so he stepped back a little not wanting to fall in as his friend stepped closer he slipped and was hanging on to the edge as his other friend goes and grabs his friend as soon as he was going to help they both fell off the edge. Azure was scared he had no idea what to do he looked down and was afraid he then ignored his fear and jumped and spread his wings and started to fall he did not want anything to happen to his friends so he started to flap his wings he started to go faster and faster and tears started to to come out he was afraid to lose his friends next thing he knew he saw a Flash and heard a Bang he was fast as he grabbed his friends and brought them back to edge and sat them down. He then was trying to catch his breath he looked behind him and saw something on his flank his Cutie Mark was there a orange crystal heat with two bolts on it he was amazed of how it was and was glad he got it. History: Azure is an Pegasus who grew up in Trottingham his whole life never went anywhere else besides Canterlot to visit his dad and Aunt. He never got to know his father because he was a royal guard in Canterlot and he grew up with his mum. Azure had a few friends when he was a colt but he was bullied a little as well because he was an Pegasus and his mum was a Unicorn but Azure tried to ignore it. Azure wanted to move to Canterlot or Ponyville as a colt so he won't be bullied and made fun off but his mum did not have enough bits to move there which made Azure mad. A few years later Azure’s mum got a letter saying his dad had passed away this made Azure mad because he never knew his dad. Azure’s mum is a Unicorn and his dad is a Pegasus and they both love him but his dad had to get back on duty at Canterlot so he never got to see his own son. His mum is a caring Unicorn who helps Azure with some problems and takes good care of him as well like a good mother does. Azure only knows his Aunt from Canterlot as another family member and he is close to her as well but he barely sees her because he lives in Trottingham and don’t have enough bits to get there and back. But from that that is the only family member Azure knows besides his mum and dad. Azure is now a stallion who works at an apple farm for bits but he got news that his mum passed away from sickness and once he heard of that he felt like his soul was broken, hearing that news and he wish he never heard about it. A few weeks went by after his mum passed away he had no reason to stay there anymore he wanted to leave as quickly as he can. After he got the bits to leave for Canterlot or Ponyville he got a ticket for next week to leave which gives him time to pack and say goodbye to the apple family member who hired him during that week he got amnesia only remembering who he is and wondered why he had a train ticket. Azure is now on a train to Ponyville to find out who he really is hoping someone knows him or help him get his memory back. Only thing he knows is that he must have given himself amnesia or something gave him amnesia for some reason. Azure is on a mission to get his memory back but does not want to as well because he is afraid of who he really is and he might of gave him amnesia for a reason. Character Summary: Azure talent is being Brave, helping his friends, and being fast. He excel in Flying, helping, also being stubborn as well. He does not really have a dream goal in life only one which is to get his memory back to see who he really is. He likes being with his friends and family, also enjoying a nice meal when he gets a chance, Flying is another one and last is sleeping when is has a day off. He does not like it when his friends get hurt, when he gets woken up from his nap, and other ponies telling him what to do. Azure is not quite comfortable being around new ponies he never meet yet but he is a nice Stallion when you get to know him but a idiot at points and he can't keep his flank from danger. Azure is good at Flying, fighting other monsters that try to hurt him or his friends, and eating food. Azure seems to fail at his personality because he always be getting into more danger than he expects to get into and always tries to keep promises he can't keep. Azure really fears Timber Wolves and him flying sort of. He worries about his friends getting hurt when they are in danger and blames himself if they get hurt. Here is a Pic of Azure Lightning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armony Posted June 16, 2013 Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 How is this application coming along? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armony Posted June 18, 2013 Report Share Posted June 18, 2013 If no comment is made saying you would like to keep this application within 5 days, this thread will be locked and removed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Posted June 20, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2013 Sorry for not responding I was busy with other stuff so yeah I am almost done with my OC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Posted June 23, 2013 Report Share Posted June 23, 2013 Hi Azure!Looking at this app, there's a lot to like about it. All of the required fields are filled and there is a very compelling cutie mark story. However, there are a few misspelled words (no biggie) and also a number of long, run-on sentences that make this app a little hard to read. I would suggest you edit some of the longer sentences and try to bring this together into one, easier flowing story.Also, I checked with Senior RP Staff and they agree amnesia, as a mental condition, is unacceptable in a WOE app. If you wanted to take this app to Crossover or FFA, then that would be ok. As a general rule, no mental conditions are permitted in WOE RP apps.You do have the start of a very interesting RP app here, just needs a bit more 'fine tuning'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Posted June 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2013 Sigh okay i'll fix some stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Posted June 25, 2013 Report Share Posted June 25, 2013 I see you opted to app this as FFA, fantastic! As a FFA app, this looks ready to approve! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armony Posted June 25, 2013 Report Share Posted June 25, 2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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