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Evening Trance [Ready]


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Roleplay Type: World of Equestria

Name: Evening Trance

Sex: Female

Age: Foal (older)

Species: Unicorn

Eye colour: Dark Green (#00b300)

Coat: Light purple (#a25fb3)

Mane/Tail: Evening's mane and tail has two distinct colours: dark purple and black. Dark purple being the main and black being a highlight. Her hair is often put into a braid with a bow on top. (#7d3ec9) (#000000)

Physique: Compared to most foals her age, she is very petite and thin.

Residence: Evening currently resides at her parents' home (a Trinket shop) in Baltimare.

Occupation: Student

Cutie Mark: None as of yet, but she's waiting for it anxiously.

History:

Little Evening was born in Baltimare, along side her twin brother Incendio. She is the second daughter among her family's brood but the third child altogether. As the youngest, she was babied quite a bit when she was younger but now that she is older, her parents are shuffling quite a bit of responsibility on her shoulders. A lot is expected from her, despite her age, considering both of her parents are moderately powerful unicorns. Between her and her brother, Evening seemed to be the one lacking in magical abilities. She does in fact have magic, but what it is and how she can use it is still a mystery. More often than not, her spells don't seem to work at all and she lacks the focus and discipiline to be able to perform one decently. She has managed to gain some ground in this area however, but still needs much practice to truly be able to harness her powers. To her, it seemed like just yesterday that she led a carefree life, free of worry, but now a hard road lays ahead of her.

Tempest is a well accepted and rather revered unicorn among his peers, and expects his children to be so as well. His job was to help control storms that had gotten out of hand to make sure that there was little to no damage done to the buildings in Baltimare. His wife, Charming Belle is the Charming Trinket's shop owner and spends most of her days apprasing and trading her wares to help create a nice income for them all. Their eldest child is Sparks, who has long since left the roost before the twins were born. Incendio is Evening Trance's brother, and considered the most unruly of the two. He seems to have a good amount of abilities and hones them well enough for his age, but his temper and hotheadedness prevent him from being pleasant to be around and he tends to cause trouble. Out of all of them, Evening is the most insecure, and tends to be rather obedient (yet altogether shy) about anything new.

These days, her life is filled with chores and learning. Not exactly the most intriguing of lives, but she's grateful for what she has received. Though it does nag at her that she could do for some adventure, despite being told that it is far too dangerous for someone of her age to be venturing off. In her heart she knows her desires are to see the world and make friends. Though at the moment her shyness acts as a barrier to those around her, but she's slowly creeping through. Normally her day begins with cleaning the shop, heading off to school and then heading home to do more chores. For now her life seems to be at a stand still, but she has hopes that will change very soon.

Character Summary:

Evening Trance is at first a shy, non consequential pony that seems to blend into the background if need be. However, once you peel back the layers and become her friend, she quickly opens up to you. A bit naive, she is not one to make jokes but can be rather scatterbrained about housework, but if she puts her mind to it, she can work dilligently and with enthusiasm. A bit of a dreamer, this foal wants to keep her sights on the future, and often fantasizes about what her cutie mark will be and when she can leave home. Her sensibility reveals itself when she is in her brother's company, balancing out his rather shrewd and brash nature. In other aspects of her life however, her insecurities shine through, sometimes to the brink of tears or running away. Evening Trance doesn't seem to deal with change all that well but can be easily swayed to avoid strife. When it comes to danger and her friends' safety however, her bravery is her best asset, as she swallows her fears to do what needs to be done.

Of the sensitive sort, she does not take jokes that poke at her insecurities kindly and tends to become overly emotional about it. Her excitement level can peak and cause her to stay up at night if she is truly interested in something. Fiercely loyal, she will stand by anypony's side and do what she can to assist one in need. A fault of hers however, is her quickness to trust, and that has gotten her into a few sticky situations with a few not so nice individuals. Thankfully she has her family to look out for her and hopefully friends too, at least that is what she hopes. Her optimism on certain areas (including on the lives of her friends) is usually bright and her determination shines through. Sometimes she goes a little overboard when it comes to helping, but she has good intentions. Even if they end up tossing her into a bit of trouble.

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One question before I begin to evaluate your app, Palisade. You use the term "Foal (older)" to describe the char's age. I'm assuming you mean this pony is older than a pony like Pound or Pumpkin Cake but younger than Applebloom, Sweetie Belle or Scootaloo, am I correct?

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Ok, this app looks very good to me! All of the required fields are filled and it's very well written.

For an older foal, this char is deep (and we like that!).

Good work!

:D:D:D

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