kinkamina Posted August 13, 2013 Report Share Posted August 13, 2013 Roleplay Type: Free For AllName: Errare Diane DraconequusSex: FemaleAge: ChildSpecies: Draconequus (She also has Earth Pony in her blood due to her Hereditary)Eye colour: Her left eye is Red, and her right eye is Blue.Coat: Her body consists of the same animals as her Father, with her snout being more slender and smaller. Mane/Tail: Errare's hair is long, straight, pure white, and styled to the side, much like her mothers. Her tail has no fluff at the end.Physique: Errare's True form is small, about Spike's size, and slender.Residence: Errare has no definate home in this Equestria, but she tends to return to the Everfree forest at night.Occupation: N/ACutie Mark: N/AHistory: Errare was born in a alternate universe, very similar to the Original Equestria, only mostly empty. Her Mother Was the Murderous Pinkamina Diane Pie, and Her Father Was Discord Draconequus, Both belonging to that same Universe. Her father disappeared from the universe before she was born, and a week after she was, her mother left looking for him, with some help to a Unicorn horn harvested from a certain purple pony. Erare stayed on her world for some time, developing mentally at a steady rate from the few ponies that remained in her world. After a few years, she left in search of them. She has been trans-versing many different alternate universes, searching for her parents. The last universe she visited, one plagued with evil and destruction, left her mind scarred, and changed one of her blue eyes red.Character Summary: Errare is very kind, considerate, and likes to make friends. Her magic, Although severly limited due to her only being half a draconequus, revolves around colours, which she loves; orange being her favorite.Errare maintains a "Grown form" that she transforms into most of the time, which depicts her as a fully grown draconequus. because she finds that ponies don't take her seriously in her true form. She struggles with her chaotic nature as a draconequus, which drives her to want to corrupt and taint the things around her, but she usually can keep them in check. Her chaotic impulses are in tune with the collective chaos of the world she inhabits. She keeps a small notebook on her, where she puts everything she knows and discovers into. She strives to find her parents, and to find purpose for herself.Errare spends most of her time trying to help the people around her, and on her spare time, she loves the comfort of nature, where she likes to experiment with her power to distort reality. Her powers are limited to her stamina, and can kill her if she over exerts herself. She fears that she might one day lose control of herself and succumb to the chaos within her.She is far more intelligent than her age suggests, and she is very Curious, and this sometimes gets her in trouble. She always tries to make the best of things, but is very levelheaded. She also has a very tricky idealism, believing in duality in everything, life and death, day and night, and especially Harmony and Chaos. Under the pressure of recent events, she may be beginning to slip into madness, a trait that her mother shares.____________________________________________________"Emotions are the colours of the Soul," -Errare Diane Draconequus, in confronting Soryu 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kinkamina Posted August 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2013 Aw dang it! I forgot to put FFA in the Topic Title!Aaaaaand Fixed it. ^w^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Posted August 13, 2013 Report Share Posted August 13, 2013 Hi kinkamina! For a FFA app, this looks very, very good! All the required fields are filled, but it is very brief in some places. Still, since this is a FFA app, that may not matter so much. I like what I see here! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kinkamina Posted August 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2013 Hi kinkamina! For a FFA app, this looks very, very good! All the required fields are filled, but it is very brief in some places. Still, since this is a FFA app, that may not matter so much. I like what I see here! Might I ask what the brief places are? I'd love to fix it. ^w^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojo Posted August 13, 2013 Report Share Posted August 13, 2013 Well, the History section is brief, and you could expand a bit more on her personality, if you wanted to.It's up to you, but what I'm saying is as this app stands now, since it is FFA, I believe it will pass Senior Role Play Staff guidelines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kinkamina Posted August 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2013 I'd love to Elaberate on her Past. ^w^I can even tell about why one of her eyes is Red. Although... I can't link her in my sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosewind Posted August 13, 2013 Report Share Posted August 13, 2013 I love this so much. Nice job! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kinkamina Posted August 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2013 Well, I did add some more personality, but I dont really want to add much more to her History, because much Of it I use to Rp, and it would spoil some secrets. ^w^I love this so much. Nice job! Thanks! I like to put a lot of time into creating my Oc's and I'm happy to find somepony who appreciates it. I'm open to rp with her, if ya want. ^w^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armony Posted August 13, 2013 Report Share Posted August 13, 2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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