Earth Pony Dusk Flower (READY)

[Lilia]

Name: Dusk Flower

Gender: Female

Age: Mare

Species: Earth Pony

Eye colour: Chocolate Brown

Coat: Yellow-orange, closer to orange.

Mane/Tail/Other: Bright, sunny yellow mane and tail, left long and slightly shaggy. Wears a heart shaped locket.

Physique: As standard for an Earth Pony, fit but not overly buff.

Residence: Ponyville

Occupation: Writer for stock gift cards

Cutie Mark: Lavender Rose

Unique Traits: Dusk loves to write poetry in her spare time, and can’t for the life of herself draw. She keeps to her books mostly, but will always welcome a friendly face. She excels in board games.

History: When Dusk was a filly, she and her parents decided to travel Equestria with a handful of others. She often spent the long trips thinking or reading, trying to figure out who she was. She had a few friends she would cause mischief with, but as time went by, they dwindled to just one. While Dusk hadn’t realized it, her friend had grown very ill and needed a doctor. When the family stopped near Ponyville, she watched her friend be taken into the hospital. She begged and pleaded with her parents to stay, only asking to write something sentimental to her last remaining friend. She was granted her wish and immediately began to write. When she was done, she had a four-page letter letting her friend know exactly what she felt and how much she would be missed on the journey. When she handed it over, her parents and friend were beaming. She had gotten her cutie mark. She decided to stay close to her friend and asked if her family could live in Ponyville. When the green light was given, she immediately began searching for a place to fine-tune her gift with words. She took her place in a nearby gift card shop, learning how to put what she felt into the cards so that others would share that feeling and buy them. She still writes for them now, glad to do what she does best. Dusk is afraid of being left truly alone, and will desperately seek out others when she starts to feel lonesome. She gets upset by others only coming to the card shop to laugh at what she wrote inside the cards, particularly the cards that were written for get well wishes. When she hears it, she takes it upon herself to show the ones laughing out after figuring out which card they were laughing at. She loves to write poetry in her off time, as well as play with the pets in town. She has been seeking a pet of her own, and wants one that will love her unconditionally and stick by her side when the tough times roll in.

Character Summary: Dusk Flower is a true, down-to-earth Earth pony. She is warm and friendly but still shy enough to hesitate before introducing herself.

[Lux]

Hello.

Is your application still being worked on or is it ready? Please not this by putting either WiP or Ready in the title area. Thanks!

[Lilia]

fixed it! Thank you, Lux!

[Lux]

Ok. A couple of things that should be covered here in you application.

First, you should change Character Color to just Coat.

Next, you should expand your Character Summary a little with things like what upsets Dusk Flower and how she reacts to it, what she likes to do besides making cards, and what she is afraid of. Basically the more that you add the better!

[Lilia]

added more. thank you again, Lux.

[Armony]