Brony55 Posted September 21, 2013 Report Share Posted September 21, 2013 RP Type: FFAName: Flaming SnowflakeGender: StallionSpecies: PegasusEye colour: Dark BlueCharacter colour: Black and WhiteMane/Tail/Other: Black and WhitePhysique: Medium in sizeResidence: Bareback GutchOccupation: Weather ponyCutie Mark: Half of a sun and half of a snowflakeUnique Traits: Flaming Snowflake has a short temper span and the temperature of the air around him changes with his attitudeHistory: Flaming Snowflake was born too a pair of Unicorns in ManeHattan. No pony really ever liked him so Flaming Snowflake finally left ManeHattan in search of a new home.Character Summary: Flaming Snowflake is quick to think of solutions to problems and has an attitude of not really caring about what others think about him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuickLime Posted September 21, 2013 Report Share Posted September 21, 2013 Hey, good start but you really need to expand your characters history and summary more :3 they should at least be 1 to 2 paragraphs instead of only a few sentences, also we really try to avoid the "Nobody liked them social outcast" thing, and the tempeture power isn't going to work, he is a earth pony and their magic doesn't work that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoExlucky Posted September 21, 2013 Report Share Posted September 21, 2013 Hello, I'm not a RP helper but just to add something else onto what she said, it might be a good idea to tell us how he got his cutie mark, just so we can see the kind of pony he is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony55 Posted September 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2013 I am thinking like with Princess Cadance and how she could make love in the air between any pony even when she was just a Pegasus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony55 Posted September 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2013 Ok I agree with the social outcast thing you said and increasing the history and summery I could definatly elaborate on them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuickLime Posted September 21, 2013 Report Share Posted September 21, 2013 I am thinking like with Princess Cadance and how she could make love in the air between any pony even when she was just a Pegasus.Things work differently for OC'S than they do cast characters, Cadence is canon after all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony55 Posted September 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2013 fine I will change it. Besides I misread something my character is a Pegasus I titled this post wrong sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuickLime Posted September 22, 2013 Report Share Posted September 22, 2013 Don't worry about it! If this is your first time though I reccomend you try Free for All to get a handle on rping your character, and maybe looking at some accepted WOE applications so you know what World of Equestria's standards are for applications Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony55 Posted September 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2013 Okey Doky Loki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuickLime Posted September 22, 2013 Report Share Posted September 22, 2013 Are you making this Application FFA then? Please edit into your original post if so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony55 Posted September 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2013 what do I change persay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuickLime Posted September 22, 2013 Report Share Posted September 22, 2013 At the very start of your post, above your ponies name make another section that says Rp Type: FFA :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosewind Posted September 22, 2013 Report Share Posted September 22, 2013 That's an...interesting character name choice! Color me impressed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoExlucky Posted September 22, 2013 Report Share Posted September 22, 2013 That's an...interesting character name choice! Color me impressed....born a snowflake melter... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armony Posted September 23, 2013 Report Share Posted September 23, 2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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