SugarSweet [Ready]

[LeCountryBrony]

Roleplay Type: World of Equestria

Name: SugarSweet

Sex: Female

Age:(Younger) Mare

Species: Pegasus

Eye colour: Purple

Coat: White

Mane/Tail: Red/orange

Physique: Average height and weight

Residence: Canterlot

Occupation: Candy making

Cutie Mark: A heart shaped multicolored lollipop: As a young filly SugarSweet always had a love for sweets and always dreamed of one day owning a candy shop. Determined to make this dream come true one day She began looking through her mothers recipe book. After several tries only to make what looked like big globs of sugar with a stick in it She began to perfect her ways of candy making and She began obsessing over making the best candy possible. Leading to Her cutiemark for the love of candy.

History: As a foal SugarSweet grew up in Canterlot with Her parents in a small home with in the city. Growing up SugarSweet had an easy life Her parents where moderately rich but She never really liked the high society life and preferred to live a simple life. As a foal SugarSweet had always dreamed of living in cloudsdale. She was born as a only foal to her parents GoldCoin and SugarCloud. Her parents where loving and caring to Her and she developed a strong bond with Her parents often helping Her mother bake on Her free time when She wasn't busy playing with other foals.

Sugar now owns Her own self run candy shop in Canterlot where She makes candies and chocolates for the foals and the foals at heart. SugarSweet is happy with her life She leads all tho it can be stressful at times when costumers of Her shop request special items. As a young foal Sugar was obsessed with candy and sweets and all to often spent Her time gazing into candy shop windows Watching as the ponies inside would make the candy right before Her eyes.

Growing into her filly years She decided to try candy making for herself. After practicing a couple of years She began to perfect on her ways of making candy. Into her mid/late filly years She dreamed of starting Her own candy shop and with the support of Her parents began saving bits towards making Her dream come true.

As a young mare SugarSweet had gathered up enough bits and bought a small store front in Canterlot. It wasn't much just a small little square store with a glass front nestled in among the houses of Canterlot. SugarSweet can often be found there behind the counter carefully crafting Her candies that she takes pride in each and every piece she makes. In the future SugarSweet hopes of making enough bits to expand apon Her store and hiring ponies to help her with the candy making process

Character Summary: SugarSweet has a talents in making candy by hoof paying attention to the small details that make a great candy. Sugar is motivated to expand apon her shop and create a good standing reputation for Herself and one day even opening a second shop elsewhere in Equestria.

Sugar loves her job as a candy maker, She likes drawing, and writing. On what free time She does get from her shop She likes to spend taking strolls through town seeing what other shops offer and interacting with the community.

Overall SugarSweet is a kind, and generous pony, When ever somepony is in need of bits or items or just help She is there willing to help friend or stranger. All tho She often will deny She needs help Herself in situations and persists that She can do things by Herself. She has a gentle, and caring attitude towards other ponies treating them as if they where a friend . She is moderately social but loves making friends with ponies and interacting with the cities foals often playing games with them or helping them with things.

SugarSweet is soft spoken and hard to anger, When angered tho she will often apologize and or forgive. She is often saddened by negative things directed towards her big or small. She will sometimes become shy, and hesitant in moments where She is looked apon by ponies to lead or make decisions in important things. Sometimes She will drag her self down believing She can't do something or over exaggerates negative things said or done to Her

[Bellosh]

A few thing before we stamp this app:

• This app contains numerous grammatical errors. It's very important that RPers in World of Equestria use proper grammar, or else your fellow users will be too distracted by writing mistakes to pay attention to a post's content. Please make an earnest effort to make sure everything is capitalized, punctuated, and spelled correctly.
  
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[LeCountryBrony]

Ok I think i got all the edits done. I did some editing to the character summary i hope its a lot better

[Bellosh]

NOTE: In actual RP, it would be appreciated if you don't capitalize the words "she" and "her" if they don't begin a sentence. I'm not going to hold up this app because of that though, so have fun!