Skyzipper (Ready)

[RainbowDaringDash]

Name: Skyzipper

Gender: Male

Age: Teen

Species: Pegasus

Eye colour: Reddish pink

Character colour: Ocean Blue

Mane/Tail/Other: Skyzipper's mane and tail are light red. His mane hangs loose down the sides of his neck. His tail rises up and flows while flying and just hovers off the ground whilst walking.

Physique: Skyzipper is a bit smaller than your average Pegasi and also a bit quicker. He trains daily when not busy to keep his flight skills up and to maintain his strong wings. He wears a white bandanna tied around his neck at all times, even when he wears his fire red hoodie, he will have the bandanna on underneath.

Residence: Cloud Home just on the outskirts of Ponyvile

Occupation: Skyzipper helps with the weather when help is needed. When not helping he just hangs with his friends and practices his flying. He is currently at the Wonderbolt Academy.

Cutie Mark: A Pair of wings, side by side with air currents going through them.

Cutiemark Story: Skyzipper was the son of one of Canterlots higher class citizens. Skyzipper had never really flown in public, as his parents never even let him fly. He would sneak out and practice during the night, and sometimes during the day when he was away from his family. It was during one of these times he was followed by his parents because a neighbour told them his activity was suspicious. They were disappointed to say the least, however, when they saw what Skyzipper was doing, they were also shocked as he performed all sorts of tricks. When he landed, he understood he had performed flawlessly and asked his parents if they would let him fly more often, they said that he could fly whenever he wanted. It during that moment that it became clear to him that his special talent was air stunts.

Special talent: Doing air stunts and tricks accurately whilst going fast flawlessly, or any airborne movement.

Unique traits: Specialises in fast agile flying whilst going extremely fast. He likes to bust crazy air stunts. He is generally very athletic and is good at all sports.

History: Skyzipper was born in Canterlot. His his life revolved around the most well known Ponies in the city. His parents wanted him to grow up to be the most well known Pony in Canterlot and made Skyzipper do everything a Canterlotian should do. As much as other Ponies liked this, Skyzipper did not. He didn't like his parent's pish posh ways so he ran away and lived in Ponyville to get away from all that. When he arrived in Ponyville he met his best friend Peppermint Swirl. Skyzipper and Peppermint Swirl were friends for a few years before Peppermint Swirl moved to Canterlot, the one place Skyzipper never wanted to go. After that Skyzipper made a name for himself by winning that years best young flyer competition and then enrolled with the Wonderbolt Academy. Skyzipper is the best flyer in his group at the Wonderbolt academy. Skyzipper nearly equalled the top records at the academy.

Character Summary: Skyzipper is very shy around new people but extremely loyal to his friends. He enjoys hanging out with friends, loves to have fun, loves to joke around with pranks and mess around with jokes. He will be disloyal when it comes to being a jokester but when it comes down to the big stuff, he will always choose to stick by his friends. He is pretty honest when things are serious, but also is dishonest with minor things. He loves sport. Skyzipper dislikes pish posh stuff and insanely hates fashion. He insanely hates being alone. does not like to follow commands of others but will listen to his friends. He is very quick to respond rashly if one of his friends are hurt or picked on. Skyzipper takes time to recover from a insult if it hurts him deeply. He has a very big pride but it never hinders him as he can put it aside to do what is necessary. Skyzippper enjoys reading. He reads when he is resting from practice, when bored or just for fun. Skyzipper especially likes the Wonderbolt History books and the Daring Do books. Skyzipper helps with the weather when the other Pegasi need help. During the his free time he hangs with his friends and practices flying. Skyzipper dislikes to bring harm to anyone and is quick to help an injured Pony whether it is someone he hates or someone he cares about. Skyzipper would follow his friends anywhere they go, except to Canterlot. Skyzipper is very impatient and makes hasty decisions when things are going too slowly. Skyzipper wears a fire red hoodie for cold days, or just in general when its not a boiling hot day. Skyzipper will rarely be seen without his trademark white bandanna which he wears around his neck at all times. Although he ran away from canterlot, he still keeps in contact with his parents.

[RainbowFoxxy]

Hi! This app is looking much better now that you've worked on it some. Here's a few more tips to get this approved quicker:

1.) This needs to be proof read by someone again. Lots of spelling and grammar errors.

2.) he realized that, his parents were jealous of him for being a better flyer then them, and at that moment, the moment he realized that he had done that so flawlessly, it became clear. He knew his special talent was air stunts.

I don't think it's necessary to have his parents be jealous of him. Just focus on his flying skills.

3.)As Skyzipper has a bad relationship with his parents, he prefers not to talk about his past.

Again, having a bad relationship with his parents doesn't add to this character. I would remove this part.

4.) Make sure this app follows the provided app form:

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Like I said in our PM's, I'm not an official RP helper but I enjoy helping you out

[RainbowDaringDash]

thanks Firefoxx, i appiciate your help, il start improving when i can

[Bellosh]

Just something I feel needs to be cleared up. While everything Foxy mentioned about child-parent conflicts is true for World of Equestria and its show-accurate game, Canterlot Chronicles is a different beast. CC apps have more freedom to feature some things we wouldn't allow in WoE, and bad relationships with parents is one of those things. A list of what we permit especially for CC can be found here.

[Armony]