Renabeforerainbows Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Name:Green DreamSex:FemaleAge:FillySpecies:Earth PonyPelt Color:Lightish greenMane/Tail/Markings Color & Style:Short, wavy, dark blue, mane and tail, wears pink glasses, and prefers tostick to simple clothing and basic grooming.Eye Color:PurpleCutie Mark:Open book with a rainbow coming from itPhysique:Slight, shorter than average and a bit frailOrigin:HoofingtonRoleplay Type:Mane RPOccupation:everlasting quest for more stories and legends (storyteller)Motivation:Green Dream devours books, namely story books.She will read anything that has to do with far-off kingdoms,old legends, ancient creatures, or just the mundane lives of non-existent ponies.Likes:Books, Quiet places, Easy work, Daydreaming, and Any creature described in stories(IE. dragons).Dislikes:Being torn from her books, Physically demanding work, and TurnipsCharacter Summary: Once upon a time, in a distant kingdom...(AHEM!), I mean, not so long ago, in the Equestrian town of Hoofington, thechosen one was born...(...forget it, I'll do it myself)..aawww!Fascinated with old sailor pony tales as a foal, Green Dream began to crave any unusual or fantastical tale she could get her hooves on. Within the first month she learned to read, Green Dream made her first visit to the Hoofington library, and she was never the same again. In that fateful day at the library, the stories upon the pages created worldsthat became far more beautiful to her than anything in real life. Green Dream knew she would give her very soul just to stay in those imaginary worlds.Even as closing time loomed, Green dream sat transfixed upon the words on the page. It took two local stallions to drag this small foal out of the library and back home. That night, she knew she wouldn't be satisfied until she knew every story in Equestria. With her determination set and mind preoccupied Green Dream didn't notice the appearance of her cutie mark until morning.Green Dream seems out-worldly an aloof pony, apparently caring more for fictional characters then real ones.This is not true, however, what is considered coldness is merely an intense focus on her obsessions. The few times Green Dream isn't reading or lost within her head, she has a gentle, yet frequently distracted demeanor. Green Dream likes to go with the flow as long it suits her.A failed attempt at working at the library has shown that Green Dream's work ethic is lacking despite her enthusiasm. Which leaves her very unsuited for librarian work, not only lazy, spending all her time reading, but disorderly as well, leaving books throughout the store.She is usually assumed to be incredibly knowledgeable, which she will fully agree with but is not quite right. She mayread many books but has little patience for "boring facts." This attitude causes her to become defensive when she ischallenged intellectually. Having read about heroes vanquishing evil, defending the weak, and enforcing justice for many year has given Green Dream a strong, sometimes naive sense of right and wrong. To Emulate such heroes, she will come to anypony's aid to make things right once more, usually biting off more than she can chew.Always enthusiastic to share with anypony that shows interest in hearing a story, Green Dream performs dramatically to match the tone of the story. In many cases, her eagerness gets the better of her, causing over-dramatic displays and even mixed-up details from other stories to appear. When hearing stories from others, she has a habit of asking for every single detail and get's irritated at vague descriptions.(I think it's ready, so what do you think?)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Once upon a time, in a distant kingdom...(AHEM!), I mean, not so long ago, in the Equestrian town of Hoofington, thechosen one was born...(...forget it, I'll do it myself)..aawww!That part made me giggle.Good job with this character I love it!Her weakness is books and her strength is books it's a very good balance and this is a great character.Only thing I'd like you to do is not space it so much. I'd also like it if you could move her cutie-mark story down to the character summary. Other then that I love it<3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renabeforerainbows Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Thank you, I was over-worried about how others would see it. I'm trying to fix the spacing issues, it looks different in the writing area than what actually is posted, most likely because of the bold. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shimmer Star Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 If the bold is giving you trouble, maybe you could try just bolding the form part, and putting in the info as regular text? IE: Name: Green Dream Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 If the bold is giving you trouble, maybe you could try just bolding the form part, and putting in the info as regular text? IE: Name: Green DreamDoing that will also help me as well.It's kind hurting my eyes.I have bad eyes... -cries- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renabeforerainbows Posted July 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 I should have realized the bold was just for the criteria names, my bad! Anyways that has been fixed, and will be adding in a few details in just a few. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 Good!Like I said before I love this character it's so cute<3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renabeforerainbows Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 I add a minor character trait and now I'm sending it up for inspection. (I"m so nervous! ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 Don't be nervous!This application is great so I approve!http://missrarity.com/stuff/AppAssessed.pngI still love this character to bits<3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renabeforerainbows Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 yay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 yay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renabeforerainbows Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 yay oh sorry I was trying to do a fluttershy yay and that was the only smiley that worked for yelling something out (fluttershy-wise) it would have been better if I did a big *INHALE* next to it, but I didn't think of that. sorry for the confusion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlindJester Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 yay oh sorry I was trying to do a fluttershy yay and that was the only smiley that worked for yelling something out (fluttershy-wise) it would have been better if I did a big *INHALE* next to it, but I didn't think of that. sorry for the confusion! It's okay I still love you :heart: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skye Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renabeforerainbows Posted July 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 omagoshomagoshomagosh! ...now I need to find a place to start. Ah, the pressure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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