MetalBronyATL Posted June 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 ((But yours is cute already )) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 "Hey now, that's not true." Moonshield said. "You're a beautiful mare, and I'm sure you'd make a great wife and mother. Don't think that way." Moonshield didn't even realize he had put his hoof on top of hers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 ((wait never mind)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 She looked down and blushed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 ((dammit I don't know how to change my prof pic from my iPad)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 ((One thing you should try and work on is more detailed post. I know it seems difficult at first but it comes more naturally after a while. Try having her think some things in her head after she does something.)) Moonshield put his other hoof around her and hugged her while still resting his hoof on her's. "Don't ever think that nopony likes you, because I can tell you right now I think you're an awesome mare." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 ((Yeah, it's hard to use the site on mobile sometimes)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 You feel a tear splash your shoulder "thanks" 'he thinks I'm an awesome mare!!' she thinks to herself 'eeeee' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 Moonshield wiped the tear from her eye and smiled. "Anytime, Gloomy." He looked outside and saw that the sun was going down and gave a tired yawn. "Ugh...that trip was tiring." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 Gloomy chirps cheerfully "I'll walk you home!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 "Alright, thanks Gloomy." Moonshield replied with a smile. He got up and left a tip for Pinkie Pie. "Shall we?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 Gets up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 "we shall!" giggles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 Moonshield smiled and playfully took her hoof as they walked out the door. "I bet tonight's going to be lovely. I already see some stars coming out." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 "yeah" she said holding tight to his hoof and gazing at the stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 "You should come visit me back home in the Empire sometime. I could show you the stars through one of our telescopes. It's one of the most beautiful things you'll ever see." He said as he continued on down the road with Gloomy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 "oh I'd love to visit you!" getting a firmer grip on his hoof gloomy leaned forward and kissed Monshields forhead "youre a great friend!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 Moonshield's ears perked up and he blushed. "Thank you, Gloomy." He said smiling as he kissed her cheek. "You're a great friend as well." He nuzzled her neck softy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 As gloomy returned the nuzzle she felt something inside of her and that something was joy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 They finally reached the small house Moonshield had rented during his stay. "Well, here it is." He said with a yawn. "I'll finally get a good nights sleep. I almost forgot what those were." He said with a chuckle. He turned backed to Gloomy smiling and put a hoof on her. "Thank you for being with me today. I'm so glad I met you." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 "good bye moon" she hugged him good bye "I'm glad I met you too" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 Moonshield hugged her tightly and kissed her on the cheek. "I'll see you tomorrow. Don't forget, you're an amazing mare." He turned and headed inside of the door, his heart warmed from the feeling of meeting that wonderful mare on the first day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 Gloomy touched her cheek where he kissed her and sighed happily, for this had been the happiest day of her life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 ((It's late where I am. Want to call it a night and pick back up tomorrow? I'm pretty tired. Lol )) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 19, 2014 Report Share Posted June 19, 2014 ((yeah its late here too. Seeya tomorrow! I had fun! Derp )) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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