MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 "Stop right there, Gloomy!" A voice called out, slightly above monotone. "Put the knife down right now." A grey pegasus wearing a dull, green frock and a purple mane and tail appeared behind her, "Whatever you are thinking, don't do it." Maud said sternly to her.((Nooooooo don't do it! )) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((Maud is a earth pony )) "you don't tell me what to do YOU F-ING LITTLE B---H!" she took her knife and sliced Mauds hoof almost off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((That's what I meant. Whoops))Maud didn't flinch as she caught Gloomy's hoof before the knife came anywhere near here. She had dealt with Gloomy's changes many times before. "Get a hold of yourself!" She said as she wrestled the knife out of her hooves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 Gloomy wrestled maud and got back the knife, and before maud could do anything she drove it into her back "DIE YOU LITTLE WH-RE!!!!!!!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((sorry Maud )) D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((Don't autohit like that. It'a a really cheap way to RP))Maud rolled over at the last second to avoid the knife and then kicked it away again. "Come on, Gloomy. You've done this a million times before and it never works." She said in her usual monotone voice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((ok thx)) gloomy picked up her knife again and ran into moons cottage and locked the door ((autohit? Huh?)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((Autohitting is basically when your character and another character are fighting, you do a move that instantly kills them without giving them a chance to retaliate. In this case, you stabbed Maud in the back without giving her a chance to defend herself. Also, I'm not trying to tell you how to run your character or take way anything you want to contribute to the story, but I'd really rather not go down this path. Couldn't we have Maud talk her down before she goes inside the cottage, and once she's normal she can have an emotional moment reuniting with Moon?)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((ok sure)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 Maud had wrestled Gloomy to the ground and looked her in the eyes. "Gloomy, control yourself, you are about to harm the stallion you love. You are about to let yourself fall prey to this condition again. If you do not stop this now, the pony you love will be gone forever" she said sternly, yet still monotoned. She hated when she had to do this to her dear cousin, but it had to be done. "Calm down, Gloomy." Maud said, now quieter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 Gloomy looked at gloomy "Maud? Will he ever love me again? All I ever wanted was us to start a family and grow old together" she said tears filling her ocean blue eyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 Maud got up and pulled her into a hug, allowing her to cry on her. "He never stopped, Gloomy. The second you walk in, he will forgive you. But you also need to tell him what was bothering you when Applejack showed up. I watched you two for a long time, and I noticed things were fine until she came." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 "ok.." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 "You'll be needing this." Maud said, suddenly pullig out the necklace Moon gave her and putting it around her neck. Moonshield was still sitting against the wall, not saying anything but looking depressed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 "moon?" asked gloomy nervously opening the door Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 He looked up to see Gloomy standing there and instantly got up and embrace her in a hug. "I missed you so much!" He said, nuzzling her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((ugh..I need to sleep. Seeya 2morrow)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((Same. Peace)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((I'm here if you're on.)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((I'm on)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((Its your turn)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 "moon...may I...um...sing for you?" asked gloomy blushing, crying, smiling, and staring awkwardly at the floor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 Moon lifted her head and kissed her, happy she was back and in his arms. "Yes....go ahead, darling." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinkewafflepie Posted June 24, 2014 Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((hmmmm... Would you like "all of me" by John Legend or "I'm yours" by Jason Mraz?)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetalBronyATL Posted June 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2014 ((Up to you, surprise me. )) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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