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Roleplay Type: World of Equestria

Name: Caramel Smile

Sex: Female

Age: Young Mare

Species: Pegasus

Eye colour: Golden Yellow

Coat: Caramel. She also has a few freckles in her face.

Mane/Tail: Caramel's mane is yellow with light brown streaks. This also goes for her tail. Her mane and tail is sorted out in a messy kind of way. It is mostly uncombed and a few mane and tail strands stick out of their place.

Physique: Caramel is of the same build of an average pegasus. The only difference is her height. She is quite short for her age and is also quite light.

Residence: Canterlot (Though she travels around a lot)

Occupation: Caramel is a travelling baker and half-time comedian.

Cutie Mark: Caramel's cutie mark is a freshly-baked pie with a smiley face imprinted between the container and crust.

The story of Caramel's cutie mark started in her young years. She was a student of a strict school in the big city of Manehattan, her home town...or should I say city? Her school was going to have a gathering tomorrow and almost 5 different other schools will be present! Caramel thought of it as an amazing opportunity for a truly amazing prank! And after so, maybe she'll get her cutie mark! For you see, Caramel always believed that her special talent was making ponies happy and pranking. But no matter how hard she tries, no matter how awesome her prank is, her flank would always be empty! But that doesn't mean she's giving up!

After making the final edits in her plan, Caramel finally went for a finished product! Her plan was, that, when her favorite teacher is on stage, speaking to a lot of ponies, she would sneak out of the crowd, climb to the third floor of the school, and drop a caramel flavored apple pie right on her teacher! If this happens, she's sure that all the ponies present will end up in hysterical laughter, and she'll get her cutie mark for sure!

Now, all she needs, is a pie. And that's the problem. She doesn't have one. She would ask her mom to do it, but it seems like she's out of town. Her next option was her father, but that fellow never cooks! What is she gonna do?! Her mother is always the one who makes pie's for her pranks, which is considerably, a LOT. But she wasn't here right now! She tried to ask advice from her father. But the only thing her father keeps on saying is that, she should make the pie herself. Hmmm... that isn't actually a bad idea now that she thought of it. She did watch her mom a lot when she made pies. And the recipe is always in the cupboard! Yes! She can do this!

After thanking her father, she set out to the kitchen and set out the recipe. She read it briefly. After so, she zoomed around the house collecting all the materials and ingredients she needs for the procedure. After so, she followed each instruction with care and patience. She was very focused on her work and she would never forgive herself if she screwed up. Sometimes, she would even add additional ingredients so that it would taste better. Half an hour later, the pie was baked and everything was ready! The baking went really well! So well, that maybe she'll taste it a little. To her surprise, it was delicious! She brought the delicious treat to her father and he loved it too! Cool! Maybe she's good in baking too! She decided to let herself, and her father feast on the pie. Such a delicious thing must not be put to waste! After so, she made another pie that will be used on her plan.

The day has arrived! Her prank day! She waited for all the ponies to gather. When everypony seems to be in place, she flew over to the third floor and waited for her favorite teacher to come up on stage. While waiting, she would imagine all the happy and laughing faces of the ponies who saw it. Oh, how exciting! Finally, her favorite teacher came up and spoke to the crowd. Without hesitation, she dropped the pie and it landed right on her teacher! Just as planned. There was a brief silence, that was until everypony almost fell down of their chairs laughing like crazy! Even her teacher was laughing. Her teacher knew exactly who would do this though. She decided to taste the pie that fell on her. She was expecting it to be the same taste, since Caramel's mother is always the one who made the pie. But to her surprise, it was filled with flavor! After the gathering, she called Caramel and asked her who made the pie. She was amazed when she knew Caramel made it herself. Her teacher pointed to the young one's flank. And to Caramel's surprise, her cutie mark was already there.

History: Caramel Smile was born in the bustling city of Manehatten. She was raised with her busy mother and her caring father. Caramel was closer to her father and she would find herself spending more time with him. Also, since her mother was a busy fellow, she would understand that. Life for her growing up was splendid! It was filled with her being filled with love from her parents, loaded with fun memories with her friends, and only a very few enemies. She never felt alone, even for a second. she always felt like no matter what happens, her family and friends will always be there for her. And if they get separated, she could always use her amazing social skills to make some new friends and memories!

After her childhood passed, she was not even close to different. She was still the happy, care-free pony you knew and loved when she still young! But of course, she cant stay with her old life forever. She can never stay at the loving comfort of her parents. That's why she decided to open up a mini-bakery to earn up some money. After a few years, she finally earned enough money that she can use to take care of herself. She didn't expect it to take this long though. But if your opening a mini-bakery in a huge city like Manehatten, its probably gonna take a while. After some re-thinking of her final decisions, she decided to move to Canterlot. There she lived in a house comfortable for herself and also opened an official bakery there. Though she doesn't always stay in Canterlot. She would often travel from place to place like Ponyville, or Cloudsdale, in order to sell her delicious pies. Occasionally, she would even go to street performing and use her comedy and silliness to get all the ponies passing by to laugh and to brighten their mood.

Because of her parent's and friend's support, she is able to get through those few years. For you see, Caramel was to the point of almost giving up because her savings has been increasing in a very, very slow rate. Also, since she was known to be a very impatient pony, its normal for her to feel this way. She was so close as to give up her plan and to live in Manehattan forever. She was so close as to permanently close her mini-bakery too. But with her parent's and friend's help, they agreed to travel around Manehattan, to sell these delicious treats. And, as a result, her savings boosted in a big way. Making Caramel, have hope for herself.

From here, Caramel Smile would dream of being a worlwide known chef. Where she would make ponies from all around the world happy with her yummy food. And also make them laugh with her silliness.

Character Summary: Caramel Smile has a very lively personality. She is also very childish and immature and will almost never stick a frown in her face. She is very chatty and is known to blurt out a random word, phrase, or sentence in the worse situations. She finds it hard to hide her emotions and can sometimes overreact to the smallest situations. Even though she has this peppy personality, she finds it difficult to handle mean or negative comments about her. If a said comment is thrown at her, she would go quiet and will be trapped in her thoughts. She would think of all the reasons why somepony said that about her, which can result on her being depressed for a while. She isn't scared on who she pranks and mostly isn't worried when she gets in trouble.

Caramel Smile is a very good baker and comedian. She is in love with pranking and almost all of her pranks are pie related. So, if somepony is lucky enough to be her target, he/she will most probably end up being coated in cream. She also loves it when her pranks go to a success and that her prankee has a sense of humor and doesn't get mad at her from a harmless prank. She sometimes dislikes too-serious or too-depressed ponies. But even though, she will do her best to at least put even the lightest smile on their face.

Caramel Smile isn't perfect and has her flaws. She can sometimes be a bit merciless on her pranks and might get a pony hurt because of it. Speaking of which, she has this move she calls the "Random Hug". The thing is that she runs up from behind a pony and hugs them while shouting "RANDOM HUUUG!!!!", thereby, surprising them. But the downside is that, if she exerts too much force, she can cause an injury to the said pony. She also isn't that good in keeping secrets and there's a very big tendency that she might blurt out a secret you just told her seconds ago. She's also very clumsy and can get other ponies hurt. She can be very clingy at times and she might never let go of your hoof if she doesn't feel like it.

Caramel fears over the negative sides of things. She never likes the word "sadness" or "anger". If she finds herself feeling these kinds of emotions, she would sometimes go on a nervous breakdown on how confused she would be of the reason why. She never liked that fact that she was a short pony. The thought of others towering her never fails to make her shudder. Another reason why, is because she sometimes feels weak and puny and that she never can defend herself.

But even with all her fears and flaws, she would always be a happy, energetic pony that works hard for everypony. She is an awesome friend, but can be quite annoying and nosy, so her friends are going to have to tolerate to all of this.

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Added a little bit to the history to make it longer! Done! :D

I also changed her age because an Older filly seems too young to be moving out of her home! :)

(Its been quite a while now... is anyone there? :/)

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Right, sorry for the delay. This app is very well written, but there's one thing that's been nagging on me. Reading the Character Summary by itself, I get extremely large Pinkie Pie vibes from it. So much so that to me, if you replaced all mentions of "Caramel Smile" with "Pinkie Pie", it more or less accurately describes Pinkie. Now does this mean that you need to scrap your OC's entire personality? Not by any means, but all the same, try to figure out how you can edit the Summary so that Caramel doesn't seem like such a Pinkie clone characterization-wise. Emphasize those Pinkie-inspired attributes you feel are most important, cast aside a couple less important ones, and then maybe introduce a few things about your OC that wouldn't be associated with Pinkie Pie. I hope my advice helps you. :)

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