MLP Reboot Episode Outline

[ShineRunner]

I'm working on a pilot episode script for my own personal MLP reboot, because ya know what? I really enjoy  colourful horse creatures going on magic adventures where they kick tail and learn empathy and kindness. That is my JAM.

 

Anyways, I'm stuck on some parts of the outline/story, and I'm struggling to finish it!

 

Right now, I have a main character named Hopper who has to get rid of his Tantabus (a nightmare creature and spirit of self-harm that arose from Hopper's magic spells.) The pilot episode is about his journey through his fears, and the rewards that lay on the other side (friendship, acceptance, trust, support, etc.)

 

There are some key things I want to establish about the world Hopper inhabits as well, and how it differs from the original series.

 

Anyone have any suggestions? I have a Discord and Google doc, if you're interested in helping me create!