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I redesigned my OC as an original species, and renamed him!


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Behold, my old Star Apple remade into the new Sunrise Stardust!




Name: Sunrise Stardust
Age: 24
Personality: Charming, witty, and playful. He's the kind of guy who tries to act cool and mysterious, but he gets flustered easily when complimented.
Backstory: Born in the Wild West, his father was a farmer and his mother grew and sold flowers. None expected him to have mightier magic than most adults, but with his command over nature, he terraformed his dry hometown into a glorious natural paradise where food literally grew on trees. By the time he had turned six, the whole town had given up and relied upon him for everything. His daily schedule was so overfilled that multiple Sunrise Stardusts would be needed to complete it, but the ability to make more of himself was the second spell he mastered. When he got free time by delegating enough tasks to the convincing yet fragile "Sunrise Spares" he could create, he spent it riding on homemade magical hoverboards. 


When he turned seven, he met a new arrival in town, a girl whose magical might outshined even his. Yet she refused to do anything with her power besides train, and called him a fool for robbing the townsfolk of the chance to be self-sufficient. When he turned eight, using magic began to hurt. Yet he still felt he could not let his family or home down, not when they all relied upon him, so he left his hometown in search of more power, and she tagged along.


In an ancient mountain, there was an underground temple dedicated to an ancient Dragon king whose name had been scrubbed from history. Sunrise got past tricky puzzles and dangerous traps, passing secret tests of moral fiber with flying colours. But to get past combat challenges, her expertise was needed. Finally, he made it to the heart of the temple, where the power of the nameless Dragon rested. There was a stone coffin full of bones, there was a big stone on top, and that stone was pierced by a Dragon blade that also pierced where the Dragon's heart should be. Sunrise pulled the sword from the stone, only for its power to try to devour him. This temple was not designed to keep out unworthy heirs to the Dragon's power, this temple was designed to keep out unworthy sacrifices! Sunrise resisted with his own magic, even as his own overflowing magic burned his own body. Remembering his family, his determination allowed him to overpower the Nameless Dragon and take his power for his own, restoring his body with the might of that old spirit. The Nameless Dragon's power could create anything. With that ancient being's power sealed within him, he decided to keep the now-drained and useless Dragon Sword as a souvenir.


Finally, he had found more power. But that didn't solve his problem. His body wasn't mighty enough to handle all that power, so he went on a journey to train his body. Unable to use his ever-growing incredible magic without burning himself more than ever before, he was forced to rely on his speed, his physical strength, and the Nameless Dragon's ability to create things. Eventually, he found a mountaintop where other Foxes studied in their infinite library and trained in their hardlight dojo. They taught him how to be fast, tricky, and clever to win a battle. He expected to get buff in an afternoon and expected this to instantly solve all his problems, but instead, he trained until he turned sixteen. He had not mastered the art of absorbing magic and redirecting it, but he could still absorb power from the environment to grow swifter and stronger. He failed his graduation exam, so he abandoned his training and moved to the futuristic city of Bold Futura, where he proceeded to get rich making hoverboards and powerful magical weapons. Then his doctor told him he would die soon, because his incredible magic was killing him and the Nameless Dragon's might could only prolong his lifespan to his twenty fifth birthday. Believing this to be the end, he returned to his family and told them the bad news, only to find they had become self-sufficient and more prosperous than ever without him. He expected them to hate him for failing so many times in his journey, but they loved him. With the power of this love, he cured his terminal case of dying to gain immortal life.


What do you think?

Edited by SilverStarApple
lol i forgot the image
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