CrystalRain Posted May 12, 2023 Report Share Posted May 12, 2023 (edited) Roleplay Type: G4Name: Luna Gender: FemaleAge: MareSpecies: ChangelingEye colour: Blue and Light GreenCoat: Black and WhiteMane/Tail: Light Gray with White TipsPhysique: ConfidentResidence: A CaveOccupation: ArtistCutie Mark: Cloud with rainbow paint brushUnique Traits: Usually disguises as a Pegasus pony Disguises as a Pony named Luz. History: She lived w/ her brother after parents passed but her brother left and is now living somewhere and She has a scar over her left eye She likes to be alone but loves everyone! Her parents passed, and her brother left in search for better oppertunities for him. She got her scar from fighting a Ursa major trying to protect her parents when she was younger, She chose the cutie mark for the disguised pony because she loves painting and she apricates when it rains (it gives her some inspiration when it does.) She loves to talk and socialize sometimes but, it depends on her mood to be honest. Character Personality: Loner, Kind, cool, and collected and Loves her painting's!!!!Character Summary: She's a Good person but is very sad most of the time and it shows in her paintings (has a lot of Trauma.) Edited May 12, 2023 by LunathePegasus Change things up a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blueblood Posted May 12, 2023 Report Share Posted May 12, 2023 Okay, a few points before this is RP-Ready. Just so you know, the Roleplay type is there to indicate whether this character is meant for World of Equestria (Friendship is Magic G4 show setting), A New Generation (G5 show setting), or Free-for-All (Any setting). Given that changelings don't normally have cutie marks, I'm assuming that mark is for her disguised form? Which sort of pony is her favorite disguise? That can go under unique traits. (Kindess is not really unique: it's Equestria! Most folks are kind around here) The history could be expanded and cleaned up. Where were her parents? Did she and her brother move after they passed? Why did her brother leave? What is the closest city/town to the cave she lives in? Also, please use some proper sentence punctuation; a lot of folks prefer their RP partners to have good grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalRain Posted May 12, 2023 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2023 Just so you know, the Roleplay type is there to indicate whether this character is meant for World of Equestria (Friendship is Magic G4 show setting), A New Generation (G5 show setting), or Free-for-All (Any setting).- G4 Given that changelings don't normally have cutie marks, I'm assuming that mark is for her disguised form? Which sort of pony is her favorite disguise? That can go under unique traits. (Kindess is not really unique: it's Equestria! Most folks are kind around here)- Yes her cutie mark is her disguised form, her fav pony is Pegasus ( she don't have a fav Pegasus to disguise as). The history could be expanded and cleaned up. Where were her parents? Did she and her brother move after they passed? Why did her brother leave? What is the closest city/town to the cave she lives in?- Her parents passed, Her and her brother moved to the cave after they passed, her brother left in search of better oppertunities for him, the cave is close to Pony Ville. Also, please use some proper sentence punctuation; a lot of folks prefer their RP partners to have good grammar.- Got it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blueblood Posted May 12, 2023 Report Share Posted May 12, 2023 If you want to edit the post, click on the three dots in the upper right of it, the dropdown menu should give you that option Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalRain Posted May 12, 2023 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2023 Roleplay Type: G4Name: Luna Gender: FemaleAge: MareSpecies: ChangelingEye colour: Blue and Light GreenCoat: Black and WhiteMane/Tail: Light Gray with White TipsPhysique: ConfidentResidence: A Cave near Pony Ville Occupation: ArtistCutie Mark: Cloud with rainbow paint brushUnique Traits: Usually disguises as a Pegasus pony (does not have a favorite Pegasus pony to disguise as!) History: She lived with her brother after parents passed when she was young. Her brother soon left for work and is now living somewhere that she doesn't know. She has a scar over her left eye from an injury while still living alone in the cave.. She likes to be alone but loves everyone she happens to meet! . Character Personality: She is a Loner, but is kind, cool, and collected in how she treats ponies. She also loves painting!Character Summary: She's a Good person but is very sad most of the time and it shows in her paintings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blueblood Posted May 12, 2023 Report Share Posted May 12, 2023 I took the liberty of fixing up the grammar in the highlighted areas. If you're alright with the changes, let me know. Please keep in mind, that if you do not pay attention grammar in your posts, a lot of folks will not want to play with you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalRain Posted May 12, 2023 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2023 1 minute ago, Blueblood said: I took the liberty of fixing up the grammar in the highlighted areas. If you're alright with the changes, let me know. Please keep in mind, that if you do not pay attention grammar in your posts, a lot of folks will not want to play with you. Okay! Got Ya! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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