completed pony project for class

[Angie Cakes]

I got my project back~~

overall: 21/25 - 84%

create origional texts 4/5

ideas and focus 4/5

organization 4/5

enhance artistry 5/5

grammar, splling, CaPiTaLiZaTiOn, punctuation!!!!!1!!111 4/5

comments:

Proud you were able to complete your work on time (I had sent an email asking for an extension, but I didn't need it)

I wish you had been a little less vague with the description of the reflection ( ??? description of the reflection? I don't know what this means)

interesting table of contents

well organized best and worst. good use of P.E.A.

ADs- very good visuals, would have liked a bit more uniquness to it.

memoir-needed a little better lead in.

article-well organized. Although the ending sort of contradicts the purpose of the article

the visuals are very good

[Kirby Krackle]

The Statue of Liberty can't throw up a brohoof big enough.