BURTRUM Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Name: Passion FireGender:FemaleAge:MareSpecies:Earth PonyPelt Color: Dark GreyMane/Tail Color & Style: Long Dark redEye Color: Dark redCutie Mark: A flame with a small black corePhysique: bit stronger than normal female ponies, also shorterResidence: Bit Outside Ponyville, near Sweet Apple AcresOccupation: Metal Welder, melts/smelts metals for jewelry, helps during harvest time on farms.Motivation: Nothing really, she just has her son (Chocolate Moose) and her brothers(Pomelo & Burtrum), and enjoys working hard.Likes: Children, art, events, working hard, and parties (secretly sweets too)Dislikes: Quiet, heights, bugs, healthy food, and ponies who are peppy all the timeCharacter Summary: Passion Fire has a young foal named Chocolate Moose and two Brothers (Pomelo & Burtrum)She may love her brothers, but she cant stand them, they tend to annoy her but giving her son bad habits and advice. She feels she has to watch out for them which tires her and annoys her. She often is to truthful and wont like the truth about her. She is easily annoyed with normal ponies trying to befriend and she much rather watch over fillys or rub hooves with country folk. She is also seen in town often with her brothers seeing blood is thicker than clashing personalities. She often hides her art for she actually hates being "main stream" but is often much willing to give a picture away for free to a close friend.Her brothers : Pomelo Taste: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=410Burtrum Gloom: viewtopic.php?f=32&t=399 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tam Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 I'm not really sure about the name and cutie mark when you character has almost nothing to do with Fire-relating tasks. True fire can be used for a sense of passion and determination but even that doesn't seem to float nicely here either. She sounds like your generic family pony which works well enough, specially since she's just an extra hoof for helping out on farms. The pop-art bit seems very out of place. Character is a little shifty, doesn't seem to solid. But I think with a little more planning and tweaks you'll get it stable. Approved so you can continue to find more about her through RP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haiku Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Could maybe turn that easily annoyed into a firey temper? "Passion Fire" extremely passionate about her work, and has a tendency to snap bluntly? It kind of fits the character description if you describe it that way, too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tam Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 That's a good idea! This is why I love people brain storming together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BURTRUM Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Thanks for the help! I totally think more into her, I just could think up anything fire related for her but being well, like Haiku said, Firey tempered. Any Ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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