A Sparkle of Light

[kal413]

Well, here's my first attempt at writing a serious story. I really think I may actually finish this one, but I need some feedback first!

So here's the first chapter: https://docs.google.com/document/d/18zA8niLJW2R3oWkklabB8_cantrPmUHRsmmIXFxxWgk/edit

I hope it's not too terrible.

Here's a brief synopsis if you would like: "A mysterious group has taken over Equestria and has turned the once-great society into a totalitarian regime. When a young pony faces her destiny, she may just uncover the real motives of the New Order and its leader, a creature much older than he seems."