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Finally, I submit Robikku Pegasus - Pony Attorney! :D


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Name: Robikku Pegasus

Gender: Male

Age: Colt [Teenager]

Species: Pegasus

Pelt Color: Blue

Mane/Tail Light Red Mane - A little messy/Black Tail - Neat

Eye Color: Green Eyes

Cutie Mark: Scales of Justice! { Based on the design in this picture

Physique: Fairly well-kept appearance, with no really obvious markings of note.

Residence: Currently studying Pony Law in Canterlot...although he commutes from his small one-story house in Ponyville which his folks helped rent for him some time ago. Currently doing some paid basic Odd-legal jobs around both Canterlot and Ponyville as part of his overall learning experience. Commutes on a regular basis to and from Canterville, but lives in Ponyville.

Motivation: His cutie mark was discovered when he found he had a passion for justice and doing the right thing, and thus his career path was based around that.

Likes: Chilli, Cinnamon-flavoured foods, a Variety of music, socialising...amongst many other things.

Dislikes: Ponies being wronged unfairly, excessively cold weather...other than that, he's pretty easy going.

Character Summary: Robikku is a fairly inquisitive teen in the latter years of his teens - he mostly enjoys occasional moments of quiet either in the clouds or on the grassy knoll by his house. He may not always have the most free time in the world, but he enjoys hanging around either on the clouds or on the ground by his house on a small grassy knoll.

For the most part, he's an easy going guy but he can get a little overly curious if something sparks his interest...although this may not always lead to being a good choice!

Normally a pretty considerate pony, he can be a little overzealous at times but usually means well in the long run.

He can often be seen going to the Pie's bakery to pick up cinnamon rolls - his personal habit of choice!

{ Any suggestions useful, really - I don't create characters that often so I forget/omit things. :) }

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Quick fix on age, since he's male you can get rid of the filly tag; he's just a colt :}

Secondly, it seems he spends a lot of time in Canterlot, but you have his residence as Ponyville; I was wondering if you could elaborate in your character why he would be living in Ponyville but commuting to Canterlot on a very regular basis. It would be my suggestion to move his home location to Canterlot (we need more ponies in Canterlot!), unless you have a really good reason for him to be based in Ponyville. Don't forget- he can still RP in Ponyville even if his hometown is Canterlot, just come up with a reason for him to travel!

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It just seemed like a good idea - T'was just his (Inherited) folks house being in Ponyville and thus he didn't wanna move away from it given the nostalgia value...so he's just kinda an idiot/fussy about the idea of moving elsewhere overall. He'd probably be in Ponyville more often than not, but he has ties in Canterlot which essentially keep him 'on the wing' every once in a while.

In this case, it's more of a characteristic choice than it is about convenience of location.

For the most part, it may just be easier to say that his studies are strictly his reasons for going to Canterlot, and the Rest mostly is Ponyville-based - that would at least help reduce the commuting issue, somewhat. Although if you DO need more ponies there, it sounds like it wouldn't be so bad a fit - his travelling to Ponyville could easily be something as selfish as he enjoys the bakery goods there and enjoys a good trip out there once in a blue moon. Along with the small amounts of PV based work, of course. XD

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Traveling to Ponyville here and there wouldn't hurt at all. Maybe he's visiting old friends and family? But mostly relays in Canterlot since studying for law stuff is very heavy stuff. Doesn't leave a lot of free time for anypony!

Approved.

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