DannyMirage Posted May 30, 2012 Report Share Posted May 30, 2012 I vectored a background for a scene in a Flash animation that my group plans to release soon.I could use some feedback on it, I think it's missing something...it's mainly going to be focusing in the middle (zoomed in) and pan up to the moon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parker_Izing Posted May 30, 2012 Report Share Posted May 30, 2012 Looking nice, but you know it depics the Moon as it was before the first episode right? (Unicorn head disappeared with NMM liberation) as a improvement the tree could use a darker green outline on the top. (like used on leave details) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crp_dude Posted May 30, 2012 Report Share Posted May 30, 2012 If you need to improve anything, see if you can add in some extra grass detailing inside the grass border, as it looks very bare and flat otherwise. Not excessive, just let people know that grass is there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyMirage Posted May 31, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2012 Thanks! I totally forgot that about the moon! and thanks for the feedback! I'll fix those asap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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