TortoiseShell Posted August 6, 2012 Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 Name: Tornado AliSex: FemaleAge: Young MareSpecies: PegasusPelt Color: Cornflower BlueMane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: White, long, braided mane and tail.Eye Color: Dark blueCutie Mark: Simplistic hurricane design.Physique: Solid, athletic.Origin: Lived in Cloudsdale her whole life. Both parents are pegasi. Her mother is a seamstress for the Wonderbolts and her father is a high-ranking official in Weather Patrol.Roleplay Type: Ponies & DragonsOccupation: Former cleric at the Cloudsdale Monastery. Currently moonlighting in Weather Patrol.Motivation: To get away from the Monastery life. She wants to follow her own path and might as well use the “gifts” given to her.Likes: Partying and having fun with ponies her own age.Dislikes: The voice inside her head, not having any true passions of her own. She hates that she has very little control over her own life.Character Summary: Tornado Ali’s parents had a real sense of humor when she was brought into this world. Her father, the weather geek that he was, got a huge kick out of throwing “Tornado” in front of the name her mother wanted to give her, Alison. Get it? Har har. Ali still doesn’t find it amusing.When Ali was a filly, she started having vivid dreams. One dream occurred more often than others - Commander Hurricane would come to her and tell her she was the chosen one; she must follow in his footsteps and bring glory back to the Pegasi. After a few months of these dreams, she awoke one morning to see her cutie mark had appeared, a symbol of a hurricane. She was confused; these were just dreams, weren't they? And wasn't her cutie mark supposed to appear after she discovered a true talent?In the weeks that followed, the dreams came more rapidly and strange things started to happen – she could do some magic, almost like a unicorn. Her parents caught her one day while she was playing with it in her bedroom and immediately took her to a doctor to sort things out. She had kept these dreams to herself until that moment, and as they were about to put her through a full battery of tests, she explained everything. The doctor had to hold back his laughter, and in the moment before he could call the Psych Ward, her cutie mark began to glow.Instead of the Psych Ward, they shipped her off to the Cloudsdale Monastery, where Commander Hurricane is worshipped Shaolin-style; meditation and training to fight, true to the war domain. The other ponies at the Monastery never questioned her story, which she refused to tell in her own words, so the doctor recited it.For years, she was forced to stay at the Monastery. She spent the rest of her childhood and adolescence there, where she would dully relate her dreams to the higher priests. The other ponies treated her like an avatar and would sometimes be scolded for treating her with more reverence than their patron saint. Along with her job as messenger, it became clear that her physical prowess and increased magical affinity were far and above the other clerics at the Monastery, most of whom had to train and pray very hard for their talents, whereas hers came naturally.And she was miserable.Her life was hijacked and she was never given the chance to develop her own interests, since there was little outside stimuli in the Monastery. One day, a group of university students, similar to her own age, were touring the Monastery. She snuck along in the back of the herd and pulled a few aside, begging for some company. This turned into a party in her chambers, and things got a little out of hand. She discovered she had very strong attractions to stallions, and when some of the elder residents came to investigate the racket, she was caught red-lipped canoodling with one of them. Despite her importance to the Monastery, they kicked her out on a forced sabbatical, hopefully to give her a chance to grow up and realize her true place at the Monastery – and to learn some respect.She went home and explained her unhappiness to her father, who was disappointed, but understood. He now lets her help out with Weather Patrol to earn some money, but her real quest is to discover who she is outside of her role with Commander Hurricane.Alignment: True NeutralDeity: Commander HurricaneClass: Cleric 4STR: 11 +0DEX: 16 +3CON: 10 +0INT: 12 +1WIS: 16 +3CHA: 10 +0HP: 15AC: 17 = 10 + 4(Armor Bonus)+3(Dex)DR: 0/ +0SPELL RESIST: 0SPEED: 60 flying / 40 landINIT: +3Fort Save: 4=4(Base)+0(Con)Reflex Save: 4=1(Base)+3(Dex)Will Save: 7=4(Base)+3(Wis)Base Attack Bonus 3SKILLS:Fly..................................8 = 3+2+3Heal...............................12 = 3+4+3 (+2 from cutie mark)Knowledge (Religion)........6 = 1+2+3Perception.......................5 = 3+2Stealth............................5 = 3+2ABILITIES:Cutie Mark: +2 to Skill check: HealChannel Energy 2d6Spontaneous Casting (Good)Lightning Arc (Air Domain)Strength Surge (Strength Domain)Low Light VisionFEATS:Combat CastingWeapon FinesseFIRST DAY’S SPELLS:Detect MagicGuidanceLightVirtueObscuring Mist (Air Domain)Comprehending LanguagesDivine FavorCure Light WoundsDetect EvilBull’s Strength (Strength Domain)Cure Moderate WoundsEnthrallShatterGEAR:Hoofguards 4 CGHard Headgear 6 CGMasterwork Chain Shirt 250 CGHoly Symbol, Silver 25 CGHealer’s Kit 50 CGRope x2 2 CGJust for fun, I used a pony generator to get an idea of what she'd look like: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starburst Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 The story itself is pretty presumptuous..Even the more obvious gods work in more mysterious ways.The last paragraph is great though.. Haha.. red lipped canoodling.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TortoiseShell Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 So...does that mean I should rewrite it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starburst Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Just the first paragraph about his appearance. Monks will worship just about anything with something in common with their god. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TortoiseShell Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Okay, I can do that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TortoiseShell Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 So I edited the original post with a more muted story. Hopefully this is better, and not so forceful. She can still be disputed as just having crazy dreams.Let me know what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starburst Posted August 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 Keep in mind that divine powers come from those who have a strong connection to the feelings, ideals, and traits of their deities. They believe that their actions further the dieties and that when they pray their deity grants them the power to cast those divine spells. This is true for all divine spellcasters, not just gifted ones. Any pony that believes in a deity and prays to them can have divine spells.Even rangers get access to spells for believing in a deity or in choosing to worship nature, they gain power through that connection which manifests through spells. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TortoiseShell Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 The vibe I was going for is that she has powers because the god wants her to - not because she's asking for them. Her dreams replace her daily prayer.If that's not going to fly, then the other idea Kirby had was that her parents were uber religious and forced her into the monastery. Nothing special in the eyes of the god, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kirby Krackle Posted August 7, 2012 Report Share Posted August 7, 2012 So what could be happening is momma and poppa Pegasus having more of a lawful good moral structure, ie Celestia. Our new hero requires something less rigid and more Lawful neutral so she rowdies herself out of Sun school with make-out parties and goes on to personally find Hurricane, who is a god that doesn't mind make-out parties. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starburst Posted August 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Lol. That's funny. Though I don't doubt that Molestia has her fair share of Makeout parties.And lawful good just means you're going to follow laws and typically do good things. It doesn't mean complete rigidity. You can do anything you could as most alignments normally as a LG. But that's fine. Dreams replacing prayer works fine to me, but she has to get the full 8 hours rest to have spells the following day. Clear? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TortoiseShell Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Got it Just need my HP rolled then (4d8) and I think everything is good to go as long as you approve! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starburst Posted August 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 3, 2, 8, 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TortoiseShell Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Excellent, my sheet should be done then, I edited the full post above with the HP.Just let me know how you want to proceed with inserting Ali. I'm so excited! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kirby Krackle Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 So that's it, right? When can the team meet her? I'm excited! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bramble Rose Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Oh, hey! I didn't even know about this thread!All righty, new gal. I like that character! Bramble would surely understand some of what she's going through ...Speaking of which ...How long ago was this party in the monk's quarters that got her kicked out? Cause Bramble was a University student... that could be a potential 'in' ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TortoiseShell Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Does Bramble like to canoodle? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bramble Rose Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 ha-heeeeeh. Bramble likes the idea of canoodling. He's always terribly awkward in trying to pull it off, though. Giving it a try and getting caught ... by monks ... mid-first-kiss ... and getting the gal kicked out of the monastary ... would certainly be par for the course. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starburst Posted August 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Pfft. I doubt bramble would go that far with anypony. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starburst Posted August 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 And you can enter as soon as you find a point at which your character would meet the group. If you have some ideas I'd be more than happy to hear them through private message. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bramble Rose Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Canoodling has a wide variety of meanings. It can mean snuggled up and kissing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kirby Krackle Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 How long ago was this party in the monk's quarters that got her kicked out? Cause Bramble was a University student... that could be a potential 'in' ...Wait, wait, I've got it. He WAS in that tour group, but Tornado Ali didn't make with the smooches because... well... stallions that look like stallions! There will come a day when Curtain Call has had enough, flip out and give Bramble a proper haircut. Then take him out to a bar. Then... wait, if can only Pegasi be the "Wingman"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bramble Rose Posted August 9, 2012 Report Share Posted August 9, 2012 That works too, and -Wait, wut? Cut his hair? Noooo! He looks even more girly with short hair! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kirby Krackle Posted August 12, 2012 Report Share Posted August 12, 2012 That works too, and -Wait, wut? Cut his hair? Noooo! He looks even more girly with short hair!Not the way Curtains would cut it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bramble Rose Posted August 12, 2012 Report Share Posted August 12, 2012 . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starburst Posted August 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2012 You're free to "Bump into" curtain call right now if you prefer Tortoise shell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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