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Hay there reader,

I've been working on a MLP fanfic for a while and to be honest, it's not going anywhere. I do get my chapters written up regularly, and now that school is out I have more time to work on it. But the fact remains that my writing needs improvement. I don't know where to go to get any tips or help, so I thought I would give a url to my story and/or somebody could tell me where a resource to get help or tips would be found. If you have anything to say, fell free to reply so that I can get a better idea of how to write.

The Fanfiction has ten chapters, and the fimfiction has four. I'm still deciding whether or not I should go on the path i made for myself in fimfiction.

http://www.fanfictio...e_b_Meteor_Pony

OR

http://www.fimfictio...from-the-sky...

Thank you for your time and have a nice day.

And yes my current roleplay characer is based off my OC.

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