Blueberry Reference

So cute!

Adorable even though I know she'd probably kick me in the face...

My only major critique is that the line that defines her left rear leg goes all the way up and links with her wing, making a very odd-looking division on her body. Perhaps it could be tweaked so it only goes up halfway? Also, her mouth is very difficult to see because of the colored outlines. Perhaps a top outline in black to provide contrast will fix that.

Of course, these suggestions should probably be taken with a grain of salt because I am a fail artist

Adorable even though I know she'd probably kick me in the face...

My only major critique is that the line that defines her left rear leg goes all the way up and links with her wing, making a very odd-looking division on her body. Perhaps it could be tweaked so it only goes up halfway? Also, her mouth is very difficult to see because of the colored outlines. Perhaps a top outline in black to provide contrast will fix that.

Of course, these suggestions should probably be taken with a grain of salt because I am a fail artist

Changed the leg because I noticed what you meant as for the mouth I'd prefer not to change that so the black looks ugly (To me)

:3 I'm not sure if you did this on purpose, but the way you can see the bottom tip of her left iris (our right) but not the other kid of makes it look like she's winking at us.