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    Flash offered to take Marble to the free fall test. [colour=#ff0000]"Sure!" [/colour]He responded, still enthusiastic about doing well on the Dizzytron. He didn't really need training on the free fall, but it was always something fun for him to do. Besides, one can never practice too much.
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    Flash explained a way to fight off the dizziness. He then demonstrated it, taking the medium speed, and landed quite well, with a very good time. Marble nodded back at him as it was his turn. He selected the lowest speed again, still not able to fight off his anxiety. It began spinning, and Marble began focusing on Flashbomb. He was sent flying into the air again. He fanned out his wings to stop himself, and charged down as fast as he could. He kept focused on Flashbomb. He wasn't as dizzy as he normally was. He kept his hooves in front of him, and his eyes on Flash. He then landed, though wobbly. [colour=#ee82ee]"10 seconds. Good job." [/colour]The instructor said to him. Marble was quite overjoyed, and gave Flash an enthusiastic brohoof. [colour=#ff0000]"I finally did it!" [/colour]He then wobbled over, temporarily forgotten about his dizziness. He gave a nervous laugh, and tried not to let his fall bother him.
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    Knight heard something interesting behind him. The fillies were offering a game of truth or dare. Knight tried ignoring it at first, though was more tempted when Slick asked them if he could join. Feeling bored, he got over his shun and spoke up. [colour=#b22222]"May I join?" [/colour]He asked the purple filly, still keen on ignoring the colt sitting with them.
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    Marble heard a familiar voice, and looked up. Flashbomb was there to help him up. [colour=#ff0000]"Thanks." [/colour]He muttered, rubbing his head where he crashed. [colour=#ff0000]"I don't need to do good, I just need to land." [/colour]Marble got back in line to try again, as if it were a game. It seemed some of the other cadets were treating it like a game. [colour=#ff0000]"Got any suggestions?" [/colour]Marble asked Flash. [colour=#ff0000]"I can stop and change direction just fine, but I just get so dizzy, I can't stop twirling."[/colour]
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    Marble got his chocolate milk from the mess hall. A loud blast went through the air again. Marble knew Flashbomb must have done his Flashboom again. It was strange to think that he was no longer surprised by it. A sonic boom seemed like a normal performance now. He stepped out of the mess hall, and sure enough, he saw Flash zooming at impossible speeds by the Wing Power test. Marble remembered his goal to do better at the Dizzytron. He flew off to the Dizzytron runway, and went in line to practice more. He eventually made it to the front, and took the lowest setting again. He was hooked up, and the anxiety of what was going to happen set in again, though this time he was better prepared. The Dizzytron started, and after Marble was able to hold back from vomiting, he was sent flying. He fanned out his wings to stop twirling, and flew for the runway again. Unfortunately, he was still very dizzy, and crash landed a second time. [colour=#ff0000]I still have a lot of training to do.[/colour]
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    Lyria's yelling interrupted their fighting, and snapped Marble back to reality. The fight stopped, and Lighting Dust walked off. Marble glared at her, and she returned it. He saw Lyria fly off angrily. He didn't blame her. He was angry too, though he was able to control himself again. Angel appeared, and like any teacher, gave him a warning about punching a mare. It wasn't the first time he got in trouble for it, and he knew it wouldn't be the last. [colour=#ff0000]"Sorry." [/colour]​Marble said to Angel to satisfy him. It was completely insincere. Marble had no regrets for defending his friends from his enemy. [colour=#ff0000]"I need something to drink. Sir." [/colour]Marble walked away to the mess hall to get chocolate milk. [colour=#ff0000]After this, I guess I'll go to the Dizzytron.[/colour]
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    Before Marble realized she was fighting back, she had already tackled him and was hitting him back. He was about to push her off and fight back when Flash tackled her down, and they began beating each other up. Marble flew over and began assisting Flash with fighting Lightning Dust, not caring about their unfair advantage. He was too mad to have thoughts of what was fair and unfair.
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    That was the last straw. Lyria, unlike Marble, wasn't holding back her thoughts, and was yelling at Lightning about her stupidity. Lightning, in return, yelled at her, causing Flash to yell at her, making a large yell fest. Marble was sick and tired of her, and couldn't hold back any more. He flew forward, and punched Lightning Dust in the face. Hard. She was knocked over, and blood was trickling down her face. [colour=#ff0000]"Would you kindly shut up?" [/colour]He asked, referring to everypony yelling at each other.
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    Flashbomb and Marble eventually arrived back at the academy. Everypony was at the runway, including Lightning Dust, and appeared to be in pain. Flashbomb asked what happened. Lightning Dust began yelling at him, blaming him for hurting her eyes and deafening her. Every muscle in Marble's body tensed up, as he held back from tackling her. [colour=#ff0000]"Don't listen to her." [/colour]Marble told Flash, the tenseness and anger in his voice very clear. [colour=#ff0000]"You did nothing wrong."[/colour]
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    Lyria began flying very high up very fast. Marble was slightly worried as she became barely a speck in the sky above them. She disappeared behind a cloud, and he just hoped she was resting. Flashbomb then apologized for leaving Marble behind. Marble didn't see Flashbomb's mask until then, and flinched when he saw it. [colour=#ff0000]"Er... It's okay. You didn't leave me behind, I stayed behind." [/colour]He looked up again, and saw Lyria fly back down to the academy, and sighed with relief again.
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    Hello everyone! I'm Fireraven23, I'm sure some of you recognize me. I have been brimming with ideas for pony fanfics, and recently, I have decided to enter the wide wide world of fanfics as a writer. I am hoping for some suggestions. About anything related to writing really. Whether it's about how to get it popular, helpful things to know, things people want to hear, or some ways that help you guys in writing. I'm open for trying about any suggestion, as I want my first fanfic to go over well. Thank you for reading this, and thank you for your suggestions!
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    Everypony seemed ready to leave. Marble kicked off the ground with the rest, and flew back up to the Academy. He saw Lyria performing tricks on her way up. Marble decided he would practice doing that to. He performed basic tricks on the way up, aileron rolls and such, but nothing near what Lyria seemed to be capable of doing. He didn't really mind. He was happy to see how skilled Lyria was, and how she wasn't scared to show them off. She reminded Marble of his brother in that way.
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    (We still have a test and stuff, I think it would be funner to roleplay that, then have the sequal RP.)
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    Marble couldn't quite comprehend the situation. Three sonic booms at once, the daughter of Princess Luna appeared, and naturally, Lyria had no idea what Marble was talking about when referencing her looking at Angel. He didn't want to confuse himself more, so he shook it off. Flashbomb then tackled Angel to the ground, and finally won the game. [colour=#ff0000]"Gratz Flash!" [/colour]Marble congratulated him. He looked back up at the academy. [colour=#ff0000]"Should we go back up? I really think I could use this day of free for all training." [/colour]​Marble was still embarrassed about his failure at the Dizzytron, and wanted to at least land correctly on it.
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    Marble had finally reached the ground. He free fell for a while, then fanned out his wings for a nice soft landing. It still took a while, and by the time he made it, the situation seemed over. Oddly, everypony seemed fine. Marble was very confused. [colour=#ff0000]"Erm... Can somepony tell me what happened? What was that explosion? Wasn't there a unicorn here a minute ago? Why are you looking at Angel like that Lyria?"[/colour]
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    (Took me a while to realize my original response didn't get posted.) The filly introduced herself as Licorice Black. She was like most fillies who came to the host club. Looking for attention, falling for the hosts, and of course, fangirling everywhere. She asked what they did in the host club. [colour=#008000]"You may call me Alba, my delicious Licorice." [/colour]He punned, enjoying her name. [colour=#008000]"Here at the Celestia Host Club, it is the job of a host to make a mare happy. We talk, we listen, we eat, and on some days, we have other fun activities. You should definitely consider coming for the Nightmare Night contest we host every year." [/colour]He always loved talking about the host club. They were his family to him, and considering himself the father, he loved showing off the achievements his 'children' had accomplished. [colour=#008000]"It seems time for classes to start. Woe is me, our time apart will be time spent in Tartarus. But it will be worth it when I see you again today?" [/colour]It was a question. He always wanted the most customers, so that meant charming them to return to him.
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    (A lot sure happened while I was gone XD) Marble waited in a cloud for something to happen. Flash challenged Angel to a game of catch, where they would have to hold down Angel for five seconds. Spitfire then offered to give them a record on the wall for winning. Marble joined in, but quickly left when he came up with a new strategy, which wasn't working out. He had waited a while in the cloud, poking his eyes out to see, so he could sneak on Angel to pin him down. But he wasn't anywhere near there. He thought his plan was a complete failure, and felt stupid for thinking of it. The light of a sonic rainboom was visible, followed by a very loud, nearly concussive blast. Marble knew there was some rainbooming going on. He flew back down to the academy. By now, Lyria or Flashbomb had caught Angel. He hoped it was Lyria, that would mean Marble would win his bet. He then heard yelling. He looked over the edge, and saw Angel flying after Lyria, who was falling. They were too far away for Marble to do anything, so he stayed in his place, hoping it would all end well.
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    While Knight was shunning the fillies behind him, he heard one of them talking to him again. She was apologizing to him. [colour=#b22222]"Fine." [/colour]He accepted her apology. She wasn't even the one he was mad at. She wasn't the one who needed to apologize. It was the colt that was with them. [colour=#b22222]I'm sexist? That stupid filly lover isn't any better than me. [/colour]Slick seemed to notice Knight's pouting, and asked if they were still 'bros'. [colour=#b22222]"Yeah, don't worry. We're still cool." [/colour]He then gave Slick another brohoof to make reseal their friendship. Edited for inappropriate language on a G board. Please watch the language- Manestream.
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    Flash told Lyria about their morning. Marble giggled remembering Flashbomb's struggling and screaming. He then returned to his third wheel-ness. Flash seemed to notice. [colour=#ff0000]"Huh? Oh, er, nothing. Just... Hectic morning." [/colour]Marble then yawned to seem more tired.
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    As Marble talked about Lyria, she called out to them from another table. Marble couldn't believe he didn't notice her. Him and Flash took their treys and moved to Lyria's table. Marble continued eating, not minding the generally tasteless food. Flash took the conversational ball, and Marble decided to be the third wheel again. (Marble is best third wheel!)
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    Cheerilee asked for Pawn to elaborate. As she is a figure of authority, Pawn couldn't say no. He put his book down to try and say more. [colour=#808080]"I am perfect. The one next to me is a lowlife. Anything more you need to know?" [/colour]Knight, naturally, didn't take kindly to Pawn's insult. [colour=#b22222]"He's crazy, that's all you need to know." [/colour]He told Cheerilee, still refusing to look at Pawn.
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    Flash explained the rules of the bet. Marble nodded. He trusted that Lyria at some point would be able to break a record, since she was able to do a sonic rainboom by accident. Twice. She was very clearly an expert flyer, and probably didn't even need to join the Wonderbolts to prove it. Marble look around, and Lyria and Angel weren't there yet. He looked at the clock, and saw it was a bit early. [colour=#ff0000]"I think your screaming woke the stallions up early." [/colour]There were practically no mares in the mess hall. Marble felt a bit stupid for getting up so early, but he guessed nopony could go back to sleep after watching Flash squirm when getting his needle.
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    Cheerilee stepped up to the front of the class. As with most years, she asked for everypony to introduce themselves. Air Siren was giving his normal ramblings, making Knight smile, and somepony else named Fresco gave an introducation, basically saying everything she liked. Knight stood from his seat to give his introduction. [colour=#b22222]"Hey everypony! I'm Knight, the super awesome dude! Ya' better watch out, or I'm gonna' getcha'!" [/colour]He threatened the rest playfully. Pawn's reading was interrupted when the teacher stood up to introduce the class. Pawn sighed when it was his turn. Every other pony managed to say more then anypony needed to know about them. Pawn wanted it to be over with. [colour=#808080]"I am Pawn." [/colour]That was all he said before sitting down again to restart reading.
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    Flashbomb accepted the bet, even though Marble meant it as a metaphor. Flash bet 10 bits that Lyria wouldn't break a record. [colour=#FF0000]No turning back now. [/colour]Marble thought. [colour=#FF0000]"You're on!" [/colour]He gave Flash a brohoof of acceptance. Marble hoped that Lyra either broke a record, or he could give Flash an IOU. He didn't bring any bits with him.
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    Flash nodded in agreement and returned to Marble's back. He had almost forgotten that he had to carry Flash everywhere until his leg healed. He still didn't mind, though his back was getting slightly sore. They walked over to the mess hall, and Flash took his place ahead of Marble. They got their tasteless food, sat at their normal spot, and waited for Lyria and Angel to join them. [colour=#ff0000]"How many bits do you wanna' bet that you and Lyria will break an academy record?" [/colour]Marble challenged him, taking a bite from his food.
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