ONWARDconwardicus

Paragraph placement will be changed, and I'll add some whys in too. I never knew pony creation could be this hard.

Thanks for the guidance. I will take those into account.

I have two OC's right now. One for my fanfic and one I use on this site. I like the name "Lon" So they both go by that, and they both have extreme amnesia, but that's as far as the similarities go. My OC I use here is a detective. He asks questions about anything and everything. He does this because he lost everything when he had amnesia and is looking for stuff to fill the hole he has in his head. This realates to me somewhat because I also like asking questions. It helps me understand what I don't so I'm not afraid of it anymore. My OC in my fanfic has a special talent of sacrifice. As in he willingly gives up his own time or personal objects to help other ponies. He will help whenever he has the opportunity, And he believes that what he has is needed more by somepony else. This relates to me because I also like to go out of my way to help people, and I often feel the need to help someone by giving them what I have.

My motto i have is ONWARD *point up towards the horizon*. Both the pointing and the caps are needed to make it my motto. As far as conwardicus goes, It relates to my real name a bit, so i cant give too much info on that. And it many of my friends have told me they like the name, so it'll probably stay around for a while.

Hay there reader, I've been working on a MLP fanfic for a while and to be honest, it's not going anywhere. I do get my chapters written up regularly, and now that school is out I have more time to work on it. But the fact remains that my writing needs improvement. I don't know where to go to get any tips or help, so I thought I would give a url to my story and/or somebody could tell me where a resource to get help or tips would be found. If you have anything to say, fell free to reply so that I can get a better idea of how to write. The Fanfiction has ten chapters, and the fimfiction has four. I'm still deciding whether or not I should go on the path i made for myself in fimfiction. http://www.fanfictio...e_b_Meteor_Pony OR http://www.fimfictio...from-the-sky... Thank you for your time and have a nice day. And yes my current roleplay characer is based off my OC.

I didn't know this thread existed when I made my signature, but read it if you want my reply.

Thank you for the constructive questions. I did have a character pre made when i came to this site, but then i read some rules and i had to abandon him. i will get started on it right away. And to all that are reading, have a nice day! Edit: Hope that sattisfies some questions, though i probably created more. i have background info on him, I just wanted to portray some of it in the forums.

Sure. That's what the rubric said to to but i'll unbold.

Just want to say two things: 1) Good luck with your roleplaying 2) Wherever you are, good morning, good afternoon, good evening, good night, and all that.

It's going good, I just want to find a name better than Lon Lee, because my friends told me it's not pony enough.

Roleplay Type: Mane Name: "The Equestioner" is what he calls himself, but he lets ponies call him "Lon". Sex: Male Age: Stallion Species: Unicorn Eye Color: Dark Green Coat Color: Light brown, tan dots around his hooves and forehead. Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Short black mane, long, full black tail. Physique: Wide hoofed with bigger than average eyes Cutie Mark: Three blue question marks all sharing the same point. Origin/Residence: Unknown/A large hole he dug in a hill nearby Ponyville Occupation: Questionare Extrodinare, looking into being a detective Motivation: Life's mysteries Likes: Puzzles, riddles, questions, answers, and finding clues to his past. Dislikes: Silence, Givaways, and loud sounds Character Summary: Silence is welcome in the home of The Equestioner. In his hill home he dug out himself, he can sit back, get a question that was submitted to him off of his desk, then stare out the window and ponder. He can think for an hour on a single question, at which point his timer goes off and he moves on to the next question. There are just too many questions in the world for him to do more than an hour on one alone. The name Lon was given to him by neighborhood jokesters. As a foal, he would often sit out on the lawn of his parent's house. They joked that he actually became part of the lawn itself he sat there so long. And he decided to go along with it. He didn't know how to spell too well at the time, so he wrote his name as "Lon" instead of "Lawn". His birth name wasn't used even by his parents because of his insistance to keep 'Lon', so it has been forgotten by everyone but his and him. His cutie mark appeared when he won his school's game of Jepony (Jepordy for those who don't get the pun). He had the highest score any of the teachers had ever seen. Needless to say, he still has his trophy on his wall. He had a foalhood earth pony friend named Reina. She was born blind, while Lon was born sensitive to bright flashes of color. But besides the opposites of the eyes, they were perfect for each other. Lon would come up with questions, Reina would come up with answers. Or at the best, a hypothesis. Everyone that saw them growing up would say they were going to get married someday. Then trajedy struck. While he was a colt, his parents died from a failed train car link that sent their car flying off a cliff. Lon was sent to his aunt and uncle, far away from Reina. Having everyone he had ever loved torn away from him in less than a week, Lon started asking life more depressing questions. He grew detatched from everypony, not wanting to get hurt again.As soon as he became a fully fledged stallion, he left his aunt and uncle's house and took the next train back to where Reina lived. But the house was empty. He of course inquired the nieghbors about Reina's whereabouts, but it turns out that Lon leaving had sent Reina into a simalar slum that he had been in. Blaming himself, he set out with a new purpose in life: Find Reina. He often finds himself helping other ponies when they are confused. He gives them answers that are straightforward and will avoid lying to anyone unless they irritate him, which only happens when he doesn't get answers. He found that he is particularly good at finding out what is going wrong in a bad relationship between two ponies, and uses this talent to abolish that wrong in the relationship so the two can get along. He has actually taken a self appointed job as a relationship counselor. He counsels by asking questions that lead to the root of the problem where, hopefully, the two other ponies see what there is between them and resolve to get rid of it in one way or another. He found this job after he had helped an arguing couple become friends again and saw the potential in it for some bits. He is not greedy with his job though, and doesn't ask for payment unless the couple is satisfied. He has trouble fitting in with others at the start of meeting them because of his habit of asking every pony he meets a series of questions he has written on a list. Most of the questions on the list are related to his past, but some are just to get to know the other pony. He tries to find Reina by saving up bits for verbal advertisements to send throught Equestria and hiring private investigators. He has not lost heart over the many dead ends he has come across on his search, but the big question remains: "Where are you Reina?" "Life is full of questions. Whenever I find one I write it down and put it in that crate over there. Or if the crate is full, I put it on top of the pile on my desk. Do you ever think of questions? if you don't have questions, then I have some for you. What is beyond Equestria? What is the taste difference between cheese wheels and cheese cubes? Why is it that there are no queens here? Those are very popular questions that happen in my mind. but they will be figured out eventually. By me or some other pony who likes mysteries.But still most likely by me." "Now, before I go on rambling about everything I have discovered, everything found, and everthing that had once been forgoten, I need to know something from you. How would you like to go on an adventure?" "No? You're never going to find anything out that way." "Yes? Then where would you like to start? I suggest with the crate. There's bound to be something good in there."

Welcome to Canterlot! Even though you were here before me, I'm not great with memory so I don't care!

i know right. it took me forever to find this one, and it seems good. So far >.> <.<

About Myself: west coast, like to LARP and play DnD, How I found Canterlot.com: Google search How I became a fan of MLP:FiM: Saw the show and decided to keep seeing it. My favourite main cast pony/s: Twilight Sparkle ONWARD! That's my motto. As i said i am into LARPing and D&D, and i like to make my own foam weapons. other than what I've said before there isn't much. Oh yeah, I also strongly believe that Twilight shold have a boyfriend, and have written my own storyline of it. Not sure if i am allowed to post link, so i won't and just look up if i can later. Anyways, thats me. Now go on to another person's into. ONWARD!