TasteTheRainbow

I notice how her talent and her goal do not really fit. Teaching birds and singing makes me think she has a calmer personality, and she wouldn't want to be flying with the Wonderbolts. It shouldn't be bad if you don't change it, but I feel like she had a large personality change. If so, maybe you should add more in about that. How she felt sad about probably never being a Wonderbolt, as she could not see. Then, maybe, finding a new goal. I also realized you mentioned a Pinkie Promise. I'm rather sure that if your character doesn't know Pinkie, than she probably won't know the swear, as I don't think it went all around Equestria. Another thing, you say she's a mare. This means she's an adult, but it seems as she more of a filly to me. Especially since she's still living with her family. I think you should also explain more about her cutie mark! I think you should add maybe, how it felt, and if she realized what it exactly meant. I might also want to add, this is my first time, so... sorry if I just completely messed all that up....

They both look like fun. I think Equestrian Missionaries is the most interesting...

Roleplay Type: World of Equestria Name: Passion Fruit Sex: Female Age: Filly Species: Pegasus Eye Color: Dark purple, usually dull. Coat Color: Lavender, or just say a light purple. Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Unruly powder blue mane, just a little below her head. Tail, is also powder blue, and is just as loopy and curly. Reaches a little lower than the middle of her hind legs. Physique: Rather tiny, with more rounded features. Maybe a little taller than average, but not too noticeable. Cutie Mark: Three fruits, making a happy face. The smile is made by a banana, the right eye made by an apple, and the left made by an orange. Got her cutie mark after mixing two fruits for something better. Origin/Residence: Passion is from Cloudsdale, and goes to many places before moving back to Cloudsdale. Occupation: She now moves boxes, even though she has no interest in it. Motivation: Her motivation is mostly her parents, and the thought of going back to Ponyville. You can guess her relationship with her parents! She also likes to know she will be with her childhood friends once again. Likes: (optional) The color teal, new friends, blending fruit, foals, gardening, outdoors, smaller creatures, and talking. Dislikes: (optional) Shy ponies, most gossip, broccoli, ponies who know more about plants, hot days and scary stories. Character Summary: Passion was an only foal, who lived with her mother and father. She was born in Cloudsdale, the place most pegasi were born. Flying was more difficult for her, as she was easily distracted from anything she happened to be doing. The fact that she passed flight test was the mere fact that no birds had happened to fly by in the distance. Passion, also, seemed to be very picky at first, but in a couple of years, she ate about anything. By then, she had grown some more, and she liked to call herself a 'filly,' but she wasn't there just yet. Her parents were still happily together, as always. The thought of how they stayed so close was maybe because they ate dinner at the same time all ate one table and talked to each other. Or, maybe, they were having problems, but hid these things from their sweet little foal. Whatever the reason, they stayed tightly knitted together. Well, sometimes a thread or a few would break loose, and a young foal would run off to see her friends. Passion's friends, however, weren't much of friends, but teachers. Passion, being the youngest of the pegasi, was the only one who could not yet fly just quite right. "Wait, no, go that way." "Just look forward!" "Oh, darn it! You were so close. I told you to go that way!" All the shouting for the pegasi really knocked her off course. Though, she did suppose she wasn't really training her eyes on the goal. She did wonder how those birds just jumped out of the nest and started to fly. How she wished she were a bird. Who could fly.... Passion, one day, was walking around, trying to find a particular bush. All the bushes held berries, but there was one that would bare many plumb red berries, that tasted very good. They were also safe to eat, so they were the best! There were also some blue ones that could be eaten, but today Passion wanted the red. Her friends stopped by while she happened to be eating them. They all sat down and decided to eat some with her. One of her friends, however, could not choose which color he wanted. Passion soon got an idea, "I'll be right back!" She said, running to get a bowl. She came back with one, and dropped some red and blue berries in the bowl. She used a rock to mash them up, and gave the bowl to her friend. As soon as the bowl touched the ground, however, Passion gained her cutie mark! It was an odd sensation, and he friends pointed at her, "Your glowing, Passion!" The told her, and she soon gained her happy face cutie mark. She loved it, with its banana, apple, and orange. She realized then, that her talent must be blending fruits together! Now, after passing her flight test, which wasn't as difficult as she had imagined, her whole family celebrated. Her grandparents stopped in, along with her Aunt Clown Fish, who Passion might had liked a little more than the others. Her Aunt was more energetic for an older age, and loved to play with her, unlike her parents and grandparents. That day was great, and it felt like her relatives were walking out the door without the day being done just yet. Though, the day was done, and Passion was rather tired... Getting older meant being a filly! How soon it seemed to have come! Passion was absolutely bigger. She had grown quite a lot, really. Though, her parents were now getting older, and she needed to find her own place. Of course, she stayed with them as long as possible, which was half a year. Though, she had to move. She thought about staying in Cloudsdale, but she didn't think out upfront personality would fit. Many pegasi were shy, and it was hard to communicate with them. Of course, Passion could be shy at times, but not all the time! She found it rather annoying. She had heard of a place named Canterlot. It was were the Royal Equestrian Sisters lived! She headed for the place after packing and saying her goodbyes. She was just excited to see how wonderful the place must be. Getting to Canterlot was amazing. Though, as soon as Passion's hooves touched the ground, she felt so odd, and it felt weird walking. The ground wasn't soft like the clouds. Passion, however, got use to this whole, 'ground' thing, quickly, though. She soon was greeted by a mare, who noticed her landing and trotted over, "Why, hello, darling! You must come from Cloudsdale, I can tell by the funny way your walking. I'm Open Light, a resident here in Canterlot." Her voice was so 'posh' and Passion's was just, well, normal. She didn't think she'd fit in. Looking around, ponies walked around, all wearing something fancy. They looked tight and itchy, and Passion didn't want that. Passion, of course, went with Open Light on her tour, though. Passion would always remember that flash of color on Open Light. Her fancy teal hat sitting lightly on her head. It helped Passion realize her favorite color was teal. Passion, sadly, soon left Canterlot, hearing about Ponyville. Ponyville sounded nice and cozy, and when she got there, she soon found it was. Ponyville was the place for Passion! One of the first things that wanted her to stay was a party just for her, celebrating her arrival. It was thrown by a bouncy, pink earth pony, who told her many things, including that her name was Pinkie Pie. Another was a make over that Passion never did keep. Done to Passion, for free, by a fancy pony named Rarity. Even so, she wasn't like those Canterlot ponies. Passion liked the make over, but... well. It just didn't work out. Passion had to stay. How generous and friendly these ponies are. She'd fit right in! Passion happened to be right. She got a nice little cottage, but the only bad thing was... well, she needed a job. It took a week or three, but she found one. Passion's first job! She excitedly rushed to her parent's house, to tell them about her new job. Passion's new job was simple, as all she did was grow plants, really. With lots of other workers, she helped water and fertilize plants. Keeping them healthy and growing. Doing this job, reminded Passion of growing up. Her childhood. Now she felt all grown up. A job, a home without her parents, and she even when shopping for herself. Well, there was also bills, but she didn't like to think about them. Even though she missed her family way up in the sky, she felt so happy here in Ponyville, and that's what really mattered, right? She was happy. She had also made a friend. Her name was Flash Photo, and loved taking pictures. She was shy at first, but became really talkative. She works with her, but only for a little while. However, Passion only lived in Ponyville for a while. She left Ponyville when she heard one of her childhood friends, Saw Dust, to be exact, was tragically injured when moving some heavy boxes. At least, that was all she knew. He, however, lived in Cloudsdale. So, Passion packed for only a couple nights, because she knew she'd stay for a little while. When she got there, she realized her parents were getting older, and also didn't make much bits. This made her move back to Cloudsdale, buying her own house with the bits she got from selling her old one back in Ponyville. This also meant she had to give up her job, which was devastating. She soon found another job, which was moving boxes. She doesn't like it too much, but most other jobs already were crowded with Pegasi. So, she sadly had to take a job she wasn't interested in. Those boxes were really heavy, too. Well, she was lucky to get in. It was all because of Saw Dust, who did make it through the injury and returned to his job of moving boxes! Passion now still has the job of moving boxes, and her dream job is still to run a smoothie shop. She misses her friend and old job in Ponyville, but easily forgets about it, being with her childhood friends once again. She visits her parents very regularly, so you can say their relationship is very strong. She would also like to live back in Ponyville, and has considered maybe going to Appaloosa or Dodge Junction, instead. Though, for now, she stays in Cloudsdale, moving boxes and making sure her parents are okay.

Haha. Paradise? Gosh, its amazing, but...

Hey, bro~ Welcome to Canterlot, hope you have fun here. Well, I'm sure we'll have fun. We'll think something up, haha. I'll have to introduce you to some of these roleplays! They're so good...

I can multitask~ So, I'd happily roleplay with you, as well.

Perhaps they bump into each other at some type of event? Wedding or party?

Passion's eyes widened, her eyes like mirrors as they reflected the lights. 'Red, wait. Yellow, get ready. Green, GO.' Her mind told her what to do, and then her hooves and wings took over. She began to race, her hooves pounding louder than her heart as she raced, keeping with the rhythm and beat of the others racing around with her. With her eyes only on what lays ahead of her, though, she felt all alone. Only her racing on that track.

(hehe~ call me patches, if you happen to mention me again. haha. ) As Passion flew in for a landing, she noticed the gathering ponies, "Huh?" She wondered, with a turn of her head. Instantly, her face bashed against the streets of Ponyville, she rolled once, but it was enough to get her far enough to crash into a pony. After her stunt was finished, she tried to ignore the wide-eyed ponies looking at the two as she sat up. "Errrr. Uhhh." She shook her head, the unruly powder blue mane of hers tossing itself in a frenzy to catch up with her head's sudden fast movements of going side to side. After regaining her thoughts, she looked at the pony in front of her. "I'm sorry...." Passion side-glanced, obviously shy at doing this with a stranger.

Passion, however, was very startled by the appearance of many other ponies. "Why, I just don't know where we are. I don't know any of you either." She shook her head, trying to regain thoughts. She went to bed early, as usual. So, why didn't she wake up in her cozy bed, jump up, get a basket, and race off towards the market? How come she was trapped in a blank room with ponies she didn't know. She closed her eyes, only for a short while before opening them, excited. "Oh, yes! You see, if there is no escape... how did we even get in here?" She turned, facing the ponies, proudly. "There must be one around..." Though, she suddenly frowned, "Unless... it happened to be unicorn who trapped us..." She said, looking at the ground. "Well, we can look around, still, though, yes?" She asked, looking at them all with wide eyes.

Haha, that's awesome, bro. Thanks.

Passion, deciding to trust this pony, tilted her head, "What are you talking about?" She asked, 'Celestia? What does she have to do with all this?' She thought to herself, watching the strange pony collide into a wall. "Are you okay...?" Passion asked.

Its fine, I just thought you should know. And, yeah. I've been stalking quite a few boards. xDDD So. Ideas.

"Oh. Of course." She said, about to leave, then turned back, "You know where the furniture shop is, right?" She asked, just trying to be helpful.

As our Princess Celestia slowly lowers the sun, and Princess Luna raises her moon, all ponies in all of Equestria look up to the sky. Some stay and watch for awhile, watching the sky change before their very eyes. Others go inside to go on to bed. Though, after some time, all the ponies are too tired, and all of them go to sleep. Even the princesses. Even monsters that lurked around the Everfree Forest that day. Even the tiniest of insects. Everypony is sleeping, safe and sound. Or, maybe not... --- Passion Fruit, a young mare always woke up early. She did shopping every morning for fruit. It was all she really ate. Fruit, fruit, fruit. She was a master with it, know all about it and what to do with it. She knew a lot about herbs and such, as well. Anyways, she had to wake up and go to the market. Make sure the cabinets were full. Though, when her sleepy eyes started to open, and her body started to start up again, she realized she was cold. Her bed was as hard as stone. She rubbed her eyes, and pushed her long, unruly powder blue mane out of her dark purple eyes. Once her eyes adjusted, she sat up, in complete fear. "W-w-what...?" She said, the light purple pegasus was obviously confused. She backed up into a corner of the completely blank room. It was very, very large. She didn't even see the end of it from her end. Her eyes finally caught on to something... another pony. It was still sleeping. She feared waking it up. With how large the room was, she wondered how many ponies were really in here. The room, however, was completely blank. The walls still white. The floors were made up of tan tile. She saw no doors. No windows. No escape. (( passion fruit at the bottom. ))

She tilted her head, confused, "I didn't think you'd have furniture... Where would you keep it?" She asked, then regretted it. He obviously wanted to go inside for a while. She just thought to much. She was full of too much curiosity, really.

Oh, yay! Finally somepony shows up here! Haha. Alright, I'll do one with you. I've seen some of your roleplaying style, so... I also might want to add, that after a sentence, you would put a space. Like instead of... She looked around at her new surroundings.They were so different. It would be. She looked around at her new surroundings. They were so different. - It would go on commas, too. You don't have to go by that, but sometimes its easier to read that way. Sorry if I sounded like some stuck-up-know-it-all.

She stopped, in order not to crash into the house. She'd never noticed it before. When she came around here, she was always going to Sugar Cube Corner. How could she not notice a house right next to it? She shrugged, thinking she just focused on Sugar Cube Corner when she came around. "Oh, well then you'll be easy to find." She told him, turning to look at him. She would go ahead and trot off, telling him goodbye, but she didn't have much else to do. Maybe he wouldn't mind her spending a day with him? She could give him a tour. Ooh! She could take him to Rarity's Carousel Boutique! She giggled at this, thinking of how funny it would be to see him all dressed up.

She turned to look at him, "We have a hospital. You could work there, maybe. Or, you could make a small Clinic." She provided him all she knew. She really had never been to the hospital. She'd just seen it. She didn't really care too much about it as long as it was doing what it should.

She giggled, "Of course I do!" She said, trotting towards the place, showing him the way. Hopefully, he didn't plan on going inside Sugar Cube Corner, because Pinkie Pie would probably ask one million questions, and it got annoying at time. Actually, it did every single time.

Passion, who had been left, stood stranded in the streets on Ponyville. She finally trotted over to the building Roach had entered with the Mayor. She sat down and leaned against its walls until Roach came out. She felt almost like she was his little sister, there to bother him. She almost didn't notice him come out at first, but quickly stood and caught up with him. "Hello, again. If I'm to visit you, I need to know where you live... so... I thought I'd catch up with you." She explained, walking with him.

At the call of only two minutes left, Passion narrowed her eyes, focusing forward. "You can do this... you can. Hey? Who cares, right?" She whispered to herself, and those feelings started come. Her heart beated fastly, and her stomach got a nervous feeling, like when you're about to win something, but your afraid you might fail at the last minute. She loved this feeling, and she stretched out her wings, and folded them back in. She liked the feeling stretching gave her, as well, plus, she needed to make sure her wings were ready.

"Our mayor? She lives over there." She said, pointing a hoof at the tall building. (i didn't know what else to put. /hoofface -_(| ))

Haha, thanks. It was last minute thinking. It just kinda fit itself in there.

She gasped, "The Everfree Forest!?!!?" She blinked many times, "I would never go in there. Its so dark and scary. I would never want to even imagine what makes those noises...." She said, glancing in the direction of the Everfree Forest. Maybe when he first walked into the forest he didn't know. If he had known, she was sure he probably wouldn't have gone in. She though to much, she thought to herself. It was true, Passion thought things through.