TasteTheRainbow

(This is Patches, everyone... I was hoping to join as a little sister, maybe she could have been abandoned and a splicer has found her? I don't know how else to add her in...)

I, in fact, would like to keep this character! How awful it would be to loose all this writing... Anyways, its going great. I think I'm pretty much done here....

Passion noticed her other friend had run off from the crowd of people, and she turned to watch him run off. "Uhm. Sorry, again." Passion said, quickly running off to see what Roach was up to, anyways. She saw him go into his house, and she stopped. She she knock and see if he was okay? She wondered for a while, before running off to finally knock. After knocking she silently wait for the door to open, or something as an answer.

Passion bowed her head a bit, kicking the ground, "...Are you, uhm, okay?" She asked, as the ponies who were watching were starting trot off from the scene. Most acting as it never happened at all. "I get distracted, and... well..." She looked to the side, wondering why she was starting to ramble on about this. She shut her mouth, knowing she was going to say something stupid if she were to keep talking.

Passion watched the poor pony jump into a bush, and see the crowd of worried ponies get confused as to which accident to observe. She stared at the bush for a while, and stood up. "I'm... sorry." She said again, feeling worse then she had before. Maybe she should just go. Maybe the pony would like that better, since it was already terrified of her. She felt awkward just stand there, gazing at a bush, but she would feel guilty AND awkward if she were to just walk away. She glanced to the side, "Hello...?" She asked.... the bush.

('m so sorry for the delay! I feel mean. xD And, yes. It happens to be a game. They are suppose to be looking for a map to help them escape the building, but... they obviously don't remember that. I got the idea from this new game show..... yeah. ) Passion turned towards the new ponies, hoping they had some idea. he got fairly interested when hearing one talking like he knew what they were doing in the room, but then hearing he knew nothing just made her upset. "I'm Passion Fruit." She told the new ponies. "Forget about that pony, we need to get out of here!" Passion said, trotting beside the walls, looking for a way out.

Nicely. I'm still working out where she is living, however.

Fluttershy heard the odd, but cheerful voice directed towards her. She looked up from her blank staring at the dirt ground. Pinkie said she was trying to do something, but it was pretty dark, and she wasn't sure what that odd dark shape was up to. She, however, was very glad to know she was not the only pony in the dark room, and especially since it was one of her friends. She noticed the shape finally go over to her, and she, overly excited, hugged Pinkie. "Oh, I thought I was all alone!" She explained to Pinkie, but Pinkie liked hugs, and probably would have taken it even witout a reason. "Do you know where we are? I woke up... in here." She told Pinkie after breaking the hug. (I decided to reply. My impatient self.)

Hrm. Maybe she should stay in Cloudsdale... I'll change it, and try editing it a bit.

I considered that, as I've seen many posts about it. Though, I felt she wouldn't fit in at Ponyville, and I'm not exactly sure what Manehattan, Las Pegasus, or Fillydelphia are like. Help on those places or much anything about any other location would be nice!

... nope. my nickname is just patches. i use to be in this marauders thing.. and nevermind. i'm patches. that's all. xDD

oh. i'm sorry. have people been, lately?

She could be a Cloud Patrol pony. It would probably be harder for her, being blind, though. At least, I think its called Cloud Patrol. Maybe its Weather Patrol.... Hmm. Something like that. I'm pretty sure you can remove clouds in Ponyville or Canterlot, as well.

Nopony out to help me? Or, is it okay? I'll make it FINAL, later, if nopony has anything to say on it, I suppose.

(Tis okay. I fell asleep, too, so it only feels like I've been waiting 5 minutes. xDD )

Yes, I did vote, actually. Though, I'm not winning~ Haha.

"Hmmm. That's an interesting power." Passion told the unicorn, who had just shown us his special talent. Her talent with mixing fruits and such wasn't helpful, as there was no fruit to be found in the room. Passion sighed at the thought, and looked back to the unicorn, "Well, I don't see any harm in trying it out on the other walls." Passion said, though now her eyes trained on the foal. She wondered how long they'd be in here. She'd rather have the foal to be elsewhere, as she shouldn't have been pulled into this mess. She shook her head, thinking of how the foal would have to stay with.

Passion fastly galloped with the others, noticing most pegasi flying were now becoming fearful of having to run. Luckily, Passion got to fly the rest of the way. She narrowed ger eyes, focusing on the upcoming sign telling them they needed to prepare on switching ways to find the finish. "Maybe, just maybe, this little gardener may have a chance!" Passion told herself, excitedly. She couldn't wait to start flying, to stretch her wings and soar across the skies.

I don't exactly remember. Ponysquare or Deviant Art, most likely.

Princess Celestia walks out to her balcony, and starts to lower her sun. Everypony turns their head to the sky. Work is done. Playtime is over. Its time to rest your heads, she says with no words at all. As the moon is lifted, all ponies are tucked in bed. Well, all good little ponies are. There might be some still lurking about, those silly night owls! Either way, everypony is safe under the Princesses watch. Well, almost. -- Fluttershy knew tomorrow would be a busy day, as she would have to wake up early and go to the marketplace. She needed to restock on treats for her pets, and herself, as well. She yawned, obviously tired. Though, first, she tucked herself into bed, and said goodnight to all her friends. Even to Mr. Hootins, who wasn't going to bed until morning. After all those goodbyes, however, she was more tired than ever. She finally got in a comfortable position and started to sleep. The grass was wet from morning dew, and as Fluttershy walked through it, her hooves got rather damp. She lifted a hoof, "Oh, well. That's okay." She whispered, well, she said. Her voice always sounded like a whisper. She walked on through the happy little forest she seemed to have appeared in. She noticed a couple of shy bunnies peeking out from behind trees, and some squirrels watching her pass from there trees. She soon realized that not even her hooves were getting wet, her tail was, also. As it had been dragging along the wet grassy ground, absorbing the dew like a mop. By now, Fluttershy had reached this peaceful tiny clearing. As she turned to lift her tail from keeping it from getting too wet, her hooves slipped on such slippery wet grass. "Woaaaahhhh~!" She cried, scaring off some content birds around her. Now all her hooves were slipping around, and she kept going in directions she didn't mean too. She realized nearby was an odd cave type hole. The ground around sagged a bit, telling her she would make the ground cave in and she were to walk on it. Though, her hooves were determined to get her there. Finally, they achieved their goal, the dirt from the sagging ground helped stop her sliding hooves. She stood there, completely safe. She was afraid to move, however. She had forgotten she had wings, as she did a lot. Though, she finally, did break the ground. Falling, but she wasn't landing. Which put a damper on her screaming, as since the fall was taking so long she had to keep stopping to take breaths. She finally shut her mouth and eyes, hoping for the best. Fluttershy awoke, panicked. She was breathing hard, oh it was so terrible. How could a dream that started out so nice turn so bad? She wondered this, realizing the 'bed' she was on was rather hard, and she had no blanker or pillows anymore. It was also very dark, and she could not hear Mr. Hootins hooting. "Hello? Angel?" She called, hearing her voice many more times, her question repeated by the echo. She scooted back, looking for a corner to hide in, but she just kept going backwards. She realized her body felt different, and she was wearing something. Her hooves also felt different against the ground, but she couldn't see anything. She finally stopped and kept looking side to side, noticing a small light in the distance, but to afraid to go towards it. She started to cry silently, only making sniffling noises. Though, they sound so lonely in this quiet place. -- (Alright. Anypony who comes first, can join. We need one more roleplayer. The idea of this is ponies turned into humans and falling into Wonderland. then were randomly figuring out the rest. YAY. characters taken; Fluttershy - Patches PinkiePie - Hinata Stiches(O.C.) - Bronynumber O.C's allowed, as well. JOIN AWAY. Don't be afraid because of my post. i've never done anything this long, and it probably won't last. if wanted, you can start out just when your character is waking up from falling. )

Uhm. Thought I might go for Applejack? I'm Patches, btw.

I think you should tell more about his parents and his cutie mark. What did he do after getting a cutie mark? Did he even win the science fair? What did his parents think of his cutie mark? Did he even notice he was getting it? Did he get an odd sensation while getting the mark? I'd like to know~ I'd like to know.

I'd say there is much to be added! Such as her childhood. You mentioned her getting her cutie mark, but maybe there should be more to that story. How did she feel? Did her parents react oddly? For you ponies Physique, you should put a little more. In that section, you would put something like, "Somewhat taller than most other her age, and is rather skinny." When you say she finished school quickly, what are you meaning? She was a genius and it went by like a breeze, or did she drop out? And, on the record deal, you should explain much more. Even with the band, as well. Where did the band get the name idea? How hard was the competition? Who all competed? Was she nervous or scared? Also, I'd like to know where she found her band members! For motivation, you should put something more like, "What makes me jump out of bed in the morning is..." Her goal of wanting to be a rockstar should be placed in the Occupation section, as her dream job. You say sometimes she just wants relax, and not be noticed. When walking around Ponyville, having fans go after her, how does she feel? Maybe trapped? And for Likes and Dislikes, they are hard for me, too. I can never really come up with too much. Just try being creative. There are so many things you could like or dislike. Like, shy ponies, foals, enemies, friends, animals, crowded spots, etc. Those are just I couple I came up with. Its really easy, though. So, once you get creativity coming, don't get to out of box! Like, if she disliked Alicorns, but everypony still liked her. That probably wouldn't be true, because a lot of ponies love their Princesses, and they probably won't like you too much. Well, that's all I really have to say for now. Keep improving~