StarStorm

(Ooc: Let's see... We need a scene, say.. Ponyville? Lol:3) (Sorry it's so long!! Dx) Star lay by her pap in Ponyville's local hospital. "Doctor! This looks bad, doctor!" the masculine voice sounded frantic. "What is it, doctor?!" a second voice asked. "Doctor.. Her wings are broken look broken..." He paused for dramatic effect, then whipped off his glasses, "beyond repair." "Oh no, doctor! Added to the brain damage, she won't be very happy when she wakes.. Doctor." "AT LAST, I'VE FOUND YOU, DOCTOR!!!" A pony looking proportional to the other male pony jumped into the scene. "Oh, my doctor! It's-" The doctor held a hoof up to silence her. "My EVIL twin.." Star Storm: Star flipped the television show off. "Love and tolerance my flank.. I hate this show!" Her father had overdosed again, and she was with the stallion, making sure he was going to be okay. Star loved her Pap dearly, and if anything were to happen to him well.. She'd snap! ".. Is Pap gonna be okay?!" Star asked his doctor. Pap's doctor: "Why hello, Star Storm! Your dad seems to have a bit of a drinking problem, now, doesn't he?" Star Storm: "Maybe a little.. But it's not a problem.. He can stop whenever he wants." Pap's doctor: Or when his heart gives out.. I can't tell her that he's going to.. pass! Besides, breaking hearts was NOT in my job description.. "Well.." he looked at the severely unhealthy stallion, "I can't make any promises.." Star: Star held her father's hoof hopefully. "Why not?!" Pap's doctor: "I'm not at the liberty to confirm anything just yet." Star: "Why not?" Pap's doctor: "Because.. Somepony else usually will give those results." Star: "Well.." Star was stubborn. "How's he doing?" Pap's doctor: "I can't promise anything.." Star: "Why not?" Pap's doctor: He was starting to get annoyed with the little filly. He let out a big sigh, finally deciding he'd better just tell her. "Star... It doesn't look like your father is not going to make it. I'm sorry." Star: Star Storm bit her lip and crawled over her father. "You'll be okay, won't you Pap?" He just looked.. Sickly. He said nothing.. Nor opened his eyes.. Pap's doctor: "I'm sorry, Star Storm. You're father has passed." Star: Star ran out of the hospital in tears in hysterics, unsure how to feel about all of this. She ran right into some other pony, her eyes too watery to see who it was. But she didn't care. The news was just too intense for her mind to focus. "I'm sorry, okay?!" She threw her hooves around them, sobbing into their chest, making unidentifiable sadness noises. (Ooc: Heh, sorry if it's not exactly the type of thing that you were expecting.. x3)

Nyan cat could shatter that meteor with enough force. After you break the meteor into littler pieces, they'll be forever alone and just burn up in the atmosphere in their lonelyness. ^^ True story.

Good luck having that chisel survive through a river of lava!

(Ooc: Yeah, I'm toooootally cool with you guys replying whenever. The way I see it is, the more story the better! Shadows rules sound good ta me:3) Shade: Yeah, Star sure has a good eye for these things.. The young filly thought with a sarcastic sense. For.. Sale? "Star.." she whispered to her friend. "It's soooo cute, you GOTTA win it for me! You should do the talking or whatever, you're better at it.." Star: "It's okay.." Star still wasn't very fond of the creature. Shade threw her a certain type of look, as to say "pleeaaassseeee," Star reluctantly agreed. Shade: "Besides, I'll buy you all the chocolate milk you can drink if you can get it.. I guess.." Star: All the chocolate milk she could drink?! Now she HAD to do it! Chocolate milk is serious business. "Psst! ...Shaaaadey, what am I working with.." Shade: "We have.. I think about 65 bits.." Star: ... This is gonna be hard.. Star quickly raised a hoof up, ready to yell out. Sheesh.. EVERYPONY but ME wants this thing!... We're gonna need to get creative.. "I'll give you forty bits and we'll find you a special somepony! You like girls, right?!" Shade: "Star!" Shade was quite frankly shocked. She did NOT expect Star Storm to say that. How would we even find him somepony? Star: "Just see what he says, Shadey.. If everypony wants it then it'll just turn into an auction anyway probly.."

Never bring a knife to a gunfight.

Just today?! Congratulations! Welcome, welcome, come in! We're happy to have you! I love your pic, did you make it?

Shade: That's the cutest thing I've ever seen! Just LOOK at those eyes! The creature just seemed to bring her joy. "D'awwww.. It's so-" Star: "Lame!" an unhappy Star Storm interrupted her friend. Shade: "Come on, Star Storm.. There's gotta be more to it. I mean, he said it was magical or whatever.. Besides, it's just SO adorable.. I wish I had one!" Star: "It's okay I guess.." Star's attention shifted from the small fox, and over to the illuminated ball. "...So what's with the glowy thing?" Shade: "..Maybe he'll tell us in a minute.." Star: Star wasn't a very patient pony. "What's with that one?!" She pointed a hoof towards the white ball.

All fixed up! Good to go..? ^^

I like your style, Shadow. Hope you enjoy Canterlot! I'm pretty new around her as well.. Message me sometime, hmm..?

(Ooc: Cool! Finally something I can come in from the beginning of! I'm new around here too, welcome to Canterlot Shadow:3 Is it cool if I play two characters..? If no, I'll just send Star's friend away ^^ Also, if you'd like, my character descriptions are RIGHT inside my profile. Lol, because my interests are my ponies, apparently. x3) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Star Storm: Holy Celestia, it's cold here! Now, where to nap a coat.. She thought to herself. Star was broke as usual, and this fine city's weather was just NOT her cup of tea. She was used to sunny Cloudsdale, NOT freeze-one's-flank-off Stalliongrad. She noticed a conveniently near by kiosk. She grabbed her friend. "Shadey! ...You see that stand with the fuzzy jackets?" Shade: "The one right infront of us..? Yeah..?" Star Storm: "Well, look at the owner! He's not even paying attention." He was chatting with a customer on the opposite side of the two young fillies. Shade: "I guess.." Star Storm: "I could totally just grab a couple for us.." Shade: "Star.. Nyo.. That's really not necessary. My dad gave me money for the trip.. It's not like we're broke or whatever. I'll buy you a coat if you'd like." Star Storm: "Radical! Thanks, Shadey.." Star looked around a little, unimpressed with her surroundings. "He'd BETTER at least give us some bits if he sends us HERE for a vacation.." Shade: "He never picked the spot, he just won the concert tickets, remember? You should just feel lucky that he let you come with me. I guess he didn't want me to go on my own or whatever, but I thought he'd still be mad at you." Star Storm "You're right, Scamp.. I'm sorry Shadey.." Shade buys the jackets, a rastifarian type hoodie for Star, and a smaller, emoish one for Shade. She quickly put her new jacket on, then perked up her an ear, overhearing somepony say something about "a creature unlike anything you have everyseen." "Shadey! Did year HEAR that?! Let's go!" She dragged the little unicorn over to watch. Somepony cleverly asked if we'd actually get to see this creature. "Yeah! Show us!" Her attention quickly shifted to the pony who'd just asked about it as well with a look of excitement on her face. "This is gonna be so radical!"

Welcome to bronyism, Dashie! We're happy to have you here. Message me sometime, I'm pretty new around here myself You found this site the same way I did, by the way!

It's cool, they were all honest mistakes. Alright, well I'll fix her back up then:3

No worries, it's toooootally fine :3 Thank you for letting me know. I think I'll probably just change her back then. So.. After that.. Would you say she's good to go..? ^#^

Sweet, fixed her up ^^ Would be awesome to get her revaluated. Thanks bunches:3

Really? Thank you, I try! Although I love this character dearly, I'm more than willing to change her up some. I'll do it right now in fact:3

(First time application writing, please help me learn if I did anything incorrectly or if I need to fix anything. Thank you:3) Roleplay Type: World of Equestria Name: Star Storm Sex: Female Age: Foal Species: Pegasus Eye Color: Yellow Coat Color: Medium blue Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Mane and tail are jet black. Hair is big, like Vinyl Scratch's but without quite as many points. Tail is very short and spiky. Physique: Very thin, very short. She's a small pony. Cutie Mark: Not yet obtained, she has some growing up to do first Origin/Residence: Cloudsdale Occupation: Drop out Motivation: Star Storm would really like to improve her musical abilities, as she's still sort of new to her instrument. (Guitar) Other than that, she currently doesn't dream for much.. She might dream for a hoof to hold every once in awhile.. Mostly a better life. She's usually more concerned about trying to find a place to sleep that night. Likes: (optional) Star Storm absolutely LOVES chocolate milk! She also likes punk rock and being petted or held. She likes when ponies believe her fibs. She loves calling ponies "Scamp" and using the word "Radical!" Dislikes: (optional) Star is really really really reeaaalllyyy afraid of the dark. She hates being caught in a lie. Also, she is really cautious around nerds or know-it-alls, because she can't trick them as easily as other ponies. She dislikes breaking her wings. (She tends to break them fairly often) Character Summary: Star was born into Equestria as a mere child of nature.. an orphan. She was adopted by a stallion who was never really there for her, and sort of learned some creative ways to get by, even resulting to thievery sometimes. She called him "Pap." She really enjoyed the freedom of not having too many rules to follow, but knows in her heart that she has no desire to stay there. That IS where she's staying for now, however. She has a grandmother who lives very close that loves her dearly. She used to sleep at her house quite a bit, and still does when she can't find a friend to stay with. In the past, Star Storms grandmother has invited her to move in with her, but Star just doesn't like how she tries to civilize her so much. Star Storm can be a bit of a rascal at times. Gramma Storm gave her three plastic glowy stars, which Star would take with her everywhere. She always puts them up wherever her current "home" is, and seeing as she believes that home is where the heart is, she'll sometimes leave them with a friend that she is currently apart from, sort of to symbolically say that her heart is still with them. (But only if she knows she'll get them back!) When she was a younger foal, she didn't attend flight school (or regular schooling, for that matter) very often because she just didn't want to wake up for it, and then when she DID go to either one, she'd tend to get in trouble.. And then she'd just get in even MORE trouble for not going. It got so bad that she eventually just decided to drop out. Star Storm is very street smart. She's very quick with her mind, and likes trying to get ponies to believe things that aren't true, just to see if she can do it. She can become sad about things fairly easily, but she's definately a character, because she can change gears in a heartbeat. She's not strong, emotionally nor physically, but she is always very loyal to those who are truely her friends. Edits: (Thanks bunches for your feedback Mojo!) *Fixed living condition *Fixed occupation *Touched up personality a tad to be more in the spirit -Second time around edits- *Star once again is without a home *Star sometimes steals when she needs to in order to get by --Third time edits- (Thanks for helping me get her approved, Helix :3) *Now lives at home, sometimes with grandma

Woah, thanks guys! I'm still getting replies to this? Bronies are the best! It's official now, because I say so in my professional opinion:3 What am I a professional at? Being an noob, of course. I'm a professional noob xD But srsly, I'm feelin the love everypony

Thanks, all! Especially Talex for the link

How am I supposed to decide on that? It's like trying to pick a favorite pony! Lol, a tough decision, but I might just have to say.. I enjoyed the top one's visual a tad more..

Everypony's a little crazy, so it's all good.. Glad to have you! I'm new here too.. xD