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  1. aFlatmajor
    I actually saw this a few hours ago...It's in just about every recommended section for each pony video on YouTube. Anyway, I can't say it was good, but it wasn't terrible. I've seen plenty worse animated fanfics, and this is by far the best for me. Does anyone else think some of the ponies just look like OC's at a glance? Or is it just me? The animation was great for the most part, slightly choppy at a few instances. And while the little fillies and colts are exiting the classroom, (around 3:45) you can see a few of them vanishing before they completely go off screen. That's what is bothering me the most about the entire video...It's very upsetting. The voice acting could have been improved. It sounds to me as if someone should step back from the mic ever so slightly. Or get better recording equipment. Or, what ever is in their budget. The story, while touching it was a bit Mary Sue-ish...Blind girl does something inspiring / touching / feels inducing and becomes instant best buddies with Luna AND basically gets her own celebration of sorts. I do not approve. Seriously, that is one *Pinkie Pie is best pony* of a speech for a foal. Show analysis time!! So according to the teacher, Celestia and Luna have been in power for 100 years already. Assuming that's 900 years before the canon date, that's impossible. Luna should have been, IN THE MOON!! Unless of course this wasn't canon dated at all or it wasnt using anything canon for that matter... On another note? Is that Surprise, the original character design for PinkiePie, walking alongside HoityToity at 0:27?
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    Leave a priceless, wrapped up, softball sized pearl in the same room as a curious, little, "sleeping" filly? I'll be sure nopony lays a hoof on that precious object. Also, what type of building(s) do we live in? Log cabins? A motel? A log motel? I need to know if it's flammable Awoken by a not-so-sneaky-somepony, Dawn groaned. She was having an amazing ice cream dream, and now it's over...The filly took solace in the fact it was probably going to end soon anyway and lifted her head, gently rubbing an eye with her hoof attempting to clear her slightly blurred vision. She slowly rose to her feet hooves and slid off the side of the bed. [colour=#F62817]"Hello? Is somepony here?"[/colour] Dawn poked about the cabin. Searching under the beds, in the closet, under the sheets, inside of a pillow, inbetween the cracks of the floor boards, and inside of Shade's luggage. But she found nothing, save for a bright blue box on somepony's bed. But there's no way a pony could be hiding in there. Right? Disregarding this, she resumed her search. She stuck her head inside of the fireplace and looked up the chimney. [colour=#F62817]"Helloooo? Is there someone there?"[/colour] She pulled herself away from the chimney, unaware of large amounts of soot clinging to parts of her mane and coat.
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    ((One long and painful trip of being dragged around in a suitcase later )) After what seemed to be forever, the suitcase in which Dawn was imprisoned opened. The filly poked her head and front hooves out of the opening then sighed deeply, glad for the fresh air. "Free at last. Sweet Celestia, I thought I'd never get out of there." Dawn presumed to hop out of the suitcase and sprawl herself on one of the bed without interacting with anypony quickly falling asleep.
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    Sounds cool, but I don't think I can really post until Monday. Too busy busy for RP right now. I probably should have mentioned this. But yeah, most likely me no post RP until Monday.
  5. aFlatmajor
    RP's in the FIM Free-for-All aren't canon unless you want them to be. (I think, I'm probably wrong. I do know that Mane RP can be considered canon if you want it to though) Doesn't even matter anymore anyway lol. In Shade's luggage? Sure! While we're on the side of humor. And what will happen when the teacher finds out!? She could get...Detention! *insert gif here* I'll post when I can, or you can write me in when Shade goes through her luggage if you want. I'm fine with either one.
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    Name: Dawn Sunrise Gender: Female Race: Unicorn Brief History: TL;DR : Born -> Raised -> Celestia's School Gifted Unicorn -> ??? -> FIELD TRIP!!! Looks: Coat colour - Splashed White Mane / Tail style - Dawn's mane falls slightly lower than the length of her neck, the lighter shade being orange and the darker colour being a light red. Her medium/long tail has the same colour scheme as her mane. Cutie Mark: Unavailable Personality: Dawn is your typical, happy go lucky filly. Always having tons of energy and seems to be ready and excited for anything. She loves making new friends and is very friendly, even towards ponies that may seem a little inconsiderate towards her or other ponies. She is very loyal and will stick by her friends like glue. Oh, and she is also a leader, trying to lead others when ever she gets a chance. Likes and dislikes: She enjoys the light of day and warmth of the sun. Reading. Candy, sweets, sugar, etc. She doesn't like the night much, she finds it has a chill and unsettling air to it, but it's still welcoming. She's not a fan of rude ponies that don't have any concern for anypony but themself. Random fact: Dawn is a pyro-maniac and often sets herself on fire without realizing it. Also, I'm pretty sure Dawn is the youngest on this trip! She turned *insert age her* a few days ago!! Anything I left out..? ^^ : Yes, Stormy, you left out the adorableness rating. So: Adorableness (1/10): On scale of one through ten....Eleventy-Seven and four. (1174) Curious question: Can I be a stowaway!? It's always been my dream since a few minutes ago to have my little filly skip school to get an education!! Also, am I allowed to "accidentally" have the bus catch fire, endangering the lives of many students, a bus driver, and a teacher? And if not that, can I set other pony's manes ablaze? Actually, the fire questions were jokes by the way, I don't want to purposefully singe another pony.
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    Alright!! After many hours and lots of thinking, I did it!! I finally made an OC for this RP!!: Shifty I spent hours coming up with a name. xD And now, I make an app!!
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    I haven't even sent in an app and I'm approved? I never new I was just that awesome.
  9. aFlatmajor
    Airships!! Aww yeah!! I'm going to rule the sky with my super bad-flank vessel!! But srs, I'll probably use a one-man glider until I board somepony lol.
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    Also, I'll probably join who ever has the most kick-flank vessel Or I'll threaten to blow up their ship with a bomb I hid whilst incognito as a bluff to get what ever I want. GIVE ME ALL YOUR FEELS!! I ran out, lol
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    Everypony wants their ship to be 20% cooler, too bad this 20% is flyin solo. Or not... I'll just fly solo until I land upon some RANDOM ship and then I'll sneak to the captain's quarters and challenge him/her to a dual. I which I win, I stay and run the vessel, or I lose and is thrown overboard and basically quit the RP or repeat this process... Wait, what type of ships? Like actually boats? Or awesome gliders and blimps and stuff? Because if this is actually on the water, I want no part of this. I hate the ocean...I have a bad past...I once took my pet goldfish to the beach, and well....Yeah....
  12. aFlatmajor
    Wait... Ponies + Steampunk + Pirates? FANTABULOUS!!!!!!!!!! Is there room for one more!?
  13. aFlatmajor
    Welcome to Canterlot Prep!! Where there are various education and shipping opportunities!!
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    Let the student x teacher shipping begin... Lawl
  15. aFlatmajor
    Lol, do I really? Because I actually spend majority of my time In SpamStables ((which is not helping my post count, at all lol)) I need to start posting again.
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    Silver rose out his chair fairly quickly and took hold of his bag, which he soon slung over his shoulder. [colour=#696969]"Well, that's the bell. I believe we go to lunch? Heh, maybe if I'm lucky I'll get to hang out with- PinkiePie!"[/colour] He jumped back slightly and had to resist flaring his wings from the shock. Surprised by Pinkie's sudden approach. With a light sigh, Silver slowly regained his composure and smiled, walking out of the classroom wih Pinkie. [colour=#696969]"Oh. Uh, yeah, sure. I'd love to."[/colour]
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    Exactly!! No more puns!!! Wow...I should probably post in the actuall RP. It's starting to seem like I really do lurk here in the OOC
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    All in favour of banning the usage of puns in this RP, please, leave the classroom at the sound of the bell.
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    Wait, all of them!? :!: I don't even....I no brain today no more...I've obtained perplexed-edness.... Also, now would be a great time for the bell to ting in the RP. Everypony'sEveryhuman' Everybody's just like "Lol, now wut?" Unless of course you've already done that. I haven't read the RP in a while.
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    No...Bucking...Way!!!
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    Silver watched a few other pegasi for a brief moment. Surprised by the skill of some of their aerial abilities while he was momentarily distracted from Razor. [colour=#696969]"Three lap obstacle course? Yea, sure thing, Razor. Help me set up a couple of cloud rings and we'll have our race. Ok?"[/colour] He spread his wings and took to the sky, not waiting for a response from the griffon as he grabbed a stray cloud and began to awkwardly shape it in into a ring.
  22. aFlatmajor
    You've activated my trap card....
  23. aFlatmajor
    Twilight Rapidash? Cute.
  24. aFlatmajor
    *reads first post* Oh boy!! I'm going to go ahead and post next!! *one finished post later* Now to submit thi- *realizes OC is still WIP* FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU Hooray, I'm the guild's n00b!! But I still need to finish poof......
  25. aFlatmajor
    Cloudy~ I hope you're ok with what I'm about to post. I'm not trying to enforce random rules or anything but I just have a few things to say here. Please approve or decline any of these as you see fit. Though some of these are NSFW. But they make for a good laugh. Everyone else~ Listen to Cloudy Dorms Events (Parties, meetings, etc) Also, be sure to clean up after yourselves because if you don't, the crazed janitor will lock you in the school and hunt you down. He will probably brand you and attack you with a blowtorch, possibly making you submissive to him and forcing you to bring other people to him so he won't kill you. Any questions? And no, that janitor thing is NOT an old mare's tale. ((ok, the rest of this is just me and my bad jokes)) Physical Education Eating Clothes shopping Fighting Let me show you a few other perks.... Bulletin board Tea table Thinking spot Well? What do you think!? *Waits for all the TL;DL posts* Ahh, this is me when I'm tired and not working on my app when I should have been.
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