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my application. ( sorry its late. )Name: bronzeshine Age: 22 ( pony years. ) Gender: boy Race: pagusus Alignment: bronzeshine is completely ambiguous. not taking any side at all. Place of Birth/Starting Location: pony ville as a smith. Physical Appearance: my profile picture minus the armor Personality: bronzeshine himself is brave. always looking to help. Cutie Mark: a shield for becoming a blacksmith History (Back Story): bronzeshine leads two lives. one as an ex criminal blacksmith who likes helping others. and one as the half angle half demon outsider who appears in times of chaos to observe and influence the events. though he never takes a side, he will give his power to people he finds interesting.

" hmmm. I am not considered a good thing. years and years ago I stole from the royal line, well more than stole... but the bottom point is if someone catches you with that mark they will think you are a cultist of mine and you will get jail time or even execution. I am not evil, or good. parse I am a being of total ambiguity, I leave the choices up to those I gift. I leave them with no circumstances, no what ifs. I just grant them power and let them have at it. the only people who can see that mark are unicorns, the royal family, anyone you point it out to, and anyone if your seen doing magic. you may find my other followers dotted around the land. they will help you. " bronzeshine waits for her next question.

" well if you have any questions. ask them now as I wont give you vague answers in the real world. I don't know why, but when ever I enter the dream world I get all mysterious. you'll need to know quite a lot, so what do you want to know? "

bronzeshine puts down his hammer and says. " so how are you holding up? " as a regular pony would begin a conversation.

bronzeshine was hammering in metal at his forge. he gestures for her to come closer as he was the same pony from her dreams.

( if you could rp what she does for the rest of the day that would be great. )

" yes but while it doesn't exhaust your body's energy it exhausts that of your soul. this place is different from the real world as souls have a rock solid foundation here. use your powers to much and you wont be able to again for a while. don't let anybody see that mark or they will hurt you. goodbye. " she wakes up in her bed. the strange mark still on her hoof.

the illusion of the guard dissipates like smoke when the wind touches it. " that isn't the end to your power. you can slow time, summon rats, see through walls and even posses others. " a new island appears with the pony standing on it. " come to me. "

" yes but that's not all you can do. traditionally I would force you to learn your new powers by yourself but I will give you some pointers." a Pegasus guard appears in front of storm and raises his sword. " halt! " bronzeshine said " you can control the wind to. move you hoof and a wind burst will take this pony into a new level of pain. "

bronzeshine sounded disappointed. " of coerce you can fly dear. but if you focus on traveling short distances without moving, you can teleport. " said bronzeshine trying to teach her to use her new gift.

bronzeshine smirks. " come find me. " then he disappears. " the wall to her left bursts open as if hit by a car, but its fragments stay in the air. a pathway of small floating islands leads off into the distance. bronzeshines voice can be heard. " with my gift you can bend the laws of space. try it now. " the islands are each points in the future. the princess being dragged off, a riot outside of the castle, equestria burning.

" hmm hmm. yes forget about the weather, a chain of events has been set in action. one that you can only control the conclusion, the beginning is already set in action. to aid you're decisions be they good or bad I will give you this. " a mark is very painfully burned into her hoof. it feels like being branded and is hotter than any fire on equestria. t leaves this mark on her hoof. http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://images.wikia.com/creepypasta/images/9/9e/Dishonored_hand_symbol_vector_by_marekmaurizio-d5hss5w.png&imgrefurl=http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/File:Dishonored_hand_symbol_vector_by_marekmaurizio-d5hss5w.png&h=515&w=524&sz=14&tbnid=MA1IiFk2cRZRpM:&tbnh=90&tbnw=92&zoom=1&usg=__d2SVWftaS9MXC5O4pz02aGkBf2c=&docid=6Ct09k0fgmhSqM&sa=X&ei=GWD6UaOQDZOE9gTorYDQDg&ved=0CDQQ9QEwAA&dur=184

" yes. but it likely wont be in the way you imagined. I gift those who are about to go through trials, tribulations, and hardships. tell me more about the nature of this meeting? "

" Oh don't worry. your still fast asleep, but if you want to know were we are then we are in my diminution. I am god here and I have brought you here as a guest because your life is going to take a turn. A turn in witch you must decide the fate of all of equestria, and I want to give you my gift. " bronzeshine floats through the window and asks. " so tell me your take, what has been happening in your life and who are you? "

One night, after you went to sleep your dreams were clouded. A mysterious voice of a stallion can be heard. " Very interesting. " Finally you awoke in your room. It seemed off though and as you gaze out the window you see a distorted pony Ville with an all white sky. A Pegasus hovers above the ground without the aid of a cloud or his wings. " Hello! " he says in a cheery voice. The window disappears leaving a hole in your home.

" yeah. well lets hope you never have to eat bugs for as long as you live in this town. lets go to the mayor and schedule a meeting. its very odd that you are here, but I'm sure you will fit in nicely. "

" ok. I guess we should call a meeting in town hall instead of just saying. hey everybody! this guys different, he eats meat and walks on two legs. something tells me that wouldn't go very well... "

" so what do you want to do first? introduce you to the people of pony ville or get seddled in? "

bronzeshine had a moment so he decided to try something new. he walks into the shop and says. " so swift reaper. I got you your silver, what is it that you actually do here? "

( let me know if this is ok. ) Name: bronzeshine Appearance: Profile Picture Gender: Male Major: smithing/ inventing Dorm: Twenty-one Availability: Single Personality: would risk his life for anyone, is very trusting and loyal, just don't anger him. History: Born into a family of master thieves, he spent his youth stealing and performing jobs. he did more than he cared to admit, from assassinations, to burglary, to just plain assault. he never did it to anybody who didn't deserve it, but thank god he is only wanted for the things they caught him with or he would be an enemy to the princess. but now he owns a smith and comes to this school to get his technology major. ( so how am I suppose to make my application? like the quest or item part. )

" errrnaaaa! " said bronzeshine this tazer was really taking it out of him he had to get out of there. fast. he cuts strait through the dog pole as his sword glistened in the air and then bursts through a fragile wall of the cart. " stay away from me you freak! " bronzeshine had to much taken out of him to fly or successfully run away. he sees a horse drawn carriage and well, he jacks it. he throws out its previous occupant and then throws a bag of bits at the pony who was carrying it and says " there's a lot more were that came from if you get me away from this lunatic! " the cart takes off a lot faster than the average pony could run as the stallion at the wheel had been doing this his entire life.

( I was waiting for you. lol )" hunnnnnnnng. " says bronzeshine as he clenches his teeth and bares it. he was a trained thief who studied by his father, so he was prepared and capable of moving so he reaches into his bag and picks up a smoke grenade then throws it agents the wall and the room fills with white gas. " you'll have to try harder than that! " said bronzeshine as he drew his sword and stabbed at blue. his sword was of his own design and completely indestructible.

" huh. " said bronzeshine as he assumed the poor vocabulary of the minotaur also meant poor intelligents. " well lets go wee were your parents lived eh? "

" well alright. " said bronzeshine as he hoped he wasn't being led into a trap. " so that's not a lot to go on. if you could take me back to were they used to live I could investigate. " said bronzeshine. wile mainly he was a theif he had all sorts of talents that could come in handy. " so how did you track me down? "

" ok. " said bronzeshine as he took out a hood from his beg and put it on. he walked over to the cart and said. " ok so what's this about your parents? "