thanks for the feedback! ...I'm not sure how i over saw those parts several times though...curse my logic... :!: well ill get straight to improving it, as to answer the questions -so i got something to work with when i edit it- i assume that a sky city would have transportation for non-pegasi, perhaps he was assisted by friends? maybe there was a ladder? heck maybe he had a pet gargoyle that took him up and down, maybe he rode a blasted cloud car(joke) for all we know!!!.....i should make a full note pad list before i make a specific choice though as for the bit about the "magic" the concept behind letting him get it was so he could do the more passive side of his set, without as much difficulty. ever tried mixing potions with hooves? .... i don't think its easy. but it probably would be wise to have manestream look it over when she has time and is bored. well why was rainbow dash called rainbow dash? why was pinkie pie called pinkie pie? whyd they call granny smith granny smith? was she always a granny? In the the original "one wing" concept his origin name was Atem, but i thought it was a bit much to add onto the already big massive pile of things. "what does he slay" ~long story short; it pretty much is meant to mean that hes smarter around monsters then the average pony. .... didn't i write he was privately tutored? i could have sword... similar with the show off bit, i could of sworn I've removed it like twice now... maybe the code is trolling me again... *ehm* but anyways thanks for the feedback, and ill get working on alot of it right away ^^ gibberish that i felt like saying out of tired brain fluids: -good gosh i let my mouth run too much when its around 3 am -oh and in the case you forget why i wrote this after you read it; i answered the questions to have material to work with when i edit -and ill write a update reply/post when I've updated the app, this here post/reply is more of a reminder for when I'm awake...and to potentially answer some questions...