FireDash Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Hi, well... I started this new fic and have been going over it a million times every time I write a new chapter. As you know, self-editing is a tad hard... I was wondering if anyone might be willing to help me out a bit and offer some constructive criticism so I can polish this fic to its finest.It's basically about a mysterious figure being spotted over Ponyville. Mares start to go missing and it all seems to resemble a story Rainbow Dash knew. She keeps trying to deny that the missing mares could be the work of a monster when suddenly, Pinkie Pie goes missing.Well, if anyone's interested, here it is:http://www.fimfictio...7270/Just-SmileThank you for your time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FireDash Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 Hi, I don't normally like to bump but I really would like some constructive critisism on this. I've worked pretty hard on it so far but I could always use a fresh pair of eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONWARDconwardicus Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 i would help but i don't like reading sad dark stories. Sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trekker123Eski Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Can I do a plinkett style review? If so I'll upload it to my webzone. Youtube.com/Trekker123Eski Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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