ONWARDconwardicus Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 Hello everypony. I was just thinking of what sort of boyfriend fluttershy would have if she had one, and I wrote this poem while thinking of it. He would be a pony who gets angrily easily, and she would help him get better at being calm.I would love to solve the problems we haveFor they make us grow ever more apartYour qualities are like my other halfTo let you go would break my saddened heartNo one can flap her wings and make a breezeThat cools my head and flushes out the badNo one can look at me and put at easeThe turmoil that makes me crazy madYour heart is a treasure that I waste notAnd I get along with all of your friendsI think of you with all my conscious thoughtAnd I hope that we can make some amends.I know together we can make things rightAnd go away and fly into the lightLet me know what you think, okay?Oh, and have a nice day! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noctriix Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 http://soundcloud.com/noctriix/proseCouldn't help myself... Beautiful work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ONWARDconwardicus Posted August 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2012 That was good work yourself. I like the little addition you made at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noctriix Posted August 1, 2012 Report Share Posted August 1, 2012 I like the little addition you made at the end.Which is ironic, because Fluttershy's probly one of the last of the mane six I'd ever say that to. I felt odd after I said it... ahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LaceGyver Posted February 12, 2014 Report Share Posted February 12, 2014 Hey! This is a pretty awesome sonnet. I was wondering if I could use it for an assignment in my English class. Of course, I would have it re-worded but may I please use it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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