Brony1337 Posted August 27, 2012 Report Share Posted August 27, 2012 Roleplay Type: Mane RpName:Sky RunnerSex: FemaleAge: MareSpecies: PegasusCoat Color: Light BlueMane/Tail/Markings Color, Style: Her mane is short and flat her tail is long. Both of them is in the same color. White base with pink lines on it.Eye Color: Light GreenCutie Mark: Wind. Its means that she is fast as the wind when its blows from its full strenght. Looks like this: Physique: A normal sized, nice-looking pony.Origin: FillydelphiaOccupation: She is a traveller. Motivation: Be the fastest pony ever.Likes: Races and competitions.Dislikes: The stroms and the lightnings.Character Summary: She born in Fillydelphia. Her parents often bring her to races when she was young. She wanted to try it so in the school she joined to the sports team. After a while she got a chance to prove her ability. She attended in the Grand Fillydelphia Race wich was held for pegasuses only and she ended in the second place. She was happy and she decided that she will be the fastest pony ever in the world. After years she took place in the Grand Fillydelphia Race again and she ended with the first place. Thats when she got her cutie-mark wich is a wind what means she is fast. But that was not enough for her. She wants to be better. Since than she practice a lot, take place every event as she can while she travels around the world. Her parents is so proud for her. She will never forget them because she visit them a lots of time and tell them story about what happened to her already. When she was young she went out to the forest to practice between the woods. Everything gone alright, she took the corners without mistakes. It started to get dark but she didn't cared about it. Well that little dark fog on the sky turned into a storm cloud. There were lightnings and loud thunders. She was alone there, she was totally wet and she didin't know what to do.The storm gone bigger than bigger and one of the lightnings hit a tree near to her. Everything was so scary for her. She started to look for a place where she will be in safe. Finally she found a rock which was half in the ground and the other half of it was in the air so Sky Runner crawled under it and she waited the stormt to end there. After a while the storm finally gone away and she went out from her place. She saw what the stormdid with the environment. The trees were twisted out one of them was burned. She flew home as fast as she can and her parents cool her down. Since than she fear from it.She is got a little wagon with she brings with herslef everywhere is she go. That wagon is her home and her shop in one piece. Thats were she sell what she found trough her trip likejewels or anything what she can sell like lost pendant, backpacks. So she is a traveller so she needs to buy herself enough equipment to the trip. She likes the competitions and every place where she stops, she looks around for a race which has money prize and she has got enough fortune she can sell something. From them she is got enough money to travel further and seea lots of beautiful places.She is kind. If somepony have a problem she is there to help her or him never mind how difficult is the problem. Thats why she get friends so easily. Almost every where she turned already have a friend who will see her gladly again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davroth Posted August 27, 2012 Report Share Posted August 27, 2012 Hey there, Brony1337A couple of things I have to note here:Unfortunately, your first application can't be crossover, since you need one approved Mane RP app to be added to the RP group.And you'll have to mark your apps either as [WIP] or [Final]. You can edit the title of a thread by editing the original post, and the opening the full editor in the bottom.That being said, with a little more information, you should have no problem getting her approved for Mane RP. Let us know what you'd like to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony1337 Posted August 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2012 Thanks. I corrected it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davroth Posted August 29, 2012 Report Share Posted August 29, 2012 As I said, we need a little more information for the application to be suitable for Mane RP.If you'd like some suggestions about what to write, feel free to ask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony1337 Posted August 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2012 You need more information to the character summary? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davroth Posted August 30, 2012 Report Share Posted August 30, 2012 For example, the app goes barely into the personality of the OC. Another thing that is missing is we don't really learn how she earns money to support her traveling life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony1337 Posted August 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2012 Okay i corrected it. Hope thats enough then ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davroth Posted September 2, 2012 Report Share Posted September 2, 2012 Hey, again. Sorry for the delay.Okay, this is a solid step in the right direction.A couple of questions, though:Was the second race also in Fillydelphia (the annual Grand Fillydelphia Race, maybe)?Was it a pegasus race, or a race for all kinds of ponies (without flying or magic)? And does fastest pony relate to fastest flier or actual running?What happened between Sky Runner getting lost in the woods and her traveling the land with a wagon, from one race to the next?Those are things that you should answer in the app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosewind Posted September 7, 2012 Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 Any progress? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony1337 Posted September 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2012 Yes she travels from race to race. ^^I wrote it down what happened to her in the forest. Should I be more precise?Hope thats enough finally Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosewind Posted September 12, 2012 Report Share Posted September 12, 2012 Nice application so far! Could you please give more detail on the cutie mark story? That part is very important. Thank you very much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony1337 Posted September 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2012 Im sorry i dont know what should i write there im out of ideas... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davroth Posted September 16, 2012 Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 It would help if you could explain what exactly you mean when you say "wind", and maybe what it means to Sky Runner.Maybe you could find a picture of what you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony1337 Posted September 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 Her cutie-mark looks like this:And its means that she is fast as the wind when its blows from its full strenght. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davroth Posted September 16, 2012 Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 Maybe you could put that into the application itself? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony1337 Posted September 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 Done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imagination Posted September 16, 2012 Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brony1337 Posted September 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2012 Yes! Thank you so much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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