Eurobeat Brony Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 So, whaddya think~? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Rime Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Woooaaah, awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ginger Mint Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 hi hiI would say you just about nailed the lyrics, but there's a few words that I can quite parse, specifically the part that goes "Luna won't you ___ for me." I can't decipher that word. There's a few other spots where I'm not confident I am hearing the words clearly. Maybe you should take it that with a grain of salt though, I'm usually very picky about vocals, and while the vocalist has a certain cramped feel that I cant quite put my finger on, its certainly not a deal breaker. ((I've heard lots of remixes and indie pieces where the lyrics made me press stop and delete)) Maybe some typed out lyrics would help?The xylophone~esque part at the start kind of reminds me of the BGM from Luna's return, which was always a favorite of mine, though without the swelling strings section I couldn't tell if it was actually used as a reference or if I'm just imagining things.Don't take the above rambling to mean that I don't like it though, I can't wait to hear the final version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eurobeat Brony Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 hi hiI would say you just about nailed the lyrics, but there's a few words that I can quite parse, specifically the part that goes "Luna won't you ___ for me." I can't decipher that word. There's a few other spots where I'm not confident I am hearing the words clearly. Maybe you should take it that with a grain of salt though, I'm usually very picky about vocals, and while the vocalist has a certain cramped feel that I cant quite put my finger on, its certainly not a deal breaker. ((I've heard lots of remixes and indie pieces where the lyrics made me press stop and delete)) Maybe some typed out lyrics would help?The xylophone~esque part at the start kind of reminds me of the BGM from Luna's return, which was always a favorite of mine, though without the swelling strings section I couldn't tell if it was actually used as a reference or if I'm just imagining things.Don't take the above rambling to mean that I don't like it though, I can't wait to hear the final version. Heya Ginger Mint! Here's the lyrics:â€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€ÂLYRICS:For a thousand yearsI've waited here for youWaiting every nightFor I thought you were theanswer to my lifeDays turned into yearsand into centuriesPatience had to fadeDon't you see that there isvengeance in my eyes?Luna don't you cry for meI'm as lonely as I've ever beenI am forced back into the startIs there any way to fix a broken heart?Infinite despiseand endless jealousyBottled in my soulHas erupted as I'mtearing through the skiesâ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€Ââ€â€ÂEurobeat lyrics/vocalists are traditionally difficult to understand. If not for the speed of the music, then usually for their often-rich Italian accents. Even I don't come away unscathed~!The vocals are kind of strained because I haven't sung in a while and my voice has more rust to it than the Titanic in battery acid. The piano in the intro is sort of coincidental, as I didn't reference her BGM music for this one. (Perhaps I should've?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaconofChaos Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Wow, I love it! Something about it really tugs at my heartstrings. Wish I could say more than that. Looking forward to the final version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ginger Mint Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 hi hiThanks for the lyrics! ((don't take my ramblings about the vocals too seriously, it may be that I'm just oddly particular about some things.))Luna's story always resonated with me, I think in part because there are things about my past that I would like to believe could be redeemed. That being said, its interesting how the lyrics make it kind of ambiguous as to who's perspective they're coming from.Also: I don't think you need to draw from the Luna's Return theme (unless you want to of course) I think it works well as is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eurobeat Brony Posted May 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 New one's up!Youtube: Bandcamp: http://odysseymusic.bandcamp.comMediafire: http://www.mediafire.com/?etm47121ij85l8c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kudalyn Posted July 8, 2011 Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 Moved thread to Music Showcase.And Yay music! I'm not sure if you've seen it yet Euro, but I have a master list of Pony remixes - including yours.viewtopic.php?f=71&t=82If you want to check it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now