NeoExlucky Posted March 17, 2013 Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 Name: GadgetRP type: WOEGender: MaleAge: Really young Stallion (Barely an adult.)Eye colour: BlueCoat: GreyMane/tail: Black. His tail is very long and his mane can almost cover his eyes.Physique: A normal physique. Stronger than he looks but not all that intelligent.Residence: CanterlotJob: TinkererCutie mark: A wrench. When gadget was small inventing things was an amazing concept to him. He had hopes of overcoming the problems of being small by inventing things. However they normally blow up in his face, he still believes that he is a great inventor. Tinkering with things is his real talent. Need a toy train to move faster? Gadget can help you. Need an automatic door to close slower? Gadget can help you. Need a lightbulb to glow so much that it explodes? Not sure why you would want that but Gadget's your man. Gadget got his cutie mark when his brother, Time Spinner, broke his toy remote car. Gadget had took a look at the remote and opened it. He had only to replace a broken resistor and an overburned coil. It was at this moment that he his flank began to glow and he had a wrench there.History: Gadget grew up in canterlot along with his Brother, Time Spinner. Gadget was the comic relief in their relationships often doing things that would attract judgmental eyes. Gadget never really cared though, he loved having fun and that was what mattered. Though growing up he became a bit of a ladies man (Or so he says) and much stronger than his brother. Gadget had been taught a multitude of things by his parent but because they were both unicorns he would have to learn how to fly on his own. Clock Sphera and Blaze Bolero always were loving with Gadget and raised him a bit like their older son, Time Spinner. Gadget though could do more things then him such as his strength since he never had to study for anything. After the passing of their father, Gadget was saddened by this and did one of the last things his father told him, to open a repair shop. Unlike Time, Gadget worked to get this and was very happy that he paid for the building by itself...though Time did help a bit with the interior decorating. Gadget now lives a happy life on the east side of canterlot in his building and adventurous life.Character Summery: Gadget is a fun loving, idiot. Even though he isn't smart he still knows a lot about fixing and tinkering with things. Gadget can be a bit hot headed at times and will also boast about his store from time to time. He likes Fixing things, being nice to foals, Degrading the acts of learning, being flirty with mares, staying calm, not wanting to fight, and choosing luxurious things of practical things. He dislikes Learning, teachers, bullies, doing anything bad, breaking things, and being mean. Gadget never understood things like history or literature. Because of this learning these things and things in just anything in general is boring to Gadget. Being with Gadget is like an adventure of stupidity. The things he will cause is outright strange and often will make something be improved without being needed. He has ways of crafting things in tight spot though and it's a wonder how he can be smart in those areas but not in any other area. Gadget will often judge others too quickly and have them pegged for something they are not. Even still Gadget is a great companion and can prove useful at times. Unlike his brother Gadget finds dragons as awesome creatures of power. He actually likes Dragons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Posted March 18, 2013 Report Share Posted March 18, 2013 Hello. Your friendly neighborhood RP Helpstaffer here. You have an interesting character as a tinkerer.One thing that you should add is how Gadget got his cutie mark. This is an important part in a pony's life, and it will help shed some light on your character more about how he got into tinkering with things. Did his brother or a friend need something fixed? Did he like taking apart things and trying to reassemble things? The more we know how and why he got interested in tinkering and his cutie mark, the better.You should also explain some of his likes and dislikes such as why he doesn't like learning (actually tinkering with thing is learning). Also, I'd check the application as I see some things like names of his family members and places he's been not capitalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoExlucky Posted March 18, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2013 Okay I've added how he got his cutie mark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RarityDash Posted March 22, 2013 Report Share Posted March 22, 2013 Hi there. The app's content is good. I just see one little thing that kinda strikes me as odd:Age: Really young colt (Barely an adult.)This doesn't make sense to me. Colt indicates a teenaged male pony. A really young colt would be the equivalent of a human who is around 12-13. If you want the character to be barely an adult (more 18-20 ish), it would perhaps be more appropriate to say really young stallion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoExlucky Posted March 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2013 sorry thought that said stallion. It's been changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RarityDash Posted March 22, 2013 Report Share Posted March 22, 2013 Okay. Looks good now, I think... so: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosewind Posted March 22, 2013 Report Share Posted March 22, 2013 Moving to accepted - pegasus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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