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MisterRe C-Mark Crusader

MisterRe

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Roleplay Type:

FFA

Name:

Mr. Re or Cellar Re

Sex:

Male

Age:

Younger Stallion

Species:

Earth pony

Eye colour:

Teal Gray

Coat:

Chalky white, regardless of lighting

Mane/Tail:

His mane was short, brushed downward with spikes hovering over his eyebrows; his tail shared a similar coarseness but was quite longer in comparison. There was a difference between his coat and his mane and tail, his mail/tail had slight yellow hue. A strange colour, vague as if an artist dripped yellow into a bowl of white and mixed to get a result.

Physique:

He has a taller, much skinner build regarding his earth pony brethren.

Residence:

His local business was his residence like many of the citizens in Equestria. However, unlike many, his house lacked a fourth wall. It was a roof room for insulation, the of the estate was served as lodging for the guests. It was a cold room with warm sheets. He put many details to make his room simple, only four of five elements stood out in this abode. Inside there were the following: a desk, a bed, a lampshade and a door each in their respective corner. The bed and desk faced each other and sat along where ceiling met the floor; The opposite side held the door and lamp. The last detail that many wouldn't have noticed until hinted toward was a rock, adorned in the center of his roof. It meant to him that he could not understand the full inter workings of society and its rapid erratic change, that new was old because new is nonexistent just because of the combined variations in trends and fashion, that ponies were made from society and their history which he could never have a chance to fully research nor interpret. But to many, his simple answer to this obscure object was “I live under a rock.”

Occupation:

He works at The “Tavern Of Mr. Re's” in Fillydephia .

Cutie Mark:

Cellar Re was a surprisingly astute apprentice to the many mentors that had the experience to teach him. He was always slow and lazy when attending to the work assigned to him, but he soaked up every lesson. For every teacher, there was a test at the end, which he passed with an above average grade every time. Soon he knew many things: how to cook, clean, grow crops and write novels, yet all of these talents did not earn him his cutie mark. It got repetitive, each month and each teacher would say “ He would be a good... {interchangable}... But not a great one”.

It was frustrating for the young colt to burdened by these many things. Soon, he became faded to the world and to life itself. As his parents were, he were; both were obsessed to find him a cutie mark. Whilst his mother and father exhausted the physical approach, he worn out his mental abode.

He gave up one day,but that was the day he got his cutie mark...

The boredom numbed all limbs in Cellar's body. The fog covered the sun and made a gloomy moon over his day, the bed and blanked seemed to bind him in place. Transferring mentors was a difficult time for him, his parent, however, enjoyed spending time together finding him a mentor. And the colt's dead stare moved to the window and back to his flank. An empty full mind. It was the worst day ever. The day was a never ending sigh, as it continued it felt harder and harder to breathe out with seconds slowing, life itself gasping out through his strained lungs. This was the case until there was no air left, then he took another breath.

A whole day past and night had followed with a new breath under his chest, he used the air for ins and outs. The mind needs to be clear, too many roam around inside here. Still eyes closed, he did not notice. For an hour he meditated, though this was his first attempt. His last deep breath gave the colt peace in mind and an general idea of a cutie mark. What ever it is, I'll have to repeat it over and over again. Simple, that's it. Focus... Focus... Focus These were his last thought before going into a deep trance, void of any activity, a purge from an active life. He knew meditation was the most repetitive thing he could do but it did cleared his mind. Little did know that it had earn him his cutie mark.

This is what his cutie mark looks like. Day to day, it changes meaning to him based on his mood and or stature. Sometimes he thinks he's the pin that holds the universe together, or maybe the universe itself, other times he is just a point in an endless cycle of life, or a pony doomed to a tedious eternity.

History:

Cellar Re was what this Mr. Re used to be. He was born of a pun made from his parents, the Unicorn Cereb Concise and the Pegasus Dude Meister. A competitive duo, always trying to best each other either in brain or brawn. Funny, even in the excruciating pain of foal conception, they placed their wagers against each another;a Pegasus for Meister and an Unicorn for Concise, 100 bits from the loser. In the strange case of pony genetics (and to the irony to both parents), he became neither of the two, instead he became the fourth race... an earth pony. They were disgruntled on the outcome of their bet, but having both lost( they were good sports for the matter), they gave their bits to the new bornly victor, Cellar Re, their son. And that's how he earned his first 200 bits in ten seconds flat of his birth.

Though he could not fly nor use magic, he shared the same intuition and speed as his lineages proceeds. Meister was fast, so was he; Concise was smart, and so was he. Yet, this colt had also adapted the bad qualities of them, being uptight and thinking rash countered the opened mindedness and intelligence he had.

His hometown was in the cool foggy city of Stalliongrad. It was here where he grew up and here where he got his cutie mark. But the years preface that had been hard on him, much had needed change within him. He was quiet, so quiet were the days of his youth; no pony in his class would talk to him... much less go near him. An isolation due to a rumor of a disease that only applied to him, Look germs. It was disease without symptoms nor impediments. The thing became just a title, a notoriety among his peers for being weird and obnoxious. Having this devolved him from his social counterparts. It gave him a severe insecurity on what others think about him. Despite these disadvantages, he maintained a higher intelligence, a characteristic that alienated his peers, than the other ponies in class. Consequently to both reasons: social stigma and unique intelligence, his parents adopted home-schooling...

He got his cutie mark. It wasn't as life changing as he thought. Though the colt had his cutie mark, the destiny behind him obscured him. Swirls and swirls, round and round, it was simple now. All he need to do was find a occupation that utilized repetitiveness. He thought and laughed. All cutie marks were of some sort of repetition: He could be what ever he wanted, though it would take some practice. He thought again then smiled. The colt knew exactly his occupation would be, an owner of a tavern.

Character Summary:

Mr. Re is simple in his complexity. He shares multiple qualities between a young colt and a old wisemare. He is apathetic at times but tries to tend to that as much as possible. Full of wisdom as well as recklessness, he can make dumb decisions on purpose because it is his way. His life , however, is full of repetitive factors, and he will do anything to change that. Re loves attention, yet is insecure about judgment, often over-thinking encounters, leading him into a inward spiral of isolation sometimes, though it's always resolved. The colt is content of being in-content, he likes being happy with way thing are and how everything can contradict itself for that matter. He is well adept at peeking into problems of other ponies, a very snoopy pony indeed. The colt is very open pony and will always answer questions to the best of his abilities; he has no secrets as long as you ask the proper questions.

Due to his age, he is very naive and spiteful, trusting and looking for revenge. He has a lack of common sense and also has a tendency of energy spikes. In summary, he is a very happy contradictive pony.

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Hi there Mr. Re! As a fellow roleplayer, I'd like to give you a few pointers since you're asking for feedback!

Firstly, San Fransiscolt is not a city on the World of Equestria map. It's great that you're so enthusiastic about writing and creativity, but WoE roleplay has dedicated lore writing staff that's put together this handy bit of information on Equestria that you need to be part of that team to add to! There are all sorts of wonderful places to choose from for your character to live, so why not check those places out? And in regards to Ponyville, that small town is fit to burst at the seams with cast characters and OCs - staff has been discouraging applicants from having their characters situated there as it's pretty full at the moment. That is ultimately their decision, but I just wanted to point it out - it's probably for the best you think of a different area for your pony to be!

On the topic of lore building - the mentioning of portals and the flow of energies in the Everfree Forest goes against canon, and only lore building staff can actually write into the canon of the game. In order for staff to approve your character, all lore-writing elements will likely have to be taken from your app. And on the topic of the Everfree - most ponies are terrified of it! How would his business have enough traffic to be successful if nopony wants to go near that place? I understand that the Mane 6 and other ponies in the show will venture into the Everfree Forest, but that is very much the exception to the rule - even they were (and some still are) afraid of the place!

Speaking of the Mane 6 - staff members tend to prefer characters stand on their own without reference to any established characters without permission from their players. Mentioning cast character names is generally discouraged, especially in situations like you have explained for the Wonderbolts. In this case, you are writing history for cast characters who have or will have their own players. This would be forcing canon on an individual and is something we aim to avoid in World of Equestra roleplay.

As for your character's name, it doesn't have a very strong "pony" feel to it, if you can understand where I'm coming from. I get that it's a play on words, which is fun! You may want to try something with a more pony vibe, however - but staff can correct me if I'm wrong - a play on words like that is fun, has pony potential as well!

That said, I really like the idea of your character having a tavern for travelers to drift through - I have a few characters who i'm sure would enjoy that sort of spot! Good luck with the rest of your app! Feel free to ask me any question!

I hope you've found me helpful!

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I have several questions.

1. If I ask them about the "Friskolt" location would they consider adding it? This is because I was thinking of my character conciding with the symbol of fog.

2. Where do you think my establishment would be to be successful?

3. Can I haz a cookie?

I ll post mores question

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I can't make any claims for the lore writing staff, as I am entirely unfamiliar with the process. I would assume, however, that chances are low they would add an entire city on a request like this - if you do it for one pony, you have to do it for all of them! That's one of the reasons why we let the lore team handle these things - it keeps everything organized and comprehensible. I'll let staff have final say on this one, though!

As for his establishment, well, you can always read about the locations of towns/cities and base your decision off of where you think his business would fit in the best. In any location where ponies go would be just fine, and there are a lot of great places to choose from on the map! Just read up in the link I provided - you'll know better than I where your character's business should go as you understand his thinking better than I do!

Only if I can have one too! Let's find some together!

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To give you a quick heads-up on our RP types, Re:

:Celest: World of Equestria - Character application required!

Canterlot's canon-friendly roleplay, World of Equestria (or WoE/Mane RP) is a strict, structured game that mirrors the basic principles, rules, and continuity (canon) of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. Characters here must pass a review process by our volunteer staff to be deemed acceptable for play in this area. This game also features players that play Cast from FiM.

:Luna: Free for All - No application required.

Free for All is an area designated for any character, and anything you can dream. This is a good place to test new character concepts, story ideas, and to meet new and interesting players. Mature content must go in the 18+ sub-section.

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Since you're still learning the ropes of how we RP around here, I sincerely suggest making your OC a FFA character instead. There, you can learn how to RP and use your character (and your setting) to your heart's content without having to deal with WoE's numerous guidelines. Once you're more settled in and know WoE better, you'll easily be able to make another shot at a WoE character and succeed! :)

PS: Please add [WiP] to indicate that this app is still being worked on. Change to [Ready] when you're satisfied with it.

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Please do not use hard-to-read fonts or sizes for the field titles. I will look over the app in-depth when the correct app format is utilized. ^^

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Okie dokie then... from what I see, this app will require significant changes before we can allow it into WoE. Just to give you a refresher on our RPs:

:Celest: World of Equestria - Character application required!

Canterlot's canon-friendly roleplay, World of Equestria (or WoE/Mane RP) is a strict, structured game that mirrors the basic principles, rules, and continuity (canon) of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. Characters here must pass a review process by our volunteer staff to be deemed acceptable for play in this area. This game also features players that play Cast from FiM.

:Luna: Free for All - No application required.

Free for All is an area designated for any character, and anything you can dream. This is a good place to test new character concepts, story ideas, and to meet new and interesting players. Mature content must go in the 18+ sub-section.

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If you put your OC in FFA instead, you'll have a place where you can use him in the manner you've originally intended without worrying about keeping your character true to show-canon. Ergo, you won't have to make any further edits to this app! Since you're still learning the ropes of how everything works around here, it's my belief that FFA is the best place for you. ^_^

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