Krad Ventus [Read+Fixed]

[Krad1213]

Roleplay Type:

Free For All

Name:

Krad Ventus

Sex:

Male

Age:

Young Stallion

Species:

Pegasus

Eye colour:

Blue & Green

Coat:

Midnight black with a light gray on the tips of his feathers. His front right hoof and his back left hoof are a snowy white. He wears two silver cuffs with sapphires each on opposite legs. When he’s out chasing storms he keeps his goggles on his head in case he needs them. On special occasions he wears a silver cross on a chain around his neck.

Mane/Tail:

Slate grey with a white streak like a bolt of lightning running down the middle of his mane and tail. His mane is long and covers his right eye; the end of his mane curls slightly making it look unruly. His tail is unkempt and has a normal white streak it has a curl at the end.

Physique:

He’s a good height for a Colt and he’s not overly muscular though he is lean.

Residence:

Cloudsdale

Occupation:

Weather Team Rain/ Storm management/Making

Cutie Mark: Storm clouds

His Cutie Mark is three storm clouds and two bolts of lightning. He got his cutie mark not long after he became a colt. He and several of his pals were flying around when a terrible storm hit. They sped off toward a sheltered area when Krad Ventus noticed one of his friends was not with them. Hearing shouting as his friend was lost in the storm, as afraid as he was of storms, he flew out into it to help guild his friend back. He found her flying around in circles shouting, Krad pushed her toward the eye of the storm the safest place to be. There they landed safely on the ground. When he got his cutie mark he was so thrilled he couldn’t stay still for days. The mark stands for his loyalty to his friends in even the worst of winds and his quick decision making to do so, as well as his speed.

History:

Krad was born in Canterlot and lived there until he was a colt. He and his parents, ShadowRunner (father) and MoonLover (mother), moved to their winter home in Cloudsdale. They stayed in Canterlot until he was stronger and more confident in his flying. He was a very good flyer. He would fly up and make shapes out of the clouds.

One day he was making a dragon cloud he got so lost in making it he didn’t realize darker clouds were gathering. One moment he’s making a tail, next he was caught in a tempest. He was blown this way and that way. He fought against the winds but when lightning struck he became blind and was thrown back into the raging winds. A strong gust of wind blew him to the ground; Krad broke his leg because of that. But that wasn’t enough a tree fell over by the storm and landed on his right wing badly fracturing the bone. As if that wasn’t enough a bolt of lightning struck little more than two yards away from him. He was pinned down trapped and he was blinded by his tears. Tears of pain and fear. He ended up blacking out.

It took a month for his wing to heal and a couple more weeks for his leg to heal. But he was traumatized he was too afraid to fly. For a Pegasus to be unable to fly is unspeakable. It worried his parent’s a great deal.

One day his parent’s took him to one of the flying contests. He watched as they performed amazing stunts and tricks. He was amazed and this made his love for flying start to return. Halfway through the competition he was flapping his wings hovering slightly. But he couldn’t hold it long his wings had grown weak. Later that day he started to train. By the time of his next birthday he back to full strength and then some. His father helped him get on the Weather Team Rain. It was his own Idea to help him get over his fears… At least slightly.

By the time he got his cutie mark he had completely gotten over his fear of storms. He left his parents to get a place of his own and to travel all over Equestria.

Character Summary:

Krad is a smart Stallion. He can be childish at times and extremely charming. He loves to try stunts whenever he can. He is very energetic and doesn’t like to stay still for too long. He likes to explore and wander around. He likes to tinker and try to build things. He also loves to try his hand at all kinds of things.

(I apologize as I don’t want to explain him too much. I would like everyone to try and find out themselves.)

Picture Ref:

[Krad1213]

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[Krad1213]

I will fix it.

[Armony]

How is this application coming along?

[Armony]

If no comment is made saying you would like to keep this application within 5 days, this thread will be locked and removed.

[Krad1213]

keep. Fixed hopefully. If any problems please inform me.

[Krad1213]

I fixed more bugs out of it.

[Corsair]

Hello Krad! I've taken a look at your application. There are some things we need to change before your character could be accepted for the World of Equestria role play.

The first thing is the name. While 'Ventus' means wind, Krad isn't a very pony name. If you shortened the name to just Ventus, it should be OK.

There's a detail in the description that I want to make a note on: You mention that your pony sometimes wears a cross on a necklace. Please keep in mind that WoE does not allow religious references. A cross can be just a cross, but it should not have any religious significance to it.

After talking to someone else in the RP Helpers, we agreed that the explanation of his cutie mark didn't make a lot of sense. Cutie Marks typically denote a pony's special talent, which in your character seems to be flying in storms. You could keep the CM story the same, but change the meaning.

In the History, the story about our pony getting caught in the storm and injured seems unnecessary. Remember that the World of Equestria RP is based around the FiM cartoon, and its unlikely the show would feature a traumatic accident like that. Even when Rainbow Dash crashed and injured her wing, she was just inconvenienced for a few days, not really hurt. I think the history could be re-written that he was always scared of storms as a foal, but after the Cutie Mark story he realized how much he liked them. Maybe add how he got his job on the Weather Team.

If you can make those changes, we can look at your application once again

[Krad1213]

I changed it to FFA.

[Corsair]

Ok, if that's really what you want to do, I can put this application through as Free-for-All.

[Krad1213]

Thanks

[RarityDash]

Have fun!