Pegasus Swift Blitz (Ready)

[NeoExlucky]

Name: Swift Blitz (Affectionately called Blitzy.)

Role play type: WOE

Age: Young Mare

Eye color: Light Blue

Mane/tail: Her mane is about medium length and is normally in some type of braid. It's colored lavender.

Coat: Midnight purple

Residence: Canterlot

Occupation: Guard-in-training

Cutie Mark: A brown Feather

Swift Blitz remembers the day she got her cutie mark like most other ponies do. When Swift Blitz was a foal she could move very quickly. In fact she was considered one of the fastest in her class. However unlike most Pegasi, who were very quick with her wings, Swift was quite slow on them. However if you were to race her on the ground, she wouldn't have trouble beating you, in fact this story involves one of the toughest races she was in.

One day during school, a couple of the Colts had challenged her to a race, her older brother, Time Spinner, normally spent his free time reading, and her twin brother, Gadget, was busying doing something with Time's toy train. So Swift Blitz was alone on the playground today and didn't have anypony keeping the colts away from her. She agreed to the race and soon they were to began. It was a short race, about 100 meters, from the slide to the light posts where the Basketball courts were. When one of the colt's little brother's said go, Swift took off, only to be met with the ground. She found that the shoes she was racing in had been tied together, and now those cheaters were getting away!

Swift hurriedly got to her hooves and tried to run again, but fell once more as she still had the shoes on. She kicked them off and scrambled to her hooves. She made a mad dash to the finish line, feeling as though she were honor-bound to be the fastest on the playground. Her legs, while very short, carried her quickly through the finish line, and more importantly, past the two colts who had tied her shoes together! She angrily gave them a piece of her mind, only to ignore something very important happening right behind, er...on her. As she finished yelling at the colts she heard one of the fillies behind her mentioning a cutie mark, she turned around and found a brown feather atop her flank, representing her speed and agility.

Unique Traits: Swift Blitz is fast and has a one-track-mind. Sometimes she'll talk without thinking.

History: Swift Blitz was born in Canterlot and was raised by her mother, Blaze Bolero, and her father, Clock Sphera. She also had two brothers, Time Spinner, an intelligent Unicorn who took after their father's looks, and her twin brother Gadget, a fun-loving pegasus who had a knack for building and repairing objects with ease. Swift Blitz was quite a tough girl, she was athletic, healthy, and would often scrap her knees outside. Blitzy could always be found doing something outside, sometimes even in the rain.

In School Swift Blitz was pretty average, academic-wise. She played a multitude of sports though and it was because of this that Swift got through most of school. During the last few years of school for her, Swift Blitz began to take notice of the guards in Canterlot and began to appreciate their work more and more. Their honorable work to make Canterlot, and possibly all of Equestria a better place made gave her a yearning feeling. She found herself wanting more and more to become just like them and, a little while after school was finished, it happened.

When Swift Blitz had just finished school she had applied to several different collages where she could learn how to be a merchant, but she had also applied to the Canterot Guard Academy. They were the first to reply, ("It's cause their the closest." Time Spinner told her.) and had accepted her. Blitzy, who was over-excited by the news, had gone straight to the academy the next day to learn what she could about being a recruit. She was told about the hard work and dedication, as well as many of the other traits that guards needed to have. After about three months of this, Swift Blitz began her training everyday, from 9 am to 9 pm she trained and still does to this day.

Military life was not hard on Swift Blitz. Granted she did have a rough time waking up early, and eating quickly, and getting yelled at for random things. ("GOOD JOB, PRIVATE BLITZ!" Yelled one Sergeant.) After the first few couple of days though, Swift easily adjusted to the swing of things, understanding the jobs she had to do, and the things she had to accomplish, soon she graduated from that lowly state, and became a guard-in-training. A guard-in-training is basically a guard, but is often set on certain posts and routes to learn hoofs-on. She lives in a cozy house not to far from "History in the making".

Character Summery:

Swift Blitz is very strong, using her strength to overcome any possible problem put ahead of her. She values honor above most other things will serve her family and fellow citizens of Canterlot with little to no complaints. She is very lawful Good, and always wants to do the right thing. Sometimes she'll even push others to do the right thing when they don't want to as well.

Swift Blitz has always been a socialite, talking to other ponies with ease has been a skill she seems to have been born with, though she hates talking in front of crowds and giving speeches as these can cause her to panic. Swift Blitz can be very animated, showing a variety of emotions from Happiness to Sadness, to anger, to fear. She despises ponies who make fun of others, and when it comes to showing off, well, often times it's Swift doing it herself. If it isn't then she might just try to make herself better.

Swift Blitz loves working with her brothers and can often be found with one of them or could be found at the training garrison. She is very good friends with several others and is always willing to make more friends. Swift suffers from Glossophobia or the fear of public speaking and sometimes when she's making a scene this can lead to some awkward moments for her. She enjoys Honorable decisions, athletic subjects, armor, stores, family, and friendship.

"Let's get to it then!"

[Frost137]

Hey! I voice actor this pony!

Don't forget the mane description! (You probably edited by now or I didn't see it so, derp.)

Keep up the good work!

[Bellosh]

Here's your friendly neighborhood RP Helper! All in all, this app's pretty good. Just two things though:

• Please remove the reference to video games is removed, as they are too technologically advanced for the setting depicted in WoE.
  
• You might want to expand a little more on how your OC fares as a recruit in training. What issues does she have adjusting to military life? Does she expect a long-term career in the army? Why did she apply to a guard academy when she was more interested in becoming a merchant?
  

I'll take another look once the requested changes have been made.

[NeoExlucky]

Here's your friendly neighborhood RP Helper! All in all, this app's pretty good. Just two things though:

• Please remove the reference to video games is removed, as they are too technologically advanced for the setting depicted in WoE.
  
• You might want to expand a little more on how your OC fares as a recruit in training. What issues does she have adjusting to military life? Does she expect a long-term career in the army? Why did she apply to a guard academy when she was more interested in becoming a merchant?
  

I'll take another look once the requested changes have been made.

Alright all cleared up.

[Armony]