Golden Sky [Ready]

[GoldenSky]

Roleplay Type: World of Equestria

Name: Golden Sky

Sex: Female

Age: Teen

Species: Griffon

Eye Colour: Amber

Coat:  Golden Sky has a Golden Tiger's coat. She keeps it silky and soft with great care. The stripes are a dark gray color and the main color of the coat is more of an amber than the usual strawberry-blonde. As the amber nears the belly area, it lightens to a cream color.

Mane/Tail: She has a number of feathers that curl over her forehead. They're dyed three different colors: red, blue and green. Her tail is the standard tiger's tail; complete with black stripes and a light orange color. Golden Sky also likes to wear a rainbow-colored ribbon around her tail. It trails along when she walks or flies.

Physique: Golden Sky is small compared to other griffons, but her build is rather muscular. Her wings are a little big compared to her body and her wingspan is much longer than her body.

Residence: Not Applicable (Golden Sky travels so often because of her job that she doesn't really settle down anywhere)

Occupation: Private Investigator

Cutie Mark: Not Applicable

History:

Born in Rockwington, Golden Sky comes from a family of four. Her older sister, Silver Sky, works as part of the ambulance squad and is 6 years older than she is. Despite that, the duo have always been close and Golden Sky has always lived a rather normal life. Of course, because her life was normal and dull, Golden Sky longed for danger and adventure! This longing was what set her off on her journey in hopes of getting a nice job somewhere once she was old enough to leave her family. While she was a griffon and would be entering pony territory, Golden Sky had a feeling she would be fine because she never let anything get her down. Sure, an insult would get her angry, but she'd never feel as though it were true.

During her journey, she met many kind griffons and ponies and greeted them all the same. When she encountered mean company, she'd treat them as though their insults meant nothing. If they were particularly nasty, Golden Sky would retort with a nasty comment and she would either be left alone or a large fight would ensue. Thanks to her small body, however, she was much quicker than her opponents and always got away. Once Golden Sky reached Canterlot, she ended up crashing into a pony and when she apologized, the pony pushed her down and ran off in a hurry! Golden Sky was so angered and insulted by this that she decided to report the pony to the police but when she got there, she saw the same exact pony! Golden Sky demanded to know why he had pushed her down earlier and the pony introduced himself as Clandé Stïne (anypony can take this character and use him if they'd like~), a private investigator working on a puzzling case with the Canterlot police. He explained that he had been chasing down a suspect when the duo crashed into each other but Golden Sky wasn't even listening. As soon as Clandé said he was working on a case, Golden Sky jumped to help them out.

She asked to help and at first Clandé refused since she was a griffon and had no business in pony affairs. Golden Sky pouted but then asked what would happen if a griffon was involved in the case. Clandé replied that if that were true, the case would be something both ponies and griffons would have to investigate. Golden Sky took this information and stored it away with a grin before marching out of the precinct to investigate. She was investigating the crime scene when she came upon a feather stuffed in the wheel of a cart. A griffon feather. Golden Sky smiled at this new piece of evidence and carefully used a bag and gloves to preserve it for the police. She flew back to the precinct before any guards around the crime scene could find her and shoved it in Clandé Stïne's face. After this new evidence revealed itself, Clandé reluctantly let Golden Sky join in on the investigation since it would be faster than going to griffon territory and asking for some griffon police. (In reality, he couldn't say no to Golden Sky's 'please face'.) And so, the duo began to search through the suspect list for anyone who could have left the feather and stopped at two possible suspects. An elderly grandmother who had been shopping at the grocery store right next to the crime scene and a young teenager who was playing ball with his friends at the park across from the grocery store. While all the clues pointed to the young griffon, Golden Sky couldn't help but see the grandmother as suspicious. She was the one who had called the authorities about the bank robber but she was also the one to accuse little Clawde. Just as Clandé was about to arrest Clawde, Golden Sky stopped him.

She explained that it couldn't have been Clawde as he was nowhere near the crime scene at the time. His friends vouched for him. Clandé claimed this wasn't enough since Clawde's friends could be lying to protect him but Golden Sky pulled out the feather again. It was white, unlike Clawde's brown feathers. Clandé gasped when he realized his mistake; he had forgotten about the feather's color and rushed to find the elderly griffon who was trying to make her escape. Golden Sky wasn't about to let her escape so she flew up and tackled the griffon down so hard, the grandmother's wig fell off! This was when everyone gasped at the realization that the grandmother wasn't a grandmother, but a full grown, adult male! Clandé arrested him for two charges: false testimony and robbery. He thanked Golden Sky for her help and took the robber to the precinct for a proper trial. Meanwhile, Clawde thanked Golden Sky for saving his tail and she just waved it off. "It's nothing. Just doin' my job!" she said. It was true. She now knew what she wanted to do! Golden Sky decided from that point on to be a private investigator!

Character Summary:

Golden Sky was always called 'talented' by her family but she had a hard time believing it. She can sing, write stories, imitate voices, solve mysteries/cases very easily, draw, and even play an instrument. Despite these talents, Golden Sky has many flaws. She can't dance, she gets distracted easily, is a tad impatient, and has trouble making friends because of her shyness around new faces. Her friends also say she's kind, caring, fiercely loyal, polite, and rather smart but Golden Sky dismisses these and counters them with the traits that most would consider bad. She's rather lazy when it comes to things she's not interested in (paperwork, historical tales, non-fiction books, and much more), short-tempered, cocky at times, proud, and often ends up doing something bad because she succumbs to the temptation. She does feel the guilt but she's also rather forgetful, so she'll forget she did anything wrong and Golden Sky ends up getting away with it.

[Bellosh]

Since World of Equestria portrays itself as a setting that closely mirrors that of the show itself, not many liberties can be taken with regards to technology. Thus, ponies and griffons should be pulling their own carriages/carts/chariots instead of driving around in cars, while home TVs and game consoles are non-existent. If the showrunners of FiM consistently demonstrate that these items are not in everyday use in FiM's setting, then they shouldn't be incorporated into our canon-friendly RP as well (and no, we do not count technology that appears during gag sequences).

But even though you'll have to remove all instances of advanced tech in your app, everything else seems to be in good order. Just get rid of the car and TV references, and I'll be able to move this app along.

[GoldenSky]

Fixed and thank you~

[Armony]