Moon View(Ready :D)

[FlamingFury]

Name: Moon View

Gender: Stallion

Age: Colt

Species: Moon View is a winged Pegasus

Eye colour: Moon's eyes are a lovely Green

Character colour: Like his eyes, Moon is a green, though a Pale Green instead of normal green

Mane/Tail/Other: Moon View has a Black and Red mane which is unkempt at the front but at the back it is slick. His tail is short and cut straight with a single spiral stripe on the tail. His tail is also Black and Red like his mane.

Physique: Moon is a bit taller then most of the colts his age, and although he is tall, he is also pretty slim for a colt his age.

Residence: Moon lives in Ponyvile with his twin sister Starwind, Mother Shadow Blade and Father Stormchaser

Occupation: Moon is a student at the Ponyvile school.

Cutie Mark: Moon View is a Blank Flank in search of his talent.

Unique Traits: Moon View can navigate using the stars and his sextant, a tool that measures the horizon and helps with navigation.

History: Moon View was born under a night sky. As he had opened his eyes the first sight he would see would be his dad, Stormchaser, staring into his eyes with a wide smile. Moon View's first action would be at that moment, when he crawled into his fathers mane. Moon View would craw straight into it, but he would end up lifting his head out and staring at the night sky until he fell asleep. When Moon View woke up the next day, he would enjoy the time he was awake playing with his twin sister, Starwind. Moon had a close bond with his sister, not only as family but as they shared a similar interest, the stars. They both had great interest in the night sky and the beauty of it. As Moon view grew up his interest would keep increasing, often causing him to stay awake for sleepless nights, just watching the stars though as a expected result, he would pretty much sleep through the next day from start to finish, and sometimes even for a full day and night, waking up two days later. One time when he did this a prank had been pulled by one of his friends. His friend had snuck into his room and had changed his clock, making it seem like he had only been out for one day. When Moon found out he had thought it as a funny prank, and he got his friend back at school a few weeks later by putting a loud alarm right in his bag.

Moon Lived this way for a fair few years before one year his parents decieded to help change his life for the better. When it reached his birthday Moon would be so excited. This was his favorite time all year, when all his friends came over and enjoyed the day. This was a birthday different then the rest though, this one was one he would remember for the rest of his life. Around the middle of the party Storm would approach him along with his mother,Shadow. Moon would be pretty upset when they interrupted his fun, but when he saw the box that would change. His impatience would turn to wonder, then as it was opened it would turn to joy. Moon would instantly jump straight onto his parents, giving them a massive hug before running too his room with the gift from his parents. It was a sextant. Moon wanted soooo much to use it then and their, though he would leave it behind as he ran back to finish his party.

As the night came around he would wake up and run straight to where he put the gift, and sure enough it was there. For the next few weeks Moon would pull all nighters while using her new item. She would learn how to use it pretty fast, and she also became pretty good at it.

Although he had lived a happy life, he also had a few troubles. Moon was obedient, he never disobeyed his parents and the one time he did was because he had no choice, it was either do this or let his sisters torment continue. As he snuck out Moon would go straight with his sister to where the bully had told her to meet him. Star had been Blackmailed into doing all his homework and assignments. Star had been told to meet him here so she could give it all to him. As they arrived instead of Star being there, it would be moon. When the two got back at home past midnight, Stormchaser would yell at the two for a full hour before they all went to sleep.

Since then Moon has not been disobedient again, he has had no reason too. Moon now just wants to study the stars in hopes of learning enough to start a school.

Character Summary/Personality: Moon is a very kind Pegasus, often being on of the first ponies to go to help anyone in trouble. If a pony is hurt, Moon often moves a lot faster then she normally does. Moon View often helps the elderly around Ponyvile with there jobs, chores or whatever they need help with. Moon is also probably one of the most obedient ponies that you could meet. She never says no to anything her elders tell him too do, and when they do ask him to do something he does it without stupid questions like 'Why?'. The questions he will normally ask is "Where do you want this?" And stuff like that, questions that help him get it done without causing a problem. Moon View, although he is pretty slim he is also very quick and agile for a colt his age. Moon has on more then one occasion races in the Sister hooves social and he has even come first a few times. Moon loves to run around, other then studying the night sky and using his sextant it is probably one of his favorite things to do. Moon View also loves to help out any pony in need, not always just because of his kindness, but as it just who he is, a helpful young colt with big dreams. Moon view wishes to , when he is older, make a school to. He plans to name it after the night sky, the name he has chose is 'Night Sky'. Moon View is also a blank flank in search of his cutie mark. Before he starts a school Moon is going to make sure he has his cutie mark. Moons goal in life is still unknown to him, the only thing certain is that when he grows up he wants to be able to share the wonders of the stars with others.

[stormchaser1991]

i believe this He is obedient unlike his twin sister,Starwind, he has only snuck out once to prevent his sister's bully. He is very over protective. He one day wants to start a school. would be part of his personality

[FlamingFury]

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[DerpRavener]

The character is going to need a lot more development of the history and character summary sections. Do you have any ideas for how you might want to expand those?

I'm also seeing a number of grammatical errors.

[Mojo]

Hi there!

I see you've taken DerpRavener great advice! This app looks great, all of the required fields are filled and it's very well written!

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[Bellosh]