BeGoneThots Posted September 6, 2015 Report Share Posted September 6, 2015 dead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeGoneThots Posted September 7, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2015 Ok i think this one is ready. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blueblood Posted September 8, 2015 Report Share Posted September 8, 2015 Hello! There's a couple of misspellings that I spotted ('Eings' 'apprentice ship') that you might want to go back and take care of. Normally, the section labeled 'Bio' here comes after the history, as 'Character Summary.' I don't see his cutie mark story here; if you elaborate on it, I think it'll be ready to go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeGoneThots Posted September 8, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2015 Fixed it!! How is that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blueblood Posted September 8, 2015 Report Share Posted September 8, 2015 Looks nice! I'll pass it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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